Stolen Pen: Black Heart Lotus Starting from Laojiumen

The setting of the mistress is so good. I hope that there will never be any plots in the future where others find out. I hope that the heroine will always be the pure white moonlight in the eyes of others, training the dog invisibly. It is so cool. It must be five stars!

I like it very much, it feels very real, and the interaction between the heroine and Chen Pi always gives me a very sweet feeling. It seems like nothing is said, but there is a gentle and silent feeling, eroding each other, tolerating each other, and getting close to each other. It is an indescribable feeling. Anyway, I think it is very interesting, but there are too few chapters.

Such a novel with a serious plot is already very good. It is both funny and full of intrigue. The heroine's understanding of the control of people's hearts is so perfect that she can become a dog trainer. I would like to call it one of the masterpieces of fan fiction, it's so good [lick screen] I've been chasing faster for two years and haven't given up, which makes this article interesting, but you have to read it carefully [laughing]

At first glance, egoism? Human nature? Want to read the newspaper At second glance, it smells so good The author's description made me really see that era, divided by warlords, numerous gangs, and indifferent people. As an ordinary citizen, I am terrified every day, knowing that one day I will be killed for no reason. The heroine started from a humble beginning and relied on what she had to calculate people's hearts step by step, constantly increasing her trump card. Indifferent, selfish, daring to bet boldly with her own trump card, but also knowing how to exchange sincerity for sincerity. I really saw the complex human nature in the heroine. To be honest, I really hate female protagonists in tomb robbing books. Whether it is one of the young cows from CP or ALL, they all give me a disgusting feeling as if they were bred to a boar. Especially after the lovers finally get married, even if the tone of voice is imitated, the protagonist will feel greasy and disgusting. Unprovoked affection, using the teddy to become a spirit to express the male protagonist's deep obsession with the female protagonist. Sometimes I really don't understand how the female protagonist fell in love with the male protagonist, and why they are together again, just because he is Wu Xie, he is Zhang Qiling, he is a black blind man, and he is Jie Yuchen? The heroine who wears the book, the hero who is crazy about love, and me who read the book are three separate worlds. They don't interfere with each other, and no one cares about the life or death of the other. Closer to home, this book really surprised me, whether it was writing, logic or character setting. I was even touched that someone finally saw the heroine as a human being, with joys, sorrows, selfishness and calculations, an upright person like the hero, instead of a sow waiting to get into heat, running up to the hero and shouting crazily, "Choose me quickly, choose me quickly, I can give birth to a son, I can give you a litter." Five-star praise, please remind me to update [Love]

It's very interesting, and the cool part is that the heroine's efforts are rewarded. At least the readers won't feel aggrieved. The most annoying thing is that others bully the heroine, or the heroine's efforts are not rewarded, and then the heroine just smiles and doesn't care, and only the readers are angry. All the gold from the bracelet in the early stage can be returned to the heroine. The funny part is that the heroine and Chen Pi escaped. As a result, the heroine became fat and Chen Pi became thinner than before when he met the heroine. The heroine also has a very charming personality. She doesn't just mindlessly show favor to others when they meet her, but increases others' favor through how she behaves. But the system is too rubbish and there is help but not much.

I like the heroine to benefit herself first and then benefit others. There are many articles on female channels where either the heroine is always sacrificing herself for others, or the heroine is born selfish and evil. I don't think that self-interest and altruism cannot coexist, so this book is really to my liking. The heroine is interested in herself and others, and it's not an illogical feeling. At least the six elements are present, and the transformation is very reasonable. Moreover, I feel that the author is really good at it. I hope that Pippi will stay with Mingzhu all his life. I originally read too many fanfics and I prefer to read the little brother and the others. I hate Zhang Qishan, but the character of Zhang Qishan in the author's works is much fuller. Cousin is really good. Cousin, you must take action. When will the sixth man climb up from the bottom of the pit and see Mingzhu.

