Intimacy System, Wake up Lying in the Arms of Your Senior Sister

I want to be the first book review of this book! I also miss being able to see Yu Ye rewrite this kind of subject. I started reading Yu Ye's works through Chen Xi's book, and then I happened to come across other works by chance. This is fate [shy]

There is a lot of post content that can be written, and it is not the kind of novel that sells dog meat with sheep's heads. Highlights of this article: The love between the two heroines, the weird skills of the protagonist, looking forward to the follow-up story [eating melon] Poisonous points of this article: There are characters who cause high blood pressure in sweet articles, which is as uncomfortable as eating half-eaten candy and finding a salty one [face covering] (I barely understand it in order to promote the plot). The most explosive thing is the explanation of the author in Chapter 65, a future protagonist's CP chef! ! The author writes that the ability to attract hatred is extremely strong! ! This leads to the whitewashing plot being extremely awkward (my blood pressure was already high when I read that chapter, and when I saw the explanation that it was the future CP leader, it directly set off Laman's blood pressure). It is not easy to whitewash a villain in today's novels. Unless the person who whitewashes the character has a very charismatic personality, it will be the tipping point of the conflict. Don't think I wrote so many poisonous points. In fact, to sum up, the only point is "the characters written by the author have strong ability to attract hatred". As long as there are no accidents, the subsequent score of this book should be around 9 points, and the future is promising. The proportion of romance is very high, and there are not many scenes involving abilities, battles, and systems. It belongs to the romance category. If you like the ability system lottery, there is no need to watch it.

How to say it? Very nice But I would like to make a suggestion to the author, that is, the plot does not necessarily develop with the protagonist being bullied. Because there are several major plot developments now where the protagonist is targeted and then the protagonist fights back (for example: the protagonist duels with Li Na, Su Wenya threatens the protagonist, the protagonist files a complaint with Su Mingxue) The reason why most readers think the character Su Wenya is very toxic is that she is very targeted at the protagonist and behaves badly towards the protagonist, which is why most readers feel disgusted with her. Of course, this is just a suggestion. I am not a professional novelist. I quite like this book and hope that the author will write better and better.

The character setting and plot feel very good. The relationship between Lu and Su is also a process of mutual redemption. The description of Wenya, the sister, is not too disgusting. After all, she is just a sister who is very attached to her sister. In addition, this sister was also a redeeming figure in her sister's childhood, so it is understandable that she did some outrageous things. The only thing I felt was missing the mark was that Xiao Lu's Tongzi was a bit unreliable. Originally, Xiao Lu was the "Five Scum" and Tongzi kept giving her some weird skills. Her improvement is a bit slow. After all, she will definitely have to face family problems in the future. Although Su is strong, it will definitely be difficult to deal with the big family that trained her. Once the conflicts intensify and the Su family makes small moves, Xiao Lu will naturally become the "weak spot". At this time, I hope that even if Xiao Lu cannot fully protect himself, he will have the strength to fight or the ability to escape after being captured. [Hold face] Let's give Xiao Lu a little positive buff [Eat melon]

This is the third book of Yuye that I have read, and it really didn't disappoint me. However, no one came to such a good-looking book, probably because I didn't make a cover in the early stage. Anyway, keep up the good work [laughs]

There are a lot of posts, and some of the elements of Genshin Impact make me smile. The only poisonous point that people care about at the moment is the treatment of the cousin, but I don't feel it is particularly poisonous. Maybe it's because I didn't pay much attention before seeing the author's apology. After all, she only appeared in a few chapters. Unlike the villains who appeared before Li Ya, the character image is not complete even after only a few chapters. I personally feel like a loser, so I read it with the mentality of having fun. So I saw the author explained that the inclusiveness is quite large [laughing] I came here from the author's previous book. I want to read the complete book and write it well [Blow a kiss]

