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It's better to make the protagonist's character smarter and more funny so that the plot doesn't seem boring. Everything feels very bland now. It's basically the same as a Siheyuan I read before.

I've read three of these. It was because my father ran away and lived in the master's house. Then I met a master who knew martial arts. I met him for a few days and gave him money for the house. . .

It's a bit strange. You know you're going to cut off contact with the capitalists, but you turn around and hang out with Chen Xueru? Did you take off your pants and fart? The Lou family has supported the country at least, but the Chen Xueru family is very complicated. There is another TV series. Chen's father is a super landowner and capitalist. The eldest brother joins the skinhead gang and the second brother seems to have died. Isn't there something wrong with a woman opening a high-end silk shop in an era of cannibalism without any interruption? This shows that the background is quite good. Why not marry someone who is not a character in the plot? ? ?

The experience-increasing system involves learning to cook, learn martial arts, encounter enemy agents, and obtain treasures. Were you guided by a mentor? What happened to the beginning of a time travel story and then it turned into a rebirth story?

The lines are obscure, the plot is confusing, the content of the story has nothing to do with the title, and I don't know how you drafted the outline. You have no life experience, and the content of the story probably doesn't take into account the historical background. Writing a book is not for you, so give up.

The plot is very slow, and one thing is mentioned repeatedly. Since we are a time traveler in the 1950s, there is no rigid system at all. Can't we be more straightforward when facing the people in the courtyard? You have moved out, you can just sell the house and get away from these people. Since there is a system, you can't go to heaven!

I don't like this kind of courtyard home the most. Give it an awesome system and an awesome martial arts... Even a few old men can't do it... Seto has to keep watching. Abandon the book decisively

Let me ask you weakly, can you stand it?

Don't save anyone at the beginning! You can't write if you learn Wuyi, right? I've read so many books and they all write like this! Would you like to change the plot a bit when you copy it? No change at all!

This book was either written by a robot, or it was copied from someone else. I have read another book that is exactly the same as this one, with some slight changes in the plot.

We read fast food articles to feel refreshed, not to feel frustrated.

What is this written?

There is no innovation at all, and there is no classic. In the future, the author will not write too boring. I will be tired after reading it. Goodbye to you.

There are hundreds of books on this model on the Internet, and it's time to take the college entrance examination to become an engineer.

Assembly line article, I have read more than ten books of this routine in Tomato.

The next few chapters were completely wrong, the copying was messed up, and the master became the father-in-law! ! ! ! ! !

I can't understand even if I copy it, I'm blind in vain