Hello Buddha, I update every few days, one picture at a time, ah ah ah why is it so beautiful, it's really hard to wait, I really want to see it, my dear heroine and Chen Pi woo woo woo

I went, and I didn't expect to find gold in tomatoes 💩. The writing is really good, and there are not many tomato novels that are embarrassing to the point of picking at the description, especially the heroine and Chen Pi. I have to say that the author is really good at writing emotional scenes. The corners of my mouth turned up and I was shoulder to shoulder with the sun the whole time. I really hope that Chen Pi can always be the heroine's plan A. The only flaw is Sometimes the heroine pretends to be a virgin. Although she is pretending, she doesn't care about her deeds. She really seems to be holding back her anger. The first is grabbing jade bracelets in the pawn shop, and the second is kowtowing in the teahouse. Really, these two places almost poisoned me, but after enduring it, I still feel that the flaws are not concealed. It is really the wife of Chenpi and Mingzhu who is too good to kowtow [send heart][send heart][send heart]

Really well written! The heroine's character is perfect! However, I hope that the heroine will live a long life (after all, the heroine is also a bloodline of the Zhang family, so her longevity is very reasonable [crazy]), and I hope that the heroine will get to know the second and third generations of the Nine Clan [sending my heart] Hee hee, I hope this article either has no male protagonist, or has an np [smile] [send heart] [lick the screen]

The heroine has a very high IQ, the plot is very detailed, and the plot is very complete. The heroine is also very good-looking, well-informed, and very selfish, not a virgin at all. [Adoration][Adoration] I love it so much, the author must not stop updating it.

The writing is first-rate. You might think it's some brainless Mary Sue after reading the introduction, but it's actually not the case. The charm of the heroine in the full text is not set off by men liking her, but by describing the heroine's intelligence, cunning, selfishness, cuteness, etc., Which gives the heroine a very high personality charm. I believe everyone who reads this article will fall in love with the heroine! In addition, the article captures the personal details and personality aspects of each character very well, and the unique era environment of the Republic of China is described in detail. In short, the writing, characters, and plot are all top-notch!

I rarely read books about Chen Pi, but this one is very good. The numbness and indifference of people in that era was really terrible. The heroine is really strong, smart, and transparent. This kind of spiritual strength is simply not to be loved too much. The character descriptions are also very good, allowing me to see how ruthless Chen Pi is, Zhang Qishan's stability and coldness, and Er Erhong's gentleness and strength. It is a novel worth waiting for. Generally, time travel has a system, and the heroine is afraid that she will be too weak to survive. I forgot about the system in this book. In fact, whether it is Tomb Raiders Notes or Lao Jiumen, the people in them are very strong, but there are still many regrets. I like to read such heart-warming novels, and get to know and cherish each other's characters. The entanglement of emotions is like crossing a dimensional wall, which also comforts my heart.

Apart from anything else, I really like this heroine. She is very smart in her own right, but she is not arrogant and conceited. She occasionally makes mistakes in small and inadvertent things and becomes more cautious after learning lessons. This is more realistic, especially since the heroine's goal has always been very clear. Rather than being egoistic, it is better to say that the heroine just wants to live a more comfortable life. Is there anything wrong with this? Not good at all! The writing is exquisite and the story is clearly explained. It is a rare treasure in fan fiction.

Super pretty! Fans who don't regard the original character as his biological father are all good fans! The character has a distinct personality, the heroine acts with moderation, and is passionate about developing potential talents into man's best friend! Thank you very much to the author's wife for cooking! Tasty! I was wrong. I was slapped in the face as soon as I told the plot that I would not lick the original character. The heroine is very stubborn in words but very honest in body. I have never seen a way to train a dog to increase loyalty by kowtowing to someone all the way. Let's not take shortcuts, okay? I think it's good to practice honestly. After being beaten and vomiting blood, my physical fitness has also improved. Now that you kowtow and pass out, my personal fitness is going to be pissed off.

