What's Wrong with Illiteracy? Is Illiteracy Delaying My Becoming an Immortal?

His master asked, "Disciple, are you tired? Come and give me a hug. If you are exhausted, I will feel very sorry for you."

The writing is really good. The character outline and emotions of each character are very clear. I don't praise it randomly, but it is really comfortable to watch. The protagonist also has the innocence and ignorance he should have. He hopes that everyone who treats him well will live well.

Bai Yongning glanced at the beautiful girl over there, especially her pair of slender and beautiful legs. He was about to remind Xuan Mingzi, but the man already said: "Good disciple, the master also thinks these legs are very good."

I really love this kind of book. I can't accurately express my fondness for this book in words, but I just feel that the characters are definitely not like paper people. They are all free individuals with different positions and thoughts.

This book was written rather thoughtfully. In fact, I have tried to write novels before, but there were always problems such as unreasonable plots and unrealistic plots. Because I have experienced it myself, I am still willing to take a few minutes to evaluate this book and give encouragement to the author for his hard work.

System: Go help the elders of your sect clean up. I will give you a great opportunity. Lao Bai knew a few of them at a glance and said, "I'll beat your elders and give you a chance." So that night, he was squatting, tiptoeing, cautious, sacking, and saping, heartbreaking.

To be honest, I personally am not very picky about novels, but I don't read everything. I don't like some that are vulgar and poorly written, but this book just avoids these, and the author also writes a lot of things that make people think deeply.

The reason for the existence of novels is probably to provide psychological comfort. In books, you can find empathy and hope. Therefore, the novel will be a bit idealistic, but the book will not be overly exaggerated.

Super super super super beautiful! But why didn't I get it at the end of the game? Do you know how I felt when I was watching and looking forward to further development? I went crazy, I yelled, I punched and kicked! Author, I beg you to update quickly

The doctor said: "Actually, your master's disease is not too serious. As long as you have money," Lao Bai said with a wicked smile, "Master, where is your money? We won't save your life. You just left the money and left it for your apprentice to eat, drink and have fun."

The author is not yet weaned

It's not easy to start a business at such a young age.

The first Lao Bai: I am an upright person! No, I'm going to be late for morning class soon. I hurry. After cultivating with immortals for many years, my god, I'm going to be late, so I won't go and I'll find a yao.

The protagonist's character is clear, not procrastinating, and the plot is interesting. It is quite different from other brainless immortal cultivators, but the protagonist's cultivation must be put on the agenda.

Good-looking means good-looking, but little means really little.

Boldly guessing that the male protagonist was a big villain in his previous life, and then Xuan Mingzi killed the male protagonist for the sake of the road, so the mission failed, and Xuan Mingzi had to retrain the male protagonist to use the subsystem?

The protagonist's sister has become a fairy? Did you remember correctly... This little girl is also a genius?

Xuan Mingzi is really a true character, but why would the male protagonist turn against him when he learns the truth? Moreover, the task of cultivating the male protagonist has been started for four thousand years. Is there any past and present life?

Since Long Yutong had already sensed something was wrong, why didn't he make plans earlier? What else was put inside her body. It's a bit sad that the senior brothers who are good friends on the surface are actually helping others to do evil.

You are not a simple writer. I even wonder if you have written some of the short articles that I like to read at night? Be honest.

The protagonist won't be a demon cultivator in the end, right? After all, the monster execution prompted by Xuan Mingzi's system refers to him, but what does he have to do with Xuan Mingzi?

I originally thought that the protagonist was a little boy, but in the end he actually regarded Long Yutong as the God of Wealth.

Xuan Mingzi's character is a bit like an old naughty boy, but he is also kind and friendly in front of his disciples, but he doesn't have any face in front of others.

I quite like such a master who is enlightened and protects his shortcomings. He will help the male protagonist to get revenge and support him. With the strong master, the male protagonist finally becomes less cowardly.

Putting aside everything else, just from the naming of the chapters, you can see that the author really put his heart into it and it is worth reading.

Book friends, this is actually okay. As far as the details of the expressions of these characters are concerned, the author's descriptions are still very detailed.

Overall, the pace of this book is very good, and the writing style is barely passable. It is actually worth reading.

The plot is so exciting that I almost wanted to go back in time once I watched it. Every link is so tightly linked that it doesn't feel like it's dragging out.

This book is very good. The author's writing rhythm is very good, which makes me really see the flavor of traditional old fantasy on this platform.

The plot of the story is well paced, and things that need to be set up and fixed are also done, but I don't know how the climax will be written later.