Game Life Zero Starts as a God

Every time I read your comments with fear and anticipation. I look forward to your criticism, and I am afraid that some ideas will not be recognized. Come on! Everyone! Criticize more directly and fiercely! The harder you scold me now, the more comfortable and happy you will be when you read my next book! I am determined to fight to the end with Game of Life Zero. If you don't like this one, it doesn't matter. I will try my best to make you like my next one.

It's quite nice, but it's a pity that it doesn't seem to have a single female lead. I don't like harem stories, so I probably won't continue reading.

I can only read Chapter 12. It's still too toxic for me to wear it more.

As a fan of Game of Life, I don't have any major shortcomings, so I can look forward to the future. At present, I feel that the content of the article is a bit scattered. I feel that I can try to define the general framework first and then expand it.

The strength curve is too bad. So far, I haven't seen any way to overtake other gods. Even if you fight for qualifications, you can't compete. Dropping one star is too frustrating and threatening. This is not the way to write about growth. Even if you give a big move that can be used once a year to make these gods less presumptuous, it will not affect the growth of the protagonist. Semi-invincibility does not mean being inferior to one person, but never being defeated.

Judging from the new book, it's not bad, but the People's League is a bit too much. Does the protagonist have the heart to have a relationship with a politician? [Laughs and cries]. Also, the human species in this world can be taken as subordinates, but the best they can do with the People's Alliance is cooperation. They can honestly be sent here to explore, and their loyalty should be the same as that of agents. Maybe they can stab them in the back. Also, the protagonist's mind is really not too naive, not quite like the male protagonist of a male channel. Anyone who lives in today's society will understand it more or less, especially the protagonist's life was not very good, and he should be more mature. The so-called growth of a person only occurs in an instant. From a child to a young man, he only grows up. Growth does not take too long. It is just experience. Now the protagonist has finally grown up a lot, and if he cuts a knife at this time, he feels like he can really grow up. Of course, the author still has his own ideas on how to write. Come on, author [Like]

There is really no need to contact humans. There are many excellent races. The original humans are so dazzling because they are works created by humans. Once humans become stronger, their selfishness, laziness, and various shortcomings will be completely exposed.

Five stars are given to Game Life. This theme is too rare. I personally like this theme very much. However, it's so frustrating to watch. When will the protagonist really stand up? It's painful. The author should stop doing it and speed up. I can only come back in a month or two to see how your writing is going. I hope you can stand up, come on!

The writing is very good [blowing kiss], but I heard others say that bookmarks are semi-invincible? It feels like it doesn't fit the content. I've read Chapter 90 and I feel like I'm either being beaten or on the way to being beaten [covering my face] when I'm angry! ... Angry [shocked]? The plug-in was also broken in half [Petrochemical]. If you like the plot, I personally think this book is 5 stars [please give me more updates] But if you want to read mindless and invincible articles, don't come in and read them. The level of plug-ins is too low. I was intimidated until Chapter 90 [laughing and crying] I won't know after Chapter 90 [Eating Melon] The plot is very smooth and the book is well written [Like] [Please update]

I just read more than 20 chapters. Come on, author, don't care what others say about you. The first thing we want to do is to do what we want to do well. Come on, Game of Life is a movie I watched a long time ago. I almost cried at the time. It was very interesting.

Can the goblins here actually communicate with humans? It seems that before the announcement of the sixteen races, humans were not considered a race, and all races regarded humans as beasts. The best ones are pets, raised by forest elves.

It was only at the end that I realized that the protagonist has not turned into a girl (I saw the vision at the beginning and the protagonist turned into a girl, and then I watched girls posting [crying] [crying]). I wanted to see girls posting.

It's okay. The characters are pretty good. The story is mostly told from the perspective of the protagonist, which usually makes it less emotional. You can write about other people's plots that are helpful to the story. I'm afraid you might want to add some stories from other people's perspectives after reading it. Here's a suggestion: Don't make it too abrupt; sometimes it can be used as a foreshadowing, for comparison of subsequent sudden changes, etc. Why are you giving me your opinion? Because I saw the signature (these two sentences are actually for fear of being scolded) Private article 1: Since it is a zero background, I prefer that most of the people who watch it are those who like gorgeous battles in other worlds and the like. The original work is a tragedy of the desperate counterattack of the human species (tragedy refers to picking up the missing gods. That kind of story is very resonant. But now that they are gods, the thrill of the Jedi counterattack is gone. And now that the story is written like this, it will make people feel that the general story line in the future will be almost like this (it does not mean that they know how the author will write it, but they will think "ah, that's it", such as: ah, the gods help the human species, there are some twists and turns at most, but in the end they are stable; the gods seem to have their own ideas, and may also break up with the humans and only find their parents) In short, I have read too many similar stories, so I will say it again. Although the author did not intend to write it this way, it revealed this or that tendency. Also, it is not confusing enough. I can only find an excuse that it was before the final battle, but the conflict is too "common" (I can't find the word). Anyway, with the original work, it feels a bit too normal to write like this. Private article 2: I like another world, but I don't like Blue Star. I think I'm a bit like Sora's character (in every sense). So, I've commented so much for you and I really like the original work. Private goods 3: I like wits, I like daily life, I like novelty Private article 4: Cuteness is justice! I agree with you all my life, I hope the protagonist is cute (Private goods should not affect the rating here (probably) Anyway! Come on with something new, it's obviously such a good background for Game Life! ! ! Slow heat returns to slow heat, but you can't feel the "heat"