The character of the heroine is very, very full, not flat or streamlined. The complexity of human beings, the good and evil between thoughts, the interaction of interests, the sophistication of human relationships, when to do things, just right, perfectly in line with the characteristics of that era. This is difficult to write, but the author writes it very well, for the country, the people, and oneself. Unlike most other novels, the characters are abrupt and do not fit the background of the time. Various plots are written in order to achieve a highlight point. This article is a natural extension of the plot, reaching its climax naturally. And unlike other novels, the characters' emotions are like a flood of unsaleable goods, cheap and easy to obtain, superficial, and giving people the feeling of "How did I fall in love?!" But this article feels like it gives the greatest respect to everyone's emotions, which are beautiful and precious, like treasures and diamonds. The heroine's personality charm is very, very strong👍👍👍👍, regardless of appearance, it is not an exaggeration to give her the deepest and most sincere admiration and love. Moreover, the heroine clearly knows what she wants, and plans and works hard for it. She benefits herself first and then benefits others. She is not bound by emotions. When she is in trouble, she will never rely only on men. She has extremely high mutual quotient. Love the author so much! ! ! Why are you so awesome? ! I love you so much! ! Big baby! ! [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Admiration][Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]

No, it's such a good book that I could see the feeling of a second game. After conquering one hot man, conquer the next one. The heroine is quite cute, but she's too pretentious. I don't mean that, it's just that... She wears different masks when facing the system, facing others, and facing Chen Pi. Everyone sees the script differently. Do you know the sense of reality? I feel like all the masks are her and all the characters are not her. It has a sense of fragmentation and is good at breaking the inherent impression. In terms of image creation, what impressed me the most was the episode in which Hei Laobei appeared. I can even think of the bleak autumn wind, the smiling girl and the silent swordsman sitting around the fire. Wow, that's really, really tender. It's even more shocking than Chen Pi's sentence "Okay, I won't kill people indiscriminately." Perhaps it's because it's cast a layer of tragedy of the times. So that little bit of fire is dazzling enough

