My Little Pony: An Unexpected Addition to the Sirens

If you read it, please give me some suggestions. New author [I understand]

Come on! I like you. I think the number of words in a chapter can be a little more, and the content should be more detailed. To be a good author, you have to learn to bury the secret. In other words, you must bury it. As long as you keep updating, you will always support it. Friendship is magic!

It's very beautiful, but there are so few pictures. It's not enough to see. Author, haven't you raised enough? Send it out quickly

Is the protagonist a villain? Is there a female protagonist? (I really hope there is no female protagonist. If there is a female protagonist, it won't be Twilight. [I'm about to cry].) It's very well written.

I've only seen Chapter 9 so far To be honest, I originally wanted to give it 4 stars. After all, the constant switching between first-person and third-person is a major drawback. No matter which person you are used to, you will find it uncomfortable. But think about it, let's forget it After all, there aren't many writers about pony novels, and it's rare to find one that's decent enough to read from the beginning. The extra star should be used as a support for the new author. I just hope that I can pay attention to the personal issue in the future.

A potential My Little Pony fan, the writing may have some shortcomings in the early stage, but it is gradually getting better. I hope the author's works will get better and better, and I also hope that this book can be updated continuously. Maybe changing the cover can attract more people to watch it? I finished reading it in one afternoon. As a new author, it is pretty good. I just hope that the ending will not be just a dream. In addition, the author can provide a detailed description of the main character's appearance. Maybe he can draw it when he has time. The author may suddenly have some inspiration at certain moments, which can be written down somewhere. In addition, I wish the author a bright future and don't delay his studies while updating the novel. I also wish the author and his family peace and prosperity. Come on! In the future, I will be admitted to a good university and read novels every day [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

As long as you don't do Taoism, you can do it with mythical beasts. It's mainly because it's too weird to play Taoism in that magical world.

It's rare to see someone writing fan fiction about Equestria Girls. Come on, author, write something unique.

Overall it's pretty good, the start is brilliant, but there are a few things that aren't so good. The writing in the early stage was not very good, and it has already passed, so I won't mention it for now. It's mainly a problem with the protagonist, I feel like the plot just passed by in a blur. First I traveled through time in a daze, and then started to turn into various white lotuses, and finally turned black. I traveled through the mirror to Equestria, and unknowingly made enemies with Rainbow Dash. This was actually quite good. Not only did I have a reason to continue to turn dark, but I could also wash it out. In the end, I got better again in a daze. Then I saved Ma Mu in a daze, and finally rescued M6 again. Are we so aggrieved? The last two questions are: 1. Return to the main line, 2. Update as soon as possible. Five stars.

Holy shit, even though the main character is a bit miserable, it's really entertaining. I really like it, but why are the main characters so unlikable? (Especially Rainbow Dash, although she behaved similarly in any episode of My Little Pony Equestria Girls Siren)