One Piece: Transform into the Monkey King at the Beginning

There isn't much of a bad thing, but the main character is a talkative person who keeps talking. If you don't mind being a talkative person, you can read this book.

The author reads more comments. To be honest the comments are very useful for you. You have to take into account the opinions of your readers. It is impossible for one person to be so familiar with One Piece. So read more readers' opinions. It can really make you understand One Piece better. For example. A reader sees that something you wrote is wrong. He may not care much at first, but later he will definitely dislike reading this novel. And if this place is wrong, he will definitely explain it in the comments. So read more comments and listen to readers' opinions, so that more readers can like this book.

You can write well, author, come on

There are no extremist thoughts, and the time traveler has normal views. It's good to see that there is no female protagonist in episode 241. I hope there won't be a female protagonist in the future, just normal adventures (*^_^*)

It's still good, keep it up! Much better than most fan fiction.

It feels pretty good-looking

The only drawback is that there is no room for storage!

It's a cool article, it stays neutral and accepts people everywhere. It's pretty good.

The subject matter is good, but the content is not so good

Okay, okay, looks good

It's okay, but the main character, a fantasy beast, can't control the elements, which is a bit awkward. Please update soon.

Well written, worth collecting and watching