I'm in the Prison, Immortal

After reading it, I found that there are few good books in Tomato. They are not the kind of invincible white novels. They have temples and markets, and their golden fingers are not big. They rely more on worldliness and a little wisdom to solve problems. The plot unfolds slowly and the protagonist grows up slowly.

I want to know how many of them were deceived by the author's introduction. This is not a fairy tale novel about immortality at all. This is an official novel about a small person struggling to survive at the bottom.

The writing is really good, and the things about the world are well written. However, this is an immortal martial arts chapter, and I always write about making money. I hope the author can break out of this jailer and write a bigger story.

It's great to read. It's the first time I've seen such a novel subject matter. It's many times better than the cool novels on Tomato Street. The writing is smooth. The character of the protagonist is unique but lovable. He is an ordinary person with an immortality buff, but he has no martial arts and cannot practice martial arts. He can work at the bottom and handle complex interpersonal relationships with ease. Alas, why aren't we just little jailors who live 🀄️?

Although he lives forever, he is not stripped away by the world of mortals. Entered the house and was sober. The plot has ups and downs. A very nice book.

The author is great. The plot of this book is first-rate. The description of the palace intrigues has a certain depth. The golden fingers are reasonable. In fact, the biggest golden fingers are the protagonist's wisdom and the city's government.

I think it's okay, why are the comments always shouting about beating and killing? The more you write, the less effective you become. The calculations in the prison are inevitable, but you have written all about this stuff in the future, and you have not even mentioned your martial arts?

It is steady and steady, and the supporting characters are brought to life. Everything is trivial in the novel world, and everything is written in a way that people can read. The author is really good. [Like] It is one of the few good books I have read in Tomato.

The plot is not frivolous and the content is detailed and solid. Some novels punch and kick a certain sect at every turn. The protagonist has an aura around him, his realm soars, magic weapons and elixirs fall from the sky, and beautiful women stick close to him.

This book is good, at least I have the desire to read it. If it is a slow-burning book, then there is something wrong with the introduction. However, in this environment where tomato-based novels dominate, a plot that doesn't involve a main character being killed or killed in more than ten chapters is probably criticized by someone, and I doubt this book will be cut by the author. I've just finished reading the latest one. It's well written and deserves this rating. If you change your profile, you won't be criticized so much. It's not the right thing to deceive people.

The setting of Shuangwen is actually based on the small yamen where the protagonist lives, Tianlao, to describe the struggle in the court. There is a story about it that is quite good. The fights are also well written and can be solved in one sentence instead of dragging into a chapter. The only thing that is more poisonous is that the protagonist is deceived by the little widow again and again. It is really the little head who controls the big head... Until Chapter 269 One very poisonous thing is that the protagonist remembers eating rather than fighting. Every time his martial arts improves a little, he immediately goes out to cause trouble. Then when he meets a master, he will guard against arrogance and impetuosity. When he sees a pretty widow/wife, he will rush to join him. He doesn't remember all the losses he suffered because of the widow... To be honest, these two points have little impact on the main plot, but they are really poisonous. This book can only be read with a pinch of nose...[Awkward laugh] Until chapter 326, one more star will be deducted The author really wrote the protagonist's short memory as a character trait. Wherever there is excitement, he can join in the fun. He was cheated by a woman, one, two, and three... I really can't stand it anymore... [Awkward laugh]

The logic is in place, the description is meticulous and exciting, the author is talented [like][like][like]

This rating is very inappropriate! ! Read it in one breath, the angle is novel, the characters are vivid, the logic is clear, and the story is vivid. It deserves a higher score, above 9 points! I have followed the latest chapter, I am satisfied, it is worth 5 stars, and there are no surprises so far.

It's very good-looking, and I saw the updates in one go. The character of the main character has not changed yet, but he is too thin. Not enough 👀

I have read 240 chapters so far. How can I put it this way? It's a good book. It's written clearly and logically about officialdom and human relations. The pace is slow but makes people want to read on. But there are some problems with the details. For example, the author couldn't quite remember the realm at the beginning (the first level was set to be the lowest). In one chapter, the protagonist killed someone of the third level, and then thought that he could fight with the second level. I was completely confused. After reading through it again and again and reading the comments, I was sure that the author himself was confused. There are also some things and descriptions that are not rigorous and logical, but the writing gradually matures later on. The most important thing is that there is absolutely no problem in removing the setting of immortality, because it is currently not reflected at all, which is a huge failure. The protagonist's mentality and behavior are not like those of an Immortal, and the author's way of writing is not from the perspective of an Immortal. It can be said to be a gold-fingered Gou Dao martial arts novel. Slow heat is not such a slow method. There is no trace of the Taoist Fruit of Immortality in more than two hundred chapters. If you are attracted by Changsheng, you will be very disappointed and it will ruin the popularity of the book. Even if the book is good, it will greatly lower your evaluation because you feel like you have been cheated by a clickbait party. There are 611 chapters now, and the backend is extremely confusing. Three or four chapters can be written about a small thing, and such small things happen every day. And there are some paradoxical plots that at first seemed to be foreshadowing, but later turned out to be purely hydrological, and the author didn't even think about filling them in. For example, in the early stage, even a mediocre martial artist with a mediocre level would be noticed by Boss Qi, and he would even send a poisonous woman (this poisonous woman is very powerful, she can sneak into the palace to kill people, and is also top-notch in poison) to ambush her. The latter line has not progressed at all, and even the ninth level is stunned. Boss Qi's identity and whereabouts are not worthy of knowing. It is completely inconsistent. There is also the bombing case. Logically speaking, it is a big event. At least it is a small climax plot. It is ignored. It can be seen that the author has no intention of filling in the holes. There is also strength. There is one chapter that almost explicitly states that he has broken through the Grandmaster (not that I personally think so, but all reviewers think so), and then after dozens of chapters, he can't even get the Grandmaster chapter. Is this the introduction to "Invincible"? It's just that the author is forcing the progress, hydrology

