A Journey to the Beast World

It's okay. I really like reading novels where the heroine travels into the world of beasts, but I don't really like the heroine being too generous. Without knowing how to earn system gold coins, the heroine just buys things for herself and the male protagonist, and then joins the tribe. In order to build a good relationship with the men and women of the tribe, the heroine unconditionally bought them a lot of skin care products and toiletries in the system mall, and lamented that the gold coins are not worth spending! Inviting people to the house as guests, and seeing the daily utensils and knitting products made by the male protagonist, she said that the male teacher could give them food in exchange. The female protagonist believed that this was the first step in building a good relationship, and she did not want to teach them anything for free! The male protagonist is obviously very powerful and the people in the tribe are eager for them to stay, so the female protagonist has to rush to support her!

The plot is useless and there are too many typos. Now that there are only dozens of chapters, there are countless typos. The clan leader's name is also the same, one is Wei Jun, the other is Jun Wu. Wherever the word "na" needs to be used in the article, the author always uses "nei", and wherever the word "na" needs to be used, he uses "nai". We just don't understand. Is it because these two words can't be typed? It still has some special meaning, and the wording in many places is unreasonable. "I heard the smell, smelled good, and looked 24.5 Years old." It was the first time I realized that such approximate words need to be accurate to decimal places, but the visual inspection can actually be accurate to half a year old, maybe I have clairvoyance.

I think it's just so-so. Sometimes the sentences don't flow smoothly. Some sentences have no subjects, and there are a lot of colloquial words, and a lot of "after" and "then" are used. The plot is okay, but it's a bit mediocre and a bit bloody, as if the heroine will be snatched away by a stray beast once she has lived in the beast world 🤦

I see that so many people in the Beast World make things and make their own skin care products. This heroine buys everything from the system and gives it away for free. It is so expensive and she gives it to others. She can lead the beasts to live a good life, but it must also be obtained from real life. Just teach them to make it by themselves. She has to buy finished products and use materials that are not available in the Beast World.