Cry! I Turned into a Lolita and Was Bullied by a Yandere Every Day.

Um? A cute white-haired loli fights against a tsundere and aloof lady? This maozi will definitely receive rave reviews from you!

The author has greatly improved his talents, but the writing style is not enough and the plot is not coherent enough. The writing should be more even, unimportant parts can be omitted, and the main content should be written in more detail, otherwise the contrast will be strong and the plot jumps too fast. In terms of character creation, the characters at the beginning are not explained carefully, and they are only known later. Moreover, the characters' personalities are not obvious, and they change almost in every chapter, giving people a feeling of being out of context. The article is quite satisfactory. People who like to read it will find it very interesting, but those who don't like to read it will find it ugly. I hope the author will continue to work hard

This may be Maozi's only book that has not been sealed until it is finished [laughing]

What a great book, thousands of words condensed into two words, wc! The characters are also very well developed, and most importantly, this book is super sweet!

Then let me give you an evaluation. Advantages: 1. The plot is clean and not procrastinating, and the wording is probably at the level between high school and college. 2. Putting aside the emotional drama, almost everyone in the whole drama has a distinct and full personality (except for one line, thank you). 3. I also have selfish motives, I love reading lesbian novels ~ Disadvantages: 1. The emotional drama is a bit tortuous and not fully written. 2. Although the whole book is not slow, it is not thoughtful enough. If you read mystery novels every day, it is not recommended to read it too seriously. 3. The ending is easy to read and hard to understand. After all, the ending says that two people are gods. It is clear, and there is no explanation of the system. Although the product itself is not easy to explain [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh], 4 the pace is a bit fast, and there are some omissions. This is not good, and it will not adapt to a small number of readers, so it is difficult to earn recommendation points. Summary: The book is not bad. It has adjectives and verbs, basically all of them. After reading it, you will find that there is not much new idea in the whole book, but the lack of intention is the greatest intention. I believe the author can do the same! Come on~

It's a good book, the characters are full and vivid, and it's quite sweet. In the story, the two gods Yun tide and Gu Yu experienced the struggle from master and servant (?) To love as mortals, and finally found their own happiness. This kind of character setting and plot arrangement make the story more fascinating. If more foreshadowing can be added to the story (less Riddler!), The final twist will be more understandable and acceptable to QAQ. In addition, the plot can easily become confusing and repetitive in the later stages, beating → being beaten → rescuing people, etc. It feels like it's easy to consume readers' enthusiasm. Anyway, thank you so much for the author😌👌

The writing is so beautiful, especially the heroine and the little lolita. So cute!

It's a very interesting Gao Wu Lily article. I'm used to reading urban sweet Lily articles. This kind of article can bring a novel feeling. Although the storyline may not be particularly smooth and the writing style lacks spirituality, I quite like the characters of the two protagonists [Adoration] If you like these two characters, you can follow them further.

Well done, well done. It's been a long time since I've encountered a book that made me stay up until four o'clock to read it.

It looks good, but it's great. The plot you conceived seems to be a bit inconsistent, and some parts are a bit unclear and vague. But overall, it's still very good to watch. After all, I'm obsessed with this character.

Not bad, stupid loli. It just seems to be gradually developing towards a strong female character [smile]. Don't like it very much

Urine is the teardrop of the bladder, fart is the sigh of the anus Circulation is the freedom of feces, constipation is the retention of the large intestine Phlegm is the whisper of the trachea, cough is the protest of the throat Sneezing is the sudden attack of the nasal cavity, and nasal congestion is the hesitation of the passage Tinnitus is the whisper of the ears, myopia is the blur of the eyeballs Dizziness is the drift of the head, insomnia is the obsession with the night Cold sweat is the fear of the skin, and rash is the temper of the pores Chilblains are the mark of cold winter, prickly heat is the congestion of hot summer Headache is the cry of nerves, backache is the tiredness of bones Stomach pain is the grievance of the intestines and stomach, and cramps are the rebellion of the muscles. Hiccups are the naughtiness of the diaphragm, and teeth grinding is the game of teeth. Snoring is the sound sleep of the breath, sleep talking is the murmur of the soul Gray hair is the trace of time, wrinkles are the mark of time Scars are medals from the past, pain is a reminder of life Every silent signal hides the truest rhythm of life The above content has nothing to do with this book

Excluding the ending, the whole novel is actually quite good, but the ending is a bit confusing. It seems that the love between two people is actually a gamble between two gods hiding their memories. In short, the love between these two people is quite sweet. After reading the novel, regardless of the incomprehensible parts, this novel still leaves a good impression on the readers. It is a sweet article.

It's okay, I can read it ten lines at a time and really see a story [pouts] The ending is unpredictable! There is no process for doing things, bad review! [Pinch][pinch] -2024.6.14 10:32

The review is like being hypnotized, the plot is crazy, I like it very much (ω)

Let's give the author a five-star rating. After all, all coders should be praised. However, my simple evaluation of this article is that it is pretty good from the beginning to the middle, but from the middle onwards, there is an awkward feeling of right and wrong. Everyone knows what to read. Of course, everyone has different opinions and cannot be generalized. I am just talking about my own impressions. As for the latter part, it lacks a lot. The actual evaluation of the overall article is that it has improved over time.

Please, Yunxi is so cute (supermarket supermarket)

The introduction of the novel is the same as the content and plot of the novel. The author also achieved perfect attendance and did not miss a single day. The emotions of Gu Yu and Yun tide can also be felt by readers, and the plot of the story can also make people imagine the picture. The content of this novel is different from the novels I have read before. When I read it, I had the following feelings: before: it was okay, during: it was a bit boring, and after: it was exciting and good. This novel is very interesting and very good. I recommend

The ending is not bad, the characters are very likable, not bad, congratulations, the ending is a blessing [send heart][love]

A very good novel that had me spinning.

It's beautiful, I love reading it, it's a great idea, and the foreshadowing is great.

The storyline is ups and downs, lively and interesting. The characters have distinct personalities. The relationship between attack and reception will be reversed. I personally recommend

Good! Good! Good! @Bigfootdinosaur @ Lily @ Floating World Life is Prosperous 1

I never expected the ending when I saw it. Overall it's very interesting to read, but I'm not good at reading Chinese and couldn't understand some of the plots. I hope the author can write more details in the future.

This book is very good. This is the first time I heard about two female protagonists here. I feel pretty good about it, hahaha.

The CPU is too messed up and the brain circuit cannot be turned around at all. Fortunately, HE, there is no big problem, the author's voice is very good. . . Cute. Are you short of children? ⊂(ο･㉨･ο)⊃

Five-star praise! Big support for the author ヽ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ

Very good book, kept me up late reading

This is the only novel that I have read from beginning to end. It has many plot points and is not boring at all. It deserves a five-star rating!

It's very good. This is my first review for this novel.