How should I put it, I started to like rainy nights since Xiaoyu What attracted me to Xiaoyu's book was that the life of a couple was written very realistically. I'm tired of seeing young couples, old couples really make me laugh all the time After that, I read all of Ye Yu's books (except for the one with a male protagonist). As far as emotional scenes are concerned, the role of the Loli shop manager is quite natural, but it's a pity that the data is so bad [I'm about to cry] This book is sweet, but the process of deepening the relationship between the two is missing. It doesn't feel so flesh and blood anymore There are also superpowers. The author clearly grasped Chen Xi's book well, but why does this book mess up the theme a bit? Also, does the author have no outline in this book, or is he laying out the world view and characters? The front has the feeling of a running account, unlike Xiaoyu's book, which has a main line and looks comfortable. There are really not many good authors who write about transformation. Is Ye Yu in a bad state? Is it because the last book was unfinished? I hope Ye Yu can work hard, five stars [love]

Give 4 points: Reason 1: The update speed is slow. Are you still in school? Or are you sick? In short, there are hundreds of millions of interrupted updates, which is extremely irregular. I really have a hard time waiting! Reason 2: It's really good-looking. You'll feel immersed in it every time you watch it. It's easy to get into. Reason 3: I like reading books, and I am now preparing to compile "Minecraft: The End of Sin". Your book is really great! It comes from the heart! (＾∀＾) Reason 4: Oh, I seem to have nothing to write. Come on ♡ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з♡!!!

，，，，，， ，，，，，，？ Really convinced

The author's writing is very good, but... Well, there are a bit too many onomatopoeias. It's really strange and uncomfortable when I read it. [Aggrieved] It would be better if there weren't so many onomatopoeias.

Great post, but as the author, this is a skill, not a superpower.

It's very beautiful, the characters' emotions are well described, and the plot is not awkward and flows smoothly. It looks good.

It's quite warm and feels like a two-way redemption.

How should I put it, this book is a bit of a pity. I feel like there could be a lot more to be written, but there are indeed too few people reading it. If I were to write it down, I think it would be very good based on the previous writing style. Damn it! [Crazy]

After reading about 100 chapters, a small or medium-sized plot is quite bloody, but the logic is very normal. I hope it can be written into another book by the author. Xiao Yu, Su Qiao's kind of contradiction is the spice of life, a small fight, The author writes very well in every book on interpersonal relationships, and this book is no exception. As for the characters, this book feels a little one-sided at the moment, but everyone brings out their best features and has a distinct personality. The writing is good, the pace is not sluggish, the motivation and logic make sense, and the text is comfortable to read. To be honest, when I saw some people mastering the element of water, but also mastering its derivatives, I actually guessed that the protagonist mastered blood.

It would be nice if I could change the cover

Now I frown when I see Su Wenya [laugh awkwardly], and I'm just waiting for tomorrow's second update [love] [cool] [admiration] [blowing kiss]

You wrote this one too! ! !

The structure is clear, come on o((◕ฺ∀ ◕✿))o

Too sweet, tomato is the sweetest article It's not that sweet later on, it starts high and goes low. The villain he created is so annoying

I saw it, it's very sweet, but it's too short, I'll give it a few months [laughing]

Overall it's good, but it still feels a little less interesting than before.

Hehehe... Xiaomeng and Mingxue... Tie Tie... Hehehehe... [Admiration] Something is coming out of my heart... Ah~! ! ! ! !

The front part feels like a normal post, but the back part still feels quite interesting. Why is this book only rated 6.7? I think most of the ratings are 5 stars. Except for a few unreasonable ones who read it for less than 30 minutes and made a few disgusting comments to give a low star. If they are not interested, why don't they just cancel it? The title of this book is about superpowers as the main topic, but I read it with my brain. Why doesn't such a smart person use his brain to choose good words and sentences?

Why are the ratings so low [punch out][punch out][punch out][angry][angry]

Here you go, look forward to it

Warm post, hehehe

Lily Xiang, good books are waiting for fire

It's well written and the plot is very sweet [heartfelt]

Good, good, good