Transformed into a Down-And-Out Rich Man, He Was Trampled Under the Feet of the Vicious Heroine

It's pretty good-looking, but I feel like it's like the model of Ye Zhen and Ye Fuli, and it's a little different [eating melon]

It looks great, fast forward to the crematorium after the heroine played with fire [laughing evilly] (the protagonist is so cute) Why is the rating so low? I think it's okay? [Think]

This book is actually quite good-looking. In the early stage, it can be said to be a traditional start, but in the later stage, the treatment feels very whimsical. It is not the imprisonment of a traditional yandere, but a lot of fun brought by Su Anan's various magical operations. I can only say that the character of Su Anan is well constructed. Although the emotional love is not written too deeply, the overall character has not collapsed, and the thinking is a little bit traditional. If you help me, I must return the favor to you. The character of Su Yu is a very classic villain in the beginning and is cleared in the end. In terms of the character's charm alone, I feel that the character of Su Yu does not give me too many amazing feelings. On the contrary, the villain is more yandere and very traditional, but I can't stand it and I like it. The relationship between the characters is also quite perfect, at least there is no such thing as collapse. Overall, it is at least complete and rich. The plot of each person is just right, and it stops when it needs to. Finally, based on my personal overall feeling, this book is a very good novel, with many surprises and twists. As for love, I blindly guessed that the author has never been in love (otherwise, why not write more ~ ​​I want to read it, I love to read it). This book is a bit like several similar books I have read before. "Feng Aotian fell in love with the cute and useless me after rebirth" is similar to this one. There may be typos, but the name is generally correct. How to put it this way, after reading several books about this kind of transformation, I have the impression that it is difficult to write. The idea of ​​male to female transformation should be retained as a boy, but it should not be emphasized in the article, otherwise it will appear a bit contrived and redundant. The story must be narrated with a neutral or even a girl's mind. Of course, there is nothing wrong with narrating it with a male's mind, but I feel that it is slightly easier for women to write. (This may have something to do with me. I have a lot of family problems. I have some emotional disorders and depression. I don't have a particularly deep sense of external emotions. I am forced to perceive them, so I can't comment on this.) The last sentence summarizes: I like this novel very much. I hope the author can continue to write such good articles in the future. Come on ｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

My feelings about this book are actually quite complicated. When a book's subject matter becomes popular, it's normal for other works to imitate it. It took me a long time to read it, but I actually think the previous article is pretty good. But in the later stages, Su Anan's identity became a bit inexplicable. [What] impressed me most was the confession at Ferris Wheel. Maybe I've just watched it once, so I don't have much excitement about this development or longing for the later story. Um, but I have a little problem with it. In fact, I feel that after watching this kind of scene for a long time, I will feel a kind of (suspension bridge effect). In short, it is a bit strange. But it's not really a big problem. Five stars, come on, author [shy]

The writing was great, yes, the ending was very good for the fake male protagonist. It was so relieved that the heroine dared to touch me. The person who dared to touch me was so handsome. Under the stars, I felt great across time and space. It was so great. I had never felt so excited in a time difference because this was so great. Oye, let's end the meeting like this! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It must be five stars! ! ! I was bored at first, so I randomly found a book to read. I thought I would get tired of reading more than 20 pictures at most, but I couldn't help it. In the last afternoon, I finished reading this book. It's really awesome! ! However, the ending is quite satisfactory in the end. The two people finally got together after all the ups and downs. Maybe this ending is the best. Once again, it is the end. Maybe they can really get rid of the world of novels, get rid of the puppet-like life, and become like a living person. But it's actually quite sad to think about it. After a bumpy journey, Su Anan left the novel world and just entered another novel world.

It's a good book, but there are no branch lines in the later stage and lack of character interaction polish. It will make you feel tired after reading through it. However, the flaws are not hidden, it is interesting and not too cliche (although I know it may be given by Te Pier. It's too little and I don't have the motivation to write more)

It's great, but the knife at the end has a sense of déjà vu. You know that man, the author. Those of us who stay here are just a piece of the past, a shadow left in the past. We can only stay here, unable to touch the reality where you are, nor can we accompany you into the future when you leave here. Return to normal real life, and you know very well that everything that happens here is just a story, a virtual story. It may not be long before you forget these things, these words, and our existence. You will meet someone better than me, or you may have already met someone. After all, you still have your own life, and you have to embrace the tomorrow that belongs to you. Do our emotions, our thinking, our will, and our actions really have any meaning? What do we mean to you, to anyone? ——Alicia "Honkai Impact 3" @ When a story comes to an end, we always think of its beginning, as if everything has returned to the past. ——Kiana "Honkai Impact 3" So from now on, you don't have to think about the past or doubt yourself. Next you will encounter many dangers and find yourself in terrible predicaments. But you will also encounter many wonderful things, you will have companions who are like family, and you will embark on adventures you never dreamed of. And at the end of the journey, all the puzzles that trouble you will be solved. ——Kafka's "Honkai Impact: Star Railroad" Those of us who stay here are just a piece of the past, a shadow left in the past. We can only stay here, unable to touch the reality where you are, nor can we accompany you into the future when you leave here. Return to normal real life, and you know very well that everything that happens here is just a story, a virtual story. It may not be long before you forget these things, these words, and our existence. You will meet someone better than me, or you may have already met someone. After all, you still have your own life, and you have to embrace the tomorrow that belongs to you. Do our emotions, our thinking, our will, and our actions really have any meaning? What do we mean to you, to anyone? ——Alicia "Honkai Impact 3"

I thought it ended with "be", but I didn't expect the author to turn it into "he" with the ultimate extreme in the last four chapters. I admire it. This book is very good. It has swords, sweetness and sand. If I have to say a shortcoming, there is no extra story, and there is no sweet daily life after being together. The ending is about being together. I personally feel that this book is very good and worth reading.

