The System I Bound to Is Incompatible with This World

What is the title of this book? It feels a bit like selling a sheep over a dog's head. I thought the protagonist would build a spaceship when the strange invasion occurs, run away with his own people, and then mock all mankind before running away. It is best to run away with their desperate eyes. Then the weird invasion started, and they were still falling in love there, with something in their brains, and then they gave away shares and told the heroine that they were not from this world. Even if it was a book written by a newbie, it wouldn't be like this, right? So this book looked like a piece of shit to me.

@Why are you so serious? Can the author not have a heroine? Science and technology novels without female protagonists are easier to write. Please

Thank you readers for your support. The author is a newbie and has many shortcomings. If you find any problems, please criticize and correct them. I will try my best to avoid them in the future. Thank you again.

It's too messy and complicated. In just a few chapters, the protagonist encounters another time traveler with a system. In the next chapter, there is a strange invasion. The protagonist's goal is to escape from this world within a hundred years.

The whole book is completely different. The pace is slow and there is no sense of urgency at all, and there is nothing exciting about it. The emotions and description of the heroine are even more difficult to describe in one sentence. Let's talk about articles about stocking up for the doomsday. If you don't hurry up and save supplies to improve your strength when the end is approaching, your wife will still be addicted to the entertainment industry and enjoy it. Let's talk about thrillers and weird stories. There is no scary atmosphere at all. The main focus is on starting a company to develop technology, and there are a few weird examples interspersed with it, which makes you feel completely calm. Let's talk about science and technology systems. I don't think this system is useful in analyzing and researching weird things. I also met a fellow with an entertainment system.

If you can, the author, you can read the comments I wrote for Chapter 205. I hope you can write better and better, because there are very few novels on this subject like Tomato. Most of the time-travel portal novels are actually single-world novels with group portraits, prehistoric novels, cultivating immortals and manifesting saints, and spiritual energy recovery fusion novels. They also prefer single combat power and look down on small worlds. If the small world entertainment content is weird, for example, the names are not right, and the background world story is unreasonable. Forced fusion is very inconsistent, which leads to the only way to increase the combat power, and it becomes "invincible in the world, and the enemy comes from the sky." Most of the combat power has collapsed. Technological time travel stories like yours are easier to write and interesting, and are much better than pure technological development stories. In the end, pure technology stories tend to become more and more powerful and boring. To be honest, they are somewhat similar to the prehistoric and immortal fantasy stories about personal power. In the end, they also have the same meaning as combat power. Collapse, what kind of galactic empire, god-level civilization, sounds very domineering and feels very powerful. When I read it myself, it felt like ancient national wars, like medieval hegemony, always fighting and killing, and fell into the cycle of "invincible under heaven, enemy coming from heaven", that is, electronic chips tied to wooden sticks as spears. I think the other Tomato book (Who is Calling the Fleet) is not as good as yours, because it seems to be from multiple generations. Realm travel, in fact, the development is too monotonous, and there is no background map like the Sea of Chaos, so I think it is still a single group portrait article, and the author has let himself go. But after all, the author can write whatever he likes. I also wrote some example stories in Chapter 205. Of course, it is just my thoughts as a reader. It would be great if it can help you. Finally, hurry up and code! Come on 🤭

Except for some poisonous points, everything else is good. That Yiyi is really trying to persuade her to leave. I already frowned when I took her with me, and it was even more outrageous to be with Huang Mao. When I finally left to build a safe house and spaceship for such a precious thing and cut the last wave of leeks, I frowned. Good guy, the protagonist owed her a lot in his previous life, right? As for the heroine, just ignore it. I always thought that Yiyi would die and trigger the protagonist to go further or something, so I continued watching. I didn't expect such a plot. That's fine, don't do this again later. I almost got poisoned to death. I heard that there is no author. Since you are a newbie, I won't scold you for hiding shit in your rice.

I thought it was a weird technological war, but it fell straight into the cliche. If you already have a system and are still playing drones, the Terminator will be more sci-fi than you.

Get a memory eraser to clear the memory of Huang Mao, kill Huang Mao, and then develop yourself with a ideological stamp. Those who board the spaceship to escape from the world must accept the ideological stamp "Huang Mao is the biggest poisonous point in this book"

After reading Chapter 60, to be honest, the subject matter is good, but the mechanized body is undoubtedly a failure. To be honest, in my opinion, unless we reach a truly desperate situation, the mechanized body is undoubtedly consuming the human body's potential (a desperate situation is the kind where the earth explodes at the beginning and the protagonist is a computer at the beginning). The protagonist is in more than 50 chapters. Judging from the situation, there are actually many solutions. For example, building a simple armor does not necessarily have to be as powerful as Iron Man. It just needs full coverage + will not affect the activities too much. Or it can be monitored at all times and protected by a large number of drones. Anyway, it is not a desperate situation... It feels like the protagonist is digging his own grave. . . It started like this... How could I feel like it was going to collapse?