Plan to Move the World

The topic selection is good, and the previous outline is considered a normal start, but from the outline to the detailed outline, it is average, and from the detailed outline to the specific events, it is not satisfactory. The first scene should be about counselors discussing the world, but it is limited to the father choosing his son. Think about it, both the Longzhong pair and the real Zhou Yu in history had made big plans on how to unify the world, and then they took it step by step. In the second scene of the battlefield, the general only knows how to run rampant. How come he is ranked tenth on the ranking list? At least he copied it from history. The protagonist comes on stage, but the author is not good at ending the story without writing details. It was supposed to be two big climaxes, and no matter which scene, several chapters could be written separately. The battlefield scene could have been written with tens of thousands of words. Giving four stars is a lot of encouragement. The author is probably a novice, and has not yet learned how to tactfully use the admiration and admiration of the miscellaneous fish to set off the protagonist (of course, he has not written any wonderful parts). Writing can be learned and skills can be improved. Next time, it will be better to choose a direction that the author is good at.

This book is very good, the writing is also good, the quality is very good, and the plot design is very reasonable. The author needs to work hard!

It's a very good book, and everyone's IQ is online, but I feel like not many people read it? Didn't see any comments It's such a good book, but I feel like not many people read it.

It's very interesting to watch, with ups and downs of the plot, hidden mysteries, and a lot of foreshadowing.

I think it's okay, I watched it all in one go