At the beginning, it was a dian within a dian. At the time, I thought it was just another imitator of Ye Zhen. But in the middle, I saw that the author had written something of his own. The development was completely different from that one, and the ending was so sweet that I was blown away.

After reading it, Goodfellas is not sweet at all from beginning to end, except for the ending, which is sweet, and there are knives in the middle. Author, you are so cruel, but it is really good-looking [shy][shy][shy]

Buried books. The writing is very good, although there are a lot of typos, but it is very sweet. I really didn't expect the final twist. There is no bad ending. The story is compact and interesting. I read it in two days. It is a really good book. Although one thing is true, the system. In fact, I think there are not many scenes, but it is close to none. Overall, it is a masterpiece, no doubt! I wanted to send it to my classmates, but I found the book yesterday. Is there a dark room today? ? ? I like a sentence very much, huh?

Although there are a lot of typos, it does not affect the writing of the article. Some places are not well laid out, and the most regrettable thing is... There is not much candy in the ending, but it is a good ending [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

I read this book before I logged in as a visitor. When I finished reading it, the withdrawal reaction was so great that I even thought about committing suicide. I haven't read it for a long time and I don't have such a strong feeling anymore. But I have to say that the author's writing is really good. I hope the author will continue to work hard, okay?

A huge twist in the ending! The internal fighting between each other in the first half of the chapter is also great to watch! [Crazy]

Your plot is a bit bloody, but your setting makes up for this part; the system is a little FW, but in the end it plays a role that other systems are difficult to play (happiness). This book is still very good, because there are not many chapters, so it is very enjoyable to read. Although there are some bloody parts, the setting is a bloody novel world, and even this world is not stable. Here you are waiting to die. Alas, you can either give your life to the unknown, or abandon your lover and return to reality. How does the heroine choose? System: Take Karma. I want to take the third path. The power of love is infinite. Jpg. Mr. System, you are so great (sobbing) Okay, the above is my crazy. This book is still very interesting, and it is not abusive. Other books are either locked in a small dark room or beaten or beaten (and given medicine). Just reading it, I kept punching in the air to vent my stomach pain (annoyed). The heroine is quite doting (too good, she is a tsundere, we are saved), and the ending is also a happy ending. It is great that everyone can return to reality together (crying)

It's very interesting. The ending is quite touching. I cried several times. But I always feel that we can establish a good relationship with the heroine first. It's rough but also very rigorous. I suggest the author try to write a side story.

It's not the same old crematorium where you chase your "wife". There are a lot of surprises interspersed in it, which makes people's eyes light up. The current progress almost kills me (please be sure to stab me hard) [Sending Hearts]

I watched it very carefully. For now, the plot is still within the acceptable range. I just hope that the development will not be too explosive. The emotional journey can be bumpy, but it is not full of difficulties. If it is not a two-way relationship, it is okay not to have this relationship.

Good-looking, a bit sadistic, but without a knife, the ending is perfect [Adoration][Adoration]

It's quite interesting, but sometimes the words and the story go together incorrectly. This book can be said to be the story line of Ye Zhen and Ye Fuli in a parallel time and space. I personally like it better. It would be better if a certain plot could be written in more detail [smile] Everything is good, it's just that it's too short, that's all

I have read a lot of novels like this, but very few of them really moved me. Although this one is relatively short, it did it! It writes in detail a person's psychological portrayal and changes. Although the last dozen or so chapters are not very good, I can only say that this book hits the essence, the essence of torture, and the essence of chasing a wife! But the only thing I didn't understand was the last few chapters. The ending is pretty good, but it lacks the daily sweetness. This is the only flaw. This book can be considered a ceiling in Tomato. I hope the author can publish their sweet extras. Finally, I wish the author a happy life and write better works! ! ! Five stars for you!

The author's writing style is good, and the plot deeply penetrates my heart. Some parts are very tear-jerking, which made me feel like crying. I like this kind of novel very much. I hope the author will continue to work hard~

It looks okay so far. Although there are poison spots, they are not many and do not affect the overall senses. The writing is okay, but the plot may be a bit cliche, and the fusion setting is okay. Does this also follow the line of sadistic writing [laughing evilly], from the outside to the inside, from the body to the personality [laughing]

This is the second good book after a certain Aotian.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking, oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo [Like] [Like] [Like] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] Ah ah, yes, yes, really can [Like] [Like] [Cry] Even if the whole world forgets you, you choose to escape. But don't worry, even if I travel through time and space, I will find you. Because, I like you! Move

To be honest, the first part of the plot is a bit hard to understand. Putting aside the heroine's nine-turn intestine-like thinking, the second part is still readable, but it seems a bit short. [Cover face]

The finale is so touching, the lovers finally get married

It's very good, but I feel it's still too little and not enough to watch. There should be some extras.

This is what Tomato official asked me to rate when I saw it, but I didn't do it voluntarily [laughing] The needle won't poke [laughing evilly]