Genshin Impact: Elegy

I give five stars to support the new author, but unfortunately the pace of this book is still a bit fast. In fact, it could be written more about daily life. My impression of the second volume from the executive officer is that Biu's Mondstadt plot is over, and Biu's Ina Wife's plot is also foreshadowed, so again Biu The plot of U's Liyue is also over. To be honest, I don't think I can write much about the next two countries, Xumi and Fengdan. It probably passed in an instant. I won't talk about the subsequent plots. After all, the author's own book has his own ideas. I am just a spectator. Come on, author, and be optimistic about you.

The storyline is quite good. Just a little more. There are always some setbacks when starting a new journey, don't give up. Come on, come on, the story is great. 💕💕💕

Not bad, I hope there is no female protagonist

It's still okay. I haven't seen any poisonous points for the time being. Pig's Knuckle has a pretty good character. I think it can be a little more ruthless. Anyway, just don't meddle in other people's business. This is what I don't like to see the most. I wish the author better and better.

It's quite interesting. I was stunned for a moment when I heard the protagonist's official speech (I felt like I was back on the news broadcast). The war that followed had the flavor of WW2 ~ and Eternal Winter revealed Su's feelings everywhere. The Titan was also a surprise (compared to the original version of the God-like Heart that resurrected the dragon to fight the gods, this version is also good) I just feel that the Abyss didn't play a big role (where are the people of Dain? What about Kyria?). The foreshadowing is a bit unfilled, and the ending is a bit too fast. Teyvat is suddenly unified (obviously the other six countries were forced to participate in the war, there must be resentment, how did you convince the people to unify afterwards) Also, the character of the protagonist is a bit fragmented. Ivan's previous life did not have a high level of education, and he lived in a relatively closed small village in Teyvat. He lived among fools for at most two or three years. How did he grow into a shrewd politician in such a short period of time? Moreover, the protagonist once said in his inner monologue that he is not good at interacting with people, but it can be seen from his behavior that he is an excellent diplomat 🤦 Although there are many shortcomings, overall it is still very good! Come on!

Come on, come on, come on But... Author, you should be more positive. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this.

It would be good to cut out Part 1 and re-open it. The protagonist's background story and hunt at the beginning are filled in as a lonely sad person. For example, in the world of swords and magic, it would be good to write a lonely journey.

This book feels very good! Big cheers for the author

Good looking, good luck to the author

The writing is true enough, very good