Well written. Write the protagonist as a person with a calm heart and a strong core. There is no cupping for the sake of filling the cup, and there is no forced value or perspective in order to tell a good story. It is worth watching slowly.

Awesome. It's not just the writing. The author actually wrote the personality characteristics of the named characters so clearly. What's even more rare are people in different positions, their overall view and intelligence. The arrangements are then made to reflect the intelligence and wisdom of characters from different walks of life and stages in the book. On the contrary, the protagonist just showed caution and no lack of blood. Very plump. Every character is fleshed out. . It's a good book. I hope everyone can read it together.

This book is an authentic official fighting novel that uses immortality to lure you into a trap. The real title should be called "My Years of Intrigue and Intrigue in Tianlao". The writing style is not bad. Putting aside the appearance of immortality, it seems that there is nothing wrong with it as an official fighting novel. Friends who like fantasy may not be suitable for it, but those who like court battles and official battles can give it a read.

It is worth recommending the novel of immortality time travel, the content is logical and meticulous. The author updates in a timely manner.

The characters are free and easy, the plot is smooth, there is too much writing, and there is not enough martial arts. There are too many courts and too few arenas. Sometimes I can get by, and sometimes I can't do it impulsively. There are a lot of foreshadowings and few revelations. If you can write so many comments, it means it is a good book.

5 Stars, a fantasy story about the emergence of officialdom and immortality. The key is that the logic is online and there are very few poisonous points. Now I just hope it won't end badly. Alas! It's too early to conclude [crying] that the character of the pig's foot is a jailer, but the author gradually turned the pig's foot into a curious baby with him hitting nine out of ten places. Many things have nothing to do with pig's feet, but pig's feet have to find ways to get in. This is completely incomprehensible

It's quite good, I felt like I finished reading it in one breath. In most novels, I have no interest after reading the first few chapters. The logical scenarios in this book are closer to reality. Although there are some exaggerations, they are within an acceptable range. Very unforgettable

The writing is very good, the story is rich, the writing is sophisticated, and it is fascinating to read. Come on

I once read an longevity article with a grade above 9 and tens of thousands of comments. I really can't see it. It's just a piece of writing that doesn't seem to fit into the plot at all. At least I can listen to and read this book, and it is very comfortable to listen to. Maybe this is the charm of language. Come on

After reading more than 200 chapters, I feel that it is okay. There are some minor flaws. Generally speaking, I can read it. The main reason is that the author really likes widows and wives. The protagonist meets all pretty widows. Meng Dezhi, the author. More than 300 chapters in, the protagonist suddenly went crazy. Others forced a great Confucian enemy to death. The protagonist told him that you can't do this. You should hand it over to a judicial institution to judge his crime. But maybe the protagonist forgot that he changed his appearance and wiped out a village of human traffickers, including the children? Didn't I see you report to the official? Are you starting to have double standards now? He also talks a lot of nonsense to others. The author must feel that he has already mastered it.

Recommended: Very well written about how to conduct yourself in the world.

I haven't seen such a beautiful book in a long time, the author is female

Summary: The official novel about Tianlao Changsheng is a bit interesting. The characters are well drawn and each has its own characteristics. After entering the Qianchao Tomb, there are so many things to do and it's too watery.

I have been a bookworm for more than ten years, so this book is more in line with my taste (I only speak for myself). I have read hundreds of chapters in full. Although the title looks like a book about cultivating immortals, it is actually more about officialdom and private goods. My level is limited, and I can't see any flaws in the plot. It's basically very smooth. I have two questions about the setting: one is that the level of combat power is too vague, and the other is that the description and expression of the strength growth of characters in a low-level martial world are a bit sparse. Let's see how the pitfalls are filled in the follow-up, and I will comment after I finish reading it. Overall, I still like it. I give the author a thumbs up. I hope the author writes better and better. From the beginning of more than 500 chapters, it is an assembly line narrative, writing a lot of bad things, not knowing how to write, just brushing it all off, and not trying to write it bit by bit. Alas, it is a pity, it could have become a masterpiece.

It seems to be a book written by a great person. It is full of useful information, the characters are well-drawn, and the little widow is very pretty. It should be said that it is a Machiavellian martial arts life story cloaked in longevity literature, a slow-burning, non-invincible, pretentious dog-licking stallion novel. That's it after reading Chapter 400. The article is not on point and should be replaced by a golden finger.