The Archean Legend: I Am the Sword God of This Era

You can still watch it, brothers!

It's just so-so. I hope the author will take a look at the suggestions. The author hasn't found his own way. Fans don't rely on imitation, they have to have their own ideas. Unfortunately, I haven't seen the author make a breakthrough in this area. There is also the body of gods and demons, which is the physical constitution, which can also be sublimated, just like other novels and other physical bodies. If the author has imagination, he can sublimate it again. The other one is that it is really eye-catching to understand the sword power. I don't know what the author's idea is. In Chapter 7, he understands the sword power at the age of fifteen, and then in Chapter 9, he understands the sword power again at the age of seventeen. The next few chapters are about understanding the power of the sword. Your writing is really... I suggest you, the author, read novels similar to the kendo genre and broaden your horizons to think big: such as sword power, sword intention, sword domain, sword rules (laws), kendo. You can also add concepts from predecessors who wrote about loneliness and invincibility in the middle, or other things, and then your novel may be alive. Don't stare at the original work and insist on imitating the original work. It will not be able to escape from the original work, and it will not be very effective. It is just a copycat copying the original work and making a joke. Also, there is no need to suppress the protagonist to grow with the original protagonist. The original protagonist has his own growth, and your protagonist should also have his own growth, so that the novel can stand out and follow his own path. Of course, if the concept of your novel is better than the original work, then you should pay attention to your own rights and stop picking peaches for others, but it also depends on the author whether you have the confidence and literary talent. Personal opinion, if you don't like it, just let it go.

I feel like this book is pretty good

It's beautiful. It's rare to read a fanfic of Cang Yuan Tu. This one is really wonderful.

Brother, please give me one more chapter. I'm dying. Please, brother. I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please, brother, just give me one more chapter. Just one more chapter. I'll never touch it again. Please, brother. Really, just one chapter. I swear I'll never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore.

It's not easy. It's hard for Tomato to have a fan of Cang Yuan Tu. Come on and write! Support you

It's so well written. I hope the author will work harder.

I haven't read the original work, but the fanfic looks pretty good. I hope the author won't stop updating 😳

I just want to say that the plot moves forward really fast!

Come on, author, this book is very interesting. I look forward to the plot in the future.