Not bad, not bad, very interesting. The more you read, the higher your ratings and expectations for this book are. This is definitely the best tomb robber fanfic I have ever read. After reading this book, I realized that it's not that I don't like heartthrobs, but I haven't come across well-written heartthrobs. Heartthrobs don't need to be written in the introduction, it will be reflected in the article. The valuable thing about this book that captivates people is that it is not rushed and is not limited to the charm of beauty. It has enough time to let these people be convinced by the heroine step by step and indulge in emotions. The inner quality of the heroine is also charming enough, whether it is Whether they are deliberately shown or revealed naturally, they are all very charming. She is not a strong woman, but in this tomb robbing situation, it is more contrasting. The heroine is equivalent to the white moonlight that emerges from the mud and is not stained. She does not like tomb robbing, but the heroine is affectionate and prefers them. Every line drawn is very reasonable and can be strung together. The appearance of the entire character is smooth, and there are a lot of foreshadowings buried as the plot develops. From the suspicion and irritability of Chen Pi at the beginning to the escape of each other, relying on each other, and gradually letting go of psychological defense. Then I entered the Hong Mansion and found my relative Zhang Qishan's golden thigh. From the previous stable painting style, the painting style gradually became lighter and more logical. There were plot lines and emotional lines with Zhang Rishan, Qi Tiezui, Gou Wuye and others. The heroine is not the popular strong and powerful evil girl, and she is not a villain in the worldly sense. She has a great contrast between the outside and the inside, which is quite unique. Each emotional line has different points. For example, Chen Pi's paranoia and single-mindedness almost existed together with the heroine in the early stage, but his proportion is still different once he appears. Zhang Qishan's forbidden feelings (this one doesn't seem to be the case, but it still has a sense of CP) are too much like a big house, everything is under control, Qi Tiezui's sobriety and sinking, Zhang Rishan and Heibei Laoliu's loyal protection, Gou Wuye's desire to get close despite knowing that he is a high achiever, and even Zhang Xiaolou's Jude test against Lu Jianxun, etc. But in my current opinion, it is still Chen Pi, Zhang Qishan is more CP, followed by Ba Ye. The little details of the heroine are really cute to me, she is so cute, and the character is very vivid and three-dimensional. For example, the heroine does not take things from others and brings her own chopsticks for meals. These are small details, but they can reflect the character of the heroine, and there are also foreshadowings here. Among them, it can also show the funny and cute points. For example, the heroine tossed a little golden pig with no ears and only a vaguely visible nose. The heroine was tense at the beginning and then became wanton. There was also an explanation of Tufuzi and Zongzi. The heroine was called Mingzhu, and the various items were called red pigs holding pigs and golden beads. Two mountain pigs and two little pigs were really hilarious. All kinds of things can make people feel the heroine's delicacy and gold. The heroine is here to enjoy happiness. I used to think that the heroine was pretending to be innocent, but the result was reversed. It seemed that she was so innocent, and then it was reversed. I felt that I was deceived. She just pretended to be a pig and eat the tiger. She was so happy that the heroine was so happy. The heroine now started to make plans. Quoting a passage from the heroine, she wanted to be a good person and bad people would despise her. It's just that maybe it's a bit too slow now, too immersed in the emotional line, still gathering strength, and the rest of it hasn't been developed yet, but this slowness is not derogatory, it has a rich enough plot to support it, but I want to see more later, when will we get to the Sand Sea, I hope the author will not stop updating [crying] [crying] One bad thing about reading Tomb Raiders Notes is the lifespan. Let's start with Laojiumen. By the end of Tomb Raiders Notes, it's all gone. Let's start with Tomb Raiders Notes. There's also a little brother. And it's not OOC, Chen Pi is probably the most suitable. Another point is that the heroine is a bit disgusting every time she comes to harvest people's hearts, but it is also well written.

I like it very much, the characters in it feel very vivid I like the heroine's character very much, and I also like Chen Pi's attitude towards the heroine. The early part is quite interesting, and I also like the later part. Some of the things the heroine said are very reasonable and I like the adjutant and Zhang Qishan very much. I feel that Zhang Qishan in this book is very kind to the heroine, and he is really generous in giving pocket money. Hahaha. Hope. The author will update quickly. I also hope that the author will quickly let Zhang Qishan bring the heroine to meet the people of Jiumen. It is really exciting. Just let Zhang Qishan have a dinner party, and then invite the people of Jiumen, and then bring the heroine to let them meet. It looks good. Just thinking about it, it's good. Click three hearts to press the score. Author, please update quickly. If you don't update, I will collapse. Other authors update three times a day. Author, you don't update for a day. It's really hard.

Like it very very much! ! ! Real! ! Regarding articles on this subject, this book is the best one I have ever read. At least I think the heroine is a character I like very much. I highly recommend it! [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love] And the character design is also very consistent. He is the way he feels. I really like it but I don't know when the update will be finished. It's time to go to school [crying][crying][crying][crying]

It's very beautiful, and the heroine has a great character. The author advises you to update ten times a day and release all the saved manuscripts [laughter] Does the author have any other novels? I would also like to see if there is any information on other platforms.

All well written. And the characters are all very normal, no oc. I just wonder if the author can do more [laughing]. I beg the author to do more. More. He sat up in shock while dying of illness.

