No Game No Life: Zero, Becoming a God from the Start

Every time I read your comments with fear and anticipation. I look forward to your criticism, and I am afraid that some ideas will not be recognized. Come on! Everyone! Criticize more directly and fiercely! The harder you scold me now, the more comfortable and happy you will be when you read my next book! I am determined to fight to the end with Game of Life Zero. If you don't like this one, it doesn't matter. I will try my best to make you like my next one.

Five points are for Game Life Zero fanfic. The whole article is filled with the Virgin, the abuser, the humble, the threatened, and the overflowing sympathy. Oh, by the way, although there are descriptions of lesbians, the description feels like the protagonist has been cuckolded. The protagonist is incompetent and furious, and is suspected of having a cuckold fetish. Well, I don't care about being a cuckold. After all, I always read cuckold and green slave articles in the moderators. It's still very cool to be a pornographic person. I just like the way the bitter protagonist is furious at being green and incompetent. This review has guiding value I'm pretty drug-resistant. After all, I haven't gotten mad yet after seeing the latest chapter, but I don't want to add to the bookshelf. I'll check it out later.

It's okay, but if you don't have 50 or 100 pictures, you just open a double main line. A new writer can't control it. It's very annoying to meet fellow villagers in another world. As a god, you still say you are arrogant. If you are arrogant, why are you talking nonsense to humans? Just check the memories of these fellow villagers. Maybe he's not a fellow, of course I haven't watched it, and I'm not sure about the later ones. Who keeps taking photos there, I think it's quite poisonous, and there is unlimited leakage of information. This is my current impression, but it is at least better than 80% of Tomato novels. There are some places like public toilets where everyone can use them. If you really want to write a novel, it's not easy to be logical. It's quite rare. Keep up the good work, I will jump to 60 pictures directly.

When writing fan fiction, you also need to create emotions. I really don't know what a poisonous spot is. Even if you make the protagonist more cold-blooded and dark, not many people will say that the setting of the two-dimensional world is different after all. But if the three-dimensional chaos enters the world, why should I read a cool novel? I would just watch Youth University Study.

It was originally a very good subject, but you wrote it with more clothes and more personal couplets. The fantasy of traveling to the world of Disbod was instantly gone. It can be imagined that in the future, we will write about the old routine of dealing with various Blue Star humans, but this is not what we want to see.

To be honest, I came here because of the game life and the invincibility, but you, the protagonist, give people a very frustrated feeling, just like the male protagonist of Asasi in Japanese comics, just, very disgusting, I really can't bear it

Samsung is for game life. To be honest, it is disgusting. The existence of human nature... This is not aboriginal human beings (to be honest, in which period, they were quite simple and just wanted to live, unlike modern people, it's hard to say). This is modern human beings. They can walk around in existences called doors at will. I really don't know what the value of the protagonist is. Just to wear more clothes, to be honest, I just PS it out in my heart. No matter how good your writing is, but the front Writing like this won't achieve much. Again, I don't understand the point of introducing multiple worlds (modern times). To me, it's like a plate of delicious desserts with * on it. It's disgusting (you can't grasp the human nature of the author after all, unless it's better to completely cut off the protagonist's thoughts, at least there will be new bonds). Otherwise, you will not deepen the official involvement in the future, even dogs will not believe it, and then it will be a lot of bullshit.

The writing style is average, the logic of the writing is unclear, and some paragraphs use wrong words. The protagonist is a god. He clearly despises the power of most races and is humble, but he actually has a plot similar to that of a suffering master. Even though we are weak, it is still okay to destroy a city, right? Is it okay to make the protagonist tougher???? It's really hard to stand up to other people who are far inferior to your own race. The subject matter is very good, but the writing is "unsatisfactory". There is still room for improvement. I admire your courage to choose an unpopular subject. Think carefully before writing, rather than writing whatever comes to mind. The first twenty chapters can dissuade half of the readers, and then by chapter fifty they dissuade the remaining half. In the end, less than a quarter of the readers are still reading. To be honest, I really need to change the content of the first thirty chapters and write the first three chapters better so that people can continue to read them.

Don't add a bunch of miscellaneous things to fan fiction! It's very embarrassing😓😓😓😓, what do you think? The more I read, the weirder [something] becomes. The behavior of the protagonist is also very confusing. I would like to ask the author to read more fanfics. Also, the setting has deviated from the game life. After watching it for a long time, I feel that it has nothing to do with the game life. The entry point of the prequel as the protagonist is also not right.

It looks a bit messy, but I can't tell why. It feels like there are a lot of things going on, including human species asylum, 270W of the same kind, human conjoined bodies and so on, and rescue teams and so on. There is no need to describe the last three, which takes up a lot of space and is of little use. After all, what is needed are people with the same brains as Rick and Sora. In the world of Zero, human beings such as magic, physical skills, and technology are all crushed. A head-on confrontation will only lead to death. However, considering The identity of the protagonist's god species... Well, I don't know, but I'm sure it's not to my taste. But I still want to thank you, because you make me want to play the game again. Your courage in choosing unpopular themes is worthy of recognition. Thank you for appearing on my homepage. See you later.