A must-see, not to be abandoned

It's been a long time since I read a novel about Game of Life It's just that he's obviously a god. Why is he so deflated? He's always deflated and feels a little weak, unable to move and gasping for air.

I can't stand it any longer, so novices should check it out, five stars for the subject matter. I don't want to wash my hands of it. Roughly speaking, the level corresponds to the comprehensive manga flow in the ancient early literary period, and it may have been well upgraded after modern baptism. The protagonist is not a god and has only a few abilities. His personality traits are biased toward young male protagonists. Maybe the authority will be gradually added later, and in the process there will be some life and death, a hymn to human courage and so on. In the end, the power was added and the invincible aura was put on the head to end everything. Humanity just lay down and flew away (it should be a hymn to human courage, and then the protagonist gives equipment energy and so on. It can be changed to another race) and then go back to the home to show patriotism. Based on the character of this protagonist, it may be that he will just give away whatever he can, and then his hometown will become the mainstream voice in the world. During this period, he may also solve the cheating, give back to his mother, and pretend to be an indifferent (reader's perspective) but passionate (author's perspective) Thirteen. If the author is dizzy, he may contact his hometown in the mid-term. Here I personally filter the reader types. Old bookworms, read the slow-burning ones and the soulful writings ✘ Novice + two-dimensional ✔ Ordinary readers/not interested in game life✘ Novice + those who want to see the gods ✔ Generally speaking, the author should have just started writing on a whim, such as high interactivity with comments. The more you explain, it actually means that some of the logic or settings of your work are problematic. If possible, don't try to write hymns, emotions, themes, and principles. These are considered by veterans. For beginners, try to write the logic, plot, and plot in a smooth and natural way. People must have a personality first before pursuing the soul. No one cares about the ugly inner self.

The writing is quite good. I have been looking for fans of Game of Life, but unfortunately there are basically no fans who have written it, and there are not many people reading it. The author has not caught up with the good times [face covering], I hope you don't stop updating!

The poison in front is almost killing me. Someone can help me and tell me what's going on behind. Game of Life fan, give me five stars

Personally, I am a picky reader and I like rationality and characters. The reason why I recommend this book is that it is one of the few Zero fanfics, and among the two Zero fanfics, it is the most reasonable in plot and character design. And what I said is what I saw, but there may be more. The protagonist and Blue Star have great development potential and great imagination.

I finally found a novel about no game no life. Do you have a group?

I have the highest admiration for Rick's will. My best wishes for Hubie's legacy. I have the highest respect for all Ex-Machines. My ultimate kindness to all my enemies. Say my last wish to all mankind. Issue my strongest challenge to the rules of the world. ———————————————————— Finally - swear an oath to the covenant

Actually, I just wanted to read some mindless and cool articles. Although it looks good, it's not cool enough.

A rare "Game of Life: ZERO" fanfic, the writing is good, the plot is also good, and the most important thing is! The author updates five times a day! The fifth update! ! ! Even the donkeys in the production team dare not do this. Come on, author [full]

It looks good, but I wonder if the author was ordered to make corrections because he wrote too freely, so he couldn't publish the rest of the article.

It's beautiful, don't lose it

I like the anime very much. I feel very good about this fanfic now. The characters are more vivid and there are no flaws. I hope the author can stop being a eunuch, otherwise I will go to the kitchen to get something and send it to you [star] @ Damn it, you thief, don't stop updating. If you dare to be a eunuch, I will go to the kitchen and bring you some gifts.

Among the very small number of game life and fan fiction, it is relatively outstanding. It builds a grand world view and explains various concepts. Even those who have not understood the movie version and anime before can learn a lot from it. It is indeed quite good [learned]

The tail is docked. The front half looks pretty good

I've only read a few chapters, and it's not bad, but the writing is a bit immature. I didn't dare to read it after it was too bad, for fear of ruining the original work. There are too few fans of the main game life. I like Rick Hubey very much, and I like Tetu Ex-Machina very much. The original theatrical version is so perfect. After reading it for a while, I realized that I don't want to change it at all. Come on, author. I can only say it's my own problem.

One word, it's so beautiful (condensed into one essence)