Young Master Lieping's Story of the Sword Immortal's Growth

In Chapters 42 and 43, the protagonist actually didn't want to get his hands dirty and asked his servants to bury the enemy alive in a distant place. Then the enemy was rescued by a passing master, and he was able to let the tiger go home. It's extremely poisonous. The main character's parents are all helpless people, and several nursing homes are also in bad shape. Are they afraid that they will be wiped out at any time?

It's really a bit poisonous. Why didn't you commit suicide yourself and get away with it [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh] I could have endured the poison for a while, but stopped at 216 and started a harem. Liu Ruyan's character design was not good at the beginning, and she was whitewashed. Who will read a harem stud story now [laughs awkwardly], the protagonist is still awesome, no wonder the score is so low, she slipped away [vomit]

Five-star praise, I've only read about 40 chapters, this is a poisonous point, it's great, whoever reads it will know [vomit]

Let's summarize what everyone thinks are the poisonous points in the book review. The first is the killing and being rescued by an expert. The author did not lay the groundwork for this part, and later suddenly explained that it is the correction of the world's will. If the author adds a few more minor events to correct the world's will, it may seem smoother, otherwise it will feel too forced and involved. The second is the exchange of exercises. Many people think that the exercise of pig's feet should be unique. This is not a cool and invincible article. , And don't forget that this is just a Qi training technique. After cultivating to the highest level, it is only the 9th level of Qi training, which is also the first level of sainthood. There may be a foundation-building elixir later. This is what I have seen in the book review. I personally think that there is another aspect, that is, the protagonist's personality has changed drastically. There is no more foreshadowing in this part. After all, it is a soul that has passed through. There must be many differences from the original person. The author writes relatively slowly, and the writing style is relatively smooth [Cool]

Finally, I have another one with good attributes and good writing that I like.

The reason for giving five stars is to let more people see it. One of the poisonous points is why Zhou Li suddenly got together with the protagonist. This was too fast, and the emotional line was completed overnight. Not much to say, if you want to know, watch it yourself

Deduction of one star: Unfortunately, there was no response from the host, so they had to dissipate. Another star was deducted. Xu Ling opened his mouth and took the elixir, only to find that every bit of this supposedly valuable healing elixir was absorbed by the system and had no effect on his body at all. And what's even worse is that maybe the targeted effect is different, and its medicinal effect cannot even convert a single attribute point. Zaidu: It's so funny, drag, drag, drag, damn, he was rescued, it's really bullshit, Another deduction: What kind of awesome person is the Demon-Suppressing Division???, Chunchun 2b, why are you acting like an idiot?

Skipping the opening chapters, the plot is pretty smooth! The protagonist's soul is in the body of his predecessor who was killed by a trick, and accidentally awakens the golden finger to upgrade... The protagonist's upgrade is relatively balanced in the early stage, followed by a period of stagnation, and then Qi Yu suddenly upgrades several levels...

It's really not bad. Although it is said to be a completed book, the layout set by the author actually allows for a lot more to be written. The whole book is exciting and not too slow. Basically, the protagonist is invincible. However, the origin of the system at the end is not explained, nor is the way home (Blue Star). There may be a higher-dimensional world. Although these are not very important, it can be regarded as a regret of mine. There are many things that are not fully explained, some pitfalls (people or things), and branch plots are not fully explained, but it is understandable, and it is mainly written around the protagonist. But I really think it is very good. It has a happy ending. The subject matter is very good. Throughout the whole text, the protagonist is basically invincible. It is a good and refreshing article. I recommend reading it to friends who are short of books.

The plot is compact, but there are a few logical illogicalities that force the plot. For example, instead of killing Xu, Master Wang and his apprentice dumped the body so that Wang could be rescued. However, this novel can be considered a masterpiece, and it is supported by five stars. Come on update

Not bad. I watched it for more than ten hours at a time and finished it. I didn't think much about chapters 42 and 43 as mentioned in the review. In retrospect, it was a poisonous point and it was quite poisonous. It can be changed in another way. After all, the protagonist couldn't be killed even if he wanted to (children of luck always survive inexplicably). The relationship between him and the eldest lady at the beginning was also a little poisonous. Overall, it is actually good. Even I can read it and finish it. Come on, author.

