The HP System Forces Me to Become Aquaman

Super pretty! ! My favorite brother and Ced! A very interesting plot! I want to see the big brothers sandwich!

Very good-looking. Do you have orthopedics? My brother smells so good. The heroine is very natural. Is the original heroine also a heroine? I'm curious.

Although the introduction is very otome, the heroine is well portrayed and does not give people the feeling of being brainless and doing whatever she wants. The tasks in the article are also unique, and I am really enjoying it. If the rating is low, it can be higher.

Great author, please update more often. Your writing is really good. I will always be your fan.

I like the pairing of the heroine and her brother, and the interaction with Draco is also very interesting. Originally, the character set given to me by the heroine in the first chapter was supposed to be a serious character, a bit scummy, but very charming, but in the following chapters I felt a little frustrated. Maybe I am not involved in most of the main plot, it is a bit like a camera, more daily life. The heroine is quite conflicted. She wants to work hard to conquer the character and go home quickly, but she doesn't want to hurt Harry, so she gives up on conquering Harry. I don't know how to put it, maybe the characters in the first chapter and the following chapters are a bit different, and I can't bring them in. If the character will change later, I don't have the patience. At present, I don't feel that the heroine's brother likes the heroine. He is just a very good and controlling sister-controlling brother? (Just personal opinion) My reading time is short because I downloaded the book in advance and read it offline. I have read more than 70 chapters so far. The author has stopped updating, please proceed with caution

It's so good to watch. The heroine's brother makes me cry to death [crying] [crying] [crying] It's a bit orthopedic. Who would have thought that the heroine's brother Kerston is just a piece of code created by the system. In order to protect the heroine, he is willing to accept the system's task of "die in place of Cedric" [crying] [crying] [crying] He really makes me cry to death [crying] It's so beautiful. Teacher, can you update it more slowly? Even if you wait a hundred years and I die, you won't be able to finish it [crying]

It's really good to read and I found a treasure novel 🌟. I like my brother and Ced very much. I also like the heroine, but sometimes I feel that the heroine is very tired and has a lot to consider.

I think this book is an unexpected surprise when reading HP fanfics. In HP fanfics, I think the writing is quite good. I quite like the character of the heroine. It feels very real in life. Everything she says and thinks is understandable to me. The lines of the male protagonists are also gradual. There is no inexplicable feeling like falling in love suddenly in some novels. Moreover, I feel that the writing style is quite smooth. The plain words can also touch people's hearts. I like it! Wish you better and better

Love the brother scene! Orthopedics Orthopedics! The author, please give me more updates!

It's really, really good to read. [Like] [Like] [Like]. I have read so many HP fanfics. When I clicked on this book, I didn't have high hopes because it was similar to other HP Otome fanfics. But it was not like that. This book has penetrated my heart. The transitions of the articles are very smooth and there is no logical conflict. There are also some foreshadowings that are well laid out. The descriptions and characterizations of the characters are very delicate, and the creation is very three-dimensional and realistic. It also fulfilled many of my fantasies about life in the magical world. It made me laugh a lot and shed a lot of tears later on. Lillian and Kerston are really frustrating, I cried to death [crying][crying][crying][crying], so the author, can you please not be BE? I hope they can have a good ending. DaDa's writing is very good, please stick with DaDa. I will be a [love][love][love][love][love][love] as a fan of DaDa for life. (Only represents my personal opinion, please don't criticize me in a hurry, thank you)

It's really good-looking. You might think the heroine is a bit licky at first, but later on it's really good-looking. The writing is also very good. Hehehe, orthopedics is the most delicious!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh) The character and thoughts of each character are clearly written. I am a casual fan of HP. This book really allowed me to see a lot of details that I had not seen before. My brother's character setting is so interesting! It was so touching to see Harry's inferiority complex just now! ! Can the author write n branch plots? Or maybe just sandwich cookies? I hope the author will not stop updating!

It's finally tied. The article contains some insulting words for women, and the author seems to have no intention of changing them. If you don't like this, you can leave. I feel that although this article asked the system to force me to be Neptune, the heroine did not actually behave like Neptune. On the contrary, she was particularly entangled in not hurting the feelings of people around her, and she was quite affectionate and righteous. This led to her hurting herself, and she seemed very contradictory and awkward. Duan Ping kept criticizing her. It's obvious that the author has let go after entering the Tom era. The writing rhythm and the male protagonist are both delicious! Tom's mental illness (no derogatory meaning) is completely written out! Much better than the next generation. The overall writing style and concept of the article are better than many HP otome, come on!

It looks good, it looks really good, the brother line is really sexy, and Harry smells so good, faster and faster! ! ! !

The author's writing style is quite good, but there are a few bad sentences. Although the writing style is quite good, I didn't insist on finishing it. The main reason is that the heroine's thoughts and character are too awkward, but you can read it if you are short on books.

The author's writing style is really good, because everyone's "heartthrob" heroine is poorly written, but the author does not directly describe "how beautiful and charming the heroine is", but writes out the core of the heroine bit by bit, how can there be such a gentle person, and how can she write so well.

