Genshin Impact: Elegy

I give five stars to support the new author, but unfortunately the pace of this book is still a bit fast. In fact, it could be written more about daily life. My impression of the second volume from the executive officer is that Biu's Mondstadt plot is over, and Biu's Ina Wife's plot is also foreshadowed, so again Biu The plot of U's Liyue is also over. To be honest, I don't think I can write much about the next two countries, Xumi and Fengdan. It probably passed in an instant. I won't talk about the subsequent plots. After all, the author's own book has his own ideas. I am just a spectator. Come on, author, and be optimistic about you.

The storyline is quite good. Just a little more. There are always some setbacks when starting a new journey, don't give up. Come on, come on, the story is great. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Not bad, I hope there is no female protagonist

It's still okay. I haven't seen any poisonous points for the time being. Pig's Knuckle has a pretty good character. I think it can be a little more ruthless. Anyway, just don't meddle in other people's business. This is what I don't like to see the most. I wish the author better and better.

Come on, come on, come on But... Author, you should be more positive. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this.

It's quite interesting. I was stunned for a moment when I heard the protagonist's official speech (I felt like I was back on the news broadcast). The war that followed had the flavor of WW2 ~ and Eternal Winter revealed Su's feelings everywhere. The Titan was also a surprise (compared to the original version of the God-like Heart that resurrected the dragon to fight the gods, this version is also good) I just feel that the Abyss didn't play a big role (where are the people of Dain? What about Kyria?). The foreshadowing is a bit unfilled, and the ending is a bit too fast. Teyvat is suddenly unified (obviously the other six countries were forced to participate in the war, there must be resentment, how did you convince the people to unify afterwards) Also, the character of the protagonist is a bit fragmented. Ivan's previous life did not have a high level of education, and he lived in a relatively closed small village in Teyvat. He lived among fools for at most two or three years. How did he grow into a shrewd politician in such a short period of time? Moreover, the protagonist once said in his inner monologue that he is not good at interacting with people, but it can be seen from his behavior that he is an excellent diplomat [face covering] Although there are many shortcomings, overall it is still very good! Come on!

It would be good to cut out Part 1 and re-open it. The protagonist's background story and hunt at the beginning are filled in as a lonely sad person. For example, in the world of swords and magic, it would be good to write a lonely journey.

The writing is true enough, very good

Good looking, good luck to the author

This book feels very good! Big cheers for the author

Updates have been very frequent recently. Five stars is a comfort. It's not meant to urge updates, otherwise I wouldn't be able to watch it.

Ah , please update quickly good luck [ send my heart ]

Come on, author! It's so beautiful. It's been a long time since I've found something so interesting to me [Blow kiss]

The writing is very good, but I don't know why Ivan's job title is "minister" in the feudal era while [the rich man] is the minister of economy

Not bad, but I can't control the pace of writing the book well.

The author's writing is so serious that I couldn't bear to give a low score after reading it.

Not bad, I really like the battle of wits in it

So pretty! I haven't seen such a good fanfic in a long time, and it's good to have a logical plot! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

The character design is very good and the plot is intelligent.

Okay, it's pretty good-looking.

I suddenly realized that I had read Chapter 96 and I hadn't written a book review yet.

Meow meow meow, meow meow meow

Full marks plus! Suits my taste

Good to watch, watch more, love to watch [sending heartfelt wishes]

Not bad, cheers for the author

There's no way, it's too pitiful, there's no rating now

So far, it's still very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

The storyline is pretty good, and the main character is really heartwarming

Please take my knees, they look great!

Very good. If you don't know how to write it, you can review the plot and support it with 5 hearts.