The Rebel Emperor's Tale

Since no one is watching it, I can't give myself a five-star review too much! Give one a day, keep at it, no one will read it anyway, so I will comment on it myself. I feel that the beginning of what I wrote is a bit long-winded, and the later story will probably develop in the direction in my mind, but the writing style cannot achieve the effect I want, especially the fighting and character description. I will insist on completing the first stage of my brain. After all, I have not written an outline.

Overall, the writing is okay, but the front part is too wordy and the back plot is tight. Five stars. The plot is good, but the fighting aspect is lacking, keep up the good work