The Heaven-defying Pearl appeared, and disasters appeared. Lingyun Road defied the sky with a pearl, and became a generation of rebels against the Emperor.
He was originally the favorite of the royal family in Nitian Continent, but due to the appearance of Nitian Pearl and the invasion of evil tribes, he was brutally wiped out.
So he embarked on the road of seeking revenge with one person and one bead.
Reader comments
Since no one is watching it, I can't give myself a five-star review too much!
Give one a day, keep at it, no one will read it anyway, so I will comment on it myself. I feel that the beginning of what I wrote is a bit long-winded, and the later story will probably develop in the direction in my mind, but the writing style cannot achieve the effect I want, especially the fighting and character description. I will insist on completing the first stage of my brain. After all, I have not written an outline.
Overall, the writing is okay, but the front part is too wordy and the back plot is tight. Five stars.
The plot is good, but the fighting aspect is lacking, keep up the good work
Since no one is watching it, I can't give myself a five-star review too much! Give one a day, keep at it, no one will read it anyway, so I will comment on it myself. I feel that the beginning of what I wrote is a bit long-winded, and the later story will probably develop in the direction in my mind, but the writing style cannot achieve the effect I want, especially the fighting and character description. I will insist on completing the first stage of my brain. After all, I have not written an outline.
Overall, the writing is okay, but the front part is too wordy and the back plot is tight. Five stars. The plot is good, but the fighting aspect is lacking, keep up the good work