Okay, okay, finally I found a fictitious fanfic that I can read. So far, it is the best character portrayal I have ever seen, especially the transformation of Chen Pi. Chen Pi is actually not easy to write. It is quite difficult to make the protagonist a central character without being obtrusive. What I dislike the most in fanfics is that the protagonist relies on his own knowledge, or the author deliberately exalts the protagonist and weakens the characters in the original book. There is even a sense of nobility revealed between the lines. This book is just right, and it can be seen that the author has carefully understood the original text. At least few people write about Chen Pi's Huang Kui experience at the beginning. Most people read fanfics because they like the original characters. I don't understand why some authors belittle the original characters. At least in my opinion, no matter what type of person they are, they are all three-dimensional and real. Some people like to judge the original characters from a God's perspective. It's really disgusting. I hope the author will continue to work hard. How can I live without your food [crying][crying][crying]

It's really good-looking, the writing is very delicate, and I really like the heroine's character. [I have always been stingy. If the full score is ten points, then I care that a person is only willing to give one point at most. But if I give one point, I will show five points and let others feel ten points. I have benefited a lot, and I hope the heroine can keep it up and keep her ten points to herself.

Very nice! ! ! ! But I don't want a male lead and I don't want a cp [crying] [crying] [crying] Mainly because I'm embarrassed (beeping quietly). But in the end, it's up to the author. Come on, author! ! ! [Love][love][love] The more I read, the more I like the character of the heroine [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] The main reason is that the writing is smooth and comfortable to watch. You can read it calmly. Help, the author is faster and more fluent [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

This book is really super good-looking. It's the first time I've seen a tomb-robbing fanfic that's so close to the characters but not too obtrusive. Mingzhu and everyone are really excited about it. It's so exciting for everyone. Except that the update progress is a bit slow, I don't think there is any problem. It would be better if it could be faster. I couldn't believe this was an article in 2023 at first. I just wrote the beginning according to the author's intention. It really made me jump up and down behind the screen. I hope the author can fill in the pit well. Don't give up. It's really super beautiful. It would be even better if it could update 10,000 words every day [Blow kiss]

This novel is really beautiful, and everyone in Laojiumen is described very charmingly. Of course, the most powerful one is Mingzhu. She was particularly shocked when she saw that she had deduced the Wang family by herself. Mingzhu really had her own ideas at every step. Of course, some people compare Lei Mingzhu to kneeling twice, but I feel that Mingzhu's two steps were really wonderful, because every time she knelt down, it was a big breakthrough. The first time Chen Pi took her in his heart, the second time Zhang Qishan truly felt the words "Cousin, I am willing to accompany you through thick and thin." DaDa must not give up, just update slowly. DaDa writes super well. I will definitely finish this novel in the end! ! !

It's really special, the angle is amazing, and it's a great book This book is a masterpiece, why is it not rated highly?

It's good to watch, the brighter the pearl. I hope the CP is Chen Pi A Si. She is very frustrated. The heroine's family is in trouble and she needs to go to Changsha to find the Zhang family. She first met Chen Pi A Si. When she was still very young, she was broke and barely survived with her murderous and ruthless personality. The heroine hopes that Chen Pi can be her bodyguard. Escorted to Changsha, one hundred coins per life. You saved me and I saved you along the way. When we arrived in Changsha, we also had an emotional connection with each other. The heroine had a system, but it was not very useful and appeared. Later, Chen Pi became Er Erhong's apprentice. The heroine is Zhang Qishan's cousin. For the time being, see here

It's a little awkward at the front, but it gets better and better as you go back, and the interactions with everyone are so cute. I like how the heroine is portrayed, she is self-interested but not bad (in my opinion). Anyway, from my perspective, I can understand and appreciate her thoughts and actions. Chen Pi also writes it very well. It is recommended not to read the paragraph reviews of the previous chapters, as it will really affect your mood. The advantage of this paragraph review is that it allows readers to actively comment and communicate about the plot. The disadvantage is that readers can easily quarrel over some inexplicable things. The things that are unclear may be the author's foreshadowing. If you have questions, wait until you finish this chapter or read a few more chapters and you will find that it corresponds to the previous article.

Very good looking. I love watching tangerine peel as a dog (even) I don't want to watch it anymore. You tricked me into coming in to watch Kowtow😫It's collected.