The combat power system is quite reasonable, and the plot is relatively compact and attractive. However, the acquisition of attribute points is too suppressed. If you add a limit to the level improvement, you can reasonably allocate attribute points to skills, and try to cultivate each skill to the extreme. In addition, the strongest is to cultivate both internal and external skills.

This book is obviously well written, but it has been given such a low score by trolls. For example, at the beginning of the game, the male protagonist said that he did not include junk skills, which attracted more than 10 comments greeting the author. Anyone who has seen the system panel flow knows that the panel information must be repeated. If you write some useless information and write it for a long time, it will be a waste of words. The author did it right. It was originally five stars, but later it was changed to three stars. The male protagonist is the child of bad luck, and the female protagonist is the child of destiny, so the male protagonist can get many opportunities by sticking to the female protagonist. The perfect soft rice king character design, but he started a harem as soon as he wrote it. Is this reasonable...

What you can see copying and pasting is basically: I have been fooled by 5 stars a lot, and I have developed a good habit. No matter how ugly or rubbish I am, I will give 5 stars. As an old bookworm, although I am immune to all poisons, I cannot try poison alone. There is you, there is me, there is everyone. Let's all drink together!

Before Chapter 70, it was relatively low-level, because it was describing small plots, level 8 Then it took off, and the realm rose quickly. Not bad, there are many female protagonists, you can watch it if you like it.

I can't be the only one eating this delicious food. Here comes the chicken soup, hahaha, look! Show them all to me! How could you not watch it?

The writing is very good and the plot is very logical.

The plot is compact without being watery, the pace is relaxed and relaxed, the foreshadowing is cleverly laid, and the ending is perfect and stunning. The characterization is deeply rooted in people's hearts, the outlook on life is upright and transparent, the writing is both warm and deep, neither exaggerated nor empty, and the story is full of fireworks and emotions. It is a rare masterpiece of high quality. Okay, the score is low, not bad. Worth seeing

The writing is smooth, the plot is interesting and attractive, the protagonist kills decisively, and is not a virgin. There is something wrong with the logic behind it.

Come on. The rating of this novel is low. There are not many novels that I can finish. Although it has flaws, Tomato is so much worse than this novel that the rating can still go up to 9 points [awkward laugh]

The upgrade is fast, especially when he was separated as soon as he came out. Others left him to die and he still wanted to find others to help him make elixirs. The two heroines were not in any mood and agreed to become disciples. The protagonist was worried when he was left somewhere and then was conquered by a powerful sect. It is very real. Come and watch it.

It's still good-looking, but it has more poisonous points [laughs awkwardly] If you don't mind, you can watch it I just feel like it's inexplicable that I don't have the attribute points at the back, and it's also inexplicable that I get the attribute points? I still listen to books, not read novels at a glance. But I think it's still pretty good. At least I think the plot and other aspects are okay [Grass planted][Bookshelf plus one]

Not bad, the writing is very good, my impression after reading it is good🌹

It's really good to watch System Streaming, although I don't understand why so many people are struggling with Chapter 42 [Read it carefully], but I think Liu Ruyan, a girl who is given away for free, is really not lovable. The eldest lady has not cheated her yet, so why rush to open a harem [sneaky laugh]

This book is okay, but why is it not rated highly?

There will definitely be a wider world behind it, but if you want to level up too quickly, you'd better get a vest. Just treat Zhou Lizhou well.

I have been following the book so far and have not given up. It is worth continuing to follow. I just hope that the standard can be maintained in the future.

It's great. I really want to see his ex-fiancée beat him up. Can I write a side story? [Hold face]

The harem novels are well written. A common problem with harem novels is that there is ambiguity everywhere. The female supporting characters are flirting with each other one after another.

This book is a cool novel with a slow pace. Xu Ling has an out-of-the-box personality that I really like. The article is from point to point, the world view expands with development, and the structure is reasonable. I hope the author sticks to it...