The first one hundred or so chapters are very good to watch, especially the first chapter is particularly attractive, and the emotional line is not a love at first sight type of heartthrob. I personally like the second volume better than the first volume. The heroine is very sober. This feeling that everyone else is falling for her and the heroine is awake alone is very delicious! It seems like I really like Li Eun so far. The first volume was quite interesting at the beginning, but after the heroine confirmed their relationship, not only many characters who were originally thought to have important roles were marginalized, but the focus of the story was almost entirely focused on two or three people. It is understandable that she is with the first relationship, because both parties know that it is a fruitless relationship and does not affect her ultimate goal. However, when it develops into the second stable relationship, the heroine seems to have forgotten her original intention. The words about orthopedic lines are completely throughout the whole article. This kind of love that my brother can't bear is actually quite delicious😋 Finally, I would like to say that the difference in the heroine's character between the first volume and the second volume is quite big~

Very beautiful, very beautiful, very beautiful. Let me say the important things three times. I really like the psychology of the characters in it. I love orthopedics.

It's very beautiful and has distinct characters. Each character has his or her own personality and emotions. Ernie's love is what I regret the most. I hope he will be strong enough to stand by Lillian's side in the future. His brother is also very good. He is infinitely tolerant, protective and cherishing of Lillian. His love for Lillian is not in words, but is reflected in every detail of life. He will pay attention to Lillian's little emotions and will not let Lillian be wronged. He will help Lillian get revenge after she is bullied. He will never tuck her clothes in bed and save Lillian from the shackles of the nobility. Let Lillian be free again

I've read Chapter 222 so far, it's interesting I was so seduced at the beginning and looking back, my wife is very good at writing about sweet and sour love. I saw that Nalilian's many emotions were really well described! How to describe it, the heroine has always been entangled and scared because she came from time to time. She knows that she is just a person who completes the task, and she may leave quietly at some point. This feeling of detachment not only makes the heroine sad but also scares the brother, so the sweet and sour possessive pseudo-bond relationship between the heroine and the brother is really delicious😋 It's Sai's first love, and Sai is a gentle and tolerant older brother. His wife's many scenes depicting Sai's jealousy are also super delicious! Then there is the heroine. Many times, Nalilian is the group favorite. Everyone except the snake hospital gives her love, and her brother's possessiveness towards her makes many people think that she is just the group favorite. But the author is also good at writing. Nalilian is ranked third in studies and is a very smart baby. He also added that because the system left the magic power and was broken, she only got an A for the related things that require magic power. But many people only remember her as a protected person and ignore her abilities (this is directly connected to the heroine's fear) The heroine's character is a little bit naughty, but she's very cute! ! But she is also afraid of the dove occupying the magpie's nest. She hopes that all the people she loves will be healthy. She is afraid of the outcome of the accident. She is afraid that something will happen to the trio, so she would rather give up her sense of security and ask for help. At first, the heroine was afraid. She was afraid that her family would discover her personality changes. However, when she escaped, the heroine's personality became much more relaxed. She could wrong herself but could not let others be wronged because of her. She also doesn't want to be famous and is afraid of being famous because she is not the real Nalilian The author may have a lot of foreshadowing, a lot of hidden threads, and a lot of metaphors, which need to be scrutinized, and there are also some OOC elements (although it is driven by the author's plot, but it depends on your endurance)

At present, it seems that every character is really ooc, Hermione's portrayal is good, and the rest are all good. . . The logic is not very clear, but I don't know what the rest of the story will be, so five stars encourage it! Don't stop updating. . (Sad) Tom is so touching!!! Come on author and look forward to the follow-up!!!

Very interesting. I read this book a long time ago. At that time, I really liked the interaction between Ernie and the heroine. As soon as it came out of the bookshelf, I couldn't forget it, so I searched everywhere for this book and finally found it.

Zundu is so good to read. I am so good at writing. I read a lot of hp fics. I was bored at first, but I just showed you this one and it made me happy. [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] There are so few updates. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Please feed me.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (/ω＼)! ! ! The writing is also very good, orthopedics, I want orthopedics! ! The extra story of DaDa has collected them all [licking the screen][licking the screen][licking the screen]

It's really beautiful~ Especially the CP written by the author is really awesome! ! ! Especially the heroine and her brother, hehehe, author, come on! ! ! ! [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Blowing kiss] [Flowing kiss] [Flying kiss] [Flowing kiss]

It made me feel a little uncomfortable watching it, but it is very real. The heroine is an ordinary person. She does not have a big golden finger. She will be confused, guilty, sad, and have no sense of belonging. These reactions are all normal and common people have. It will be very immersive when you watch it, and those who like to watch it more realistically will like it.

I love reading, I love reading very much. This book is really the best one.\(//∇//)\It won't be like the previous fanfics, which are very brainless. This one is really real and has real feelings.

Merlin's beard! What kind of fairy lady is this! The love line is so sweet that I need to go to St. Mungo's for dental appointments. Traveling through it in a love game setting just scratches my itch! The various love lines are so fun to read! Even the tip of the iceberg of the previous love affairs of the two Blake protagonists who appeared in the fourth-grade Quidditch game made me itchy to read. It was more addictive than a love potion! It's a shame that this is not a finished book. I'm begging for an update of 30,000 words per day. Mrs. Qiuqiu, please take a look at the readers who are waiting for food!

I really like it ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. This kind of writing style is very delicate, not mindless, the emotions are written step by step, and the story has profound meaning. It is so hard to find! ! Especially the part where I fall in love with Ernie is really touching. I don't know how to describe it. In short, it's a great, wow, and powerful article. Maybe it's written in more detail, so I feel that the plot is slower. I need to read it slowly. I really don't want to read it at the first update, but I can't help but read it. I beg the author to make more updates [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][crying][crying][crying][crying]

I really love this book. I have read dozens of hp books, and this one is my favorite! ! ! Please don't stop updating! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Has the story with Draco progressed at the beginning? ? You haven't seen it since you finished writing it? ?