Xianwu Daming, Starting as a Ghost Cultivator and a Royal Guard

Well, Tomato is one of the few books that doesn't escape the fighting process. Next is the subjective opinion. The author has great potential and the writing is very good, but he still lacks grasp of many details, including characters. It can be seen that the author is a rising star.

It's great to watch. I love the protagonist's crazy character. I hope there won't be a female protagonist. I feel like there won't be a female protagonist with the character of the protagonist. If there is a female protagonist, I hope the author will explain it earlier so that I can leave. (PS has no other meaning, just personal preference. The author still writes well)

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the content and writing are good, but there are also flaws. The writing style is relatively calm and plain, which makes it comfortable to read. When reading this book, it is not recommended to read the comments section. At least that's the case now. Sorry, please change the rating. The author's writing style needs to be improved, his character creation ability is not enough, and the language dialogue between the characters is not very good. Overall, it is okay.

The protagonist is a bit crazy, but the character of the protagonist is still very full, and the writing is also very good. It is a rare good book in Tomato. The only shortcoming is that it is too short, it is too short! Urgent update! Urgent update!

It's very interesting, at least for me. It seems a bit complicated and disconnected from Fenghuo's style of writing a bunch of branch plots and then promoting the main plot, but I think it's very good. It's really shaping each character. Regarding the lack of data, I can't do anything about it. Forgive me for being a book reader.

A basic online IQ, self-justifying logic, decisive characters, rich enough reversals and a wide-open pattern are all the advantages of this book. It is different from traditional novels in many ways. For example, the protagonist's strength does not increase from scratch. In the beginning, it took several months of training in just one sentence. The starting point was hundreds of households. Then the cultivation part was divided into basic value (cultivation level) and skill multiplier (immortal method practiced). As long as the skill multiplier is high enough, you can still fight even if the basic value is not enough. To sum up, this is a novel that is different from traditional novels and cool novels. The protagonist has a charming personality, and the plot and story are exciting enough while ensuring maximum logical perfection. I think it can be called an excellent novel.

The novel is good. The author describes the characters in it very carefully, the writing is very solid, and the portrayal of the protagonist is also quite good. It is also one of the few authors I have seen in Tomato that writes better fighting scenes. The novel is quite good. For those who specifically read negative reviews to judge whether or not to read this novel, I suggest you read it first and then decide whether to read it or not. What others say should be judged based on your own preferences. What others say may not be correct, just in case others just don't like this type of thing.

It's so good. It's so good. I've read more than 200 chapters from the beginning. I didn't want to read chapter by chapter in the middle. I kept reading it (actually I forgot, I added a lot of books, and this one is at the bottom). I started reading it from the time when Princess Donghai ran away with Bai Yujing. The image of the protagonist was so profound that I could recall his previous resourcefulness and madness as soon as I continued reading, and it was deeply imprinted in my mind. The sun (the protagonist) is indeed the sun, the sun imprinted in my mind. Moreover, everyone in this book has his or her own character. Although it is an invincible book about group portraits, the sun is sometimes covered by dark clouds (I hope the sun will not trouble me). Hahaha. However, I have read too many novels and no longer have the thinking of high school, so I don't need to use fancy words to describe it. Believe me, take a look for yourself. It is a great book (I think it is great on 🍅), and the sun will also be pleased [smile] [smile] [smile] Hahaha Add one more: Look at my reading time. You can really comment only if you really read it (the reading time on the home page is a bit short because I didn't use Pomodoro at the beginning) I really hope that Xu Miaojin is the heroine (at first I saw that there was no heroine, but a single heroine is also possible, and Taeyang has owed her so many favors, what's wrong with committing herself to each other [laughing]), I really hope that Xu Miaojin is the heroine, really

It's still pretty good. I feel like I've watched a lot of crazy-type protagonists recently. This book does give a lot of roles to female characters, and there are many outstanding and distinctive female characters. Don't go down the road of no return with a female protagonist. Nice looking, recommended

This book is really surprisingly good. I read it several times but was dissuaded by the name. This time I carefully read dozens of chapters and it was very interesting. First, the social system framework of this book is quite reasonable, and it is obvious that the author has put his heart into it. How a world with high martial arts fantasy should operate, what role each organization plays, what their demands are, and what their self-perception is are all reflected in this. Regardless of whether this concept is correct or not, it does build a logical world. For this reason, this book should not be lower than four stars. It has a clear background in dozens of chapters, which is really rare. It is much better than those articles that expand the map once for dozens of chapters and then repeat the previous events. Second, the description of the characters is relatively natural. There are three things I want to praise. One is that the characters have their own focus in life, which is great. When the character does not exist simply for the plot of the protagonist, the character can become more vivid. The other is that the character's personality is not very single, various personalities exist, and through the description, you can clearly feel the authenticity of the character. There is not only greed for money, lust, and attachment to the strong, but also integrity and grudges that must be investigated. Finally, what I like most is that the character's personality and related growth experience can be matched. Such writing is not just code words, but a real sense of story. Third, the overall narrative of this book is not the kind of restaurant, brothel, college, sect, treasure land that Xiaobai writes, and then inexplicable disputes occur in these places, followed by fights and killings. The overall story is a narrative structure, not a narrative structure. What different characters do has a certain purpose, rather than the false and empty concept of simply becoming stronger as in Xiaobai's article. The readability is relatively high, and it is not boring. I hope it can be maintained in the future. Don't write a hundred chapters and then change people to write a running account. Fourth, I also like the cultivation system in it, but I guess it is not very friendly to readers who have not read the novel for a long time. Cultivation is initiated by a master. Cultivation depends on individuals. How come there are so many? One secret book today and another secret book tomorrow. You have to understand and improve everything by yourself to the state that best suits you, and become stronger step by step in the improvement process. The protagonist becomes stronger because you can see that he is working hard, experimenting, and understanding, rather than suddenly becoming super powerful after reading a few skill cheats. This is not a human, this is an AI machine stacking the database. To sum up, this should be a novel that Tomato is surprised to see. Although the score of 9.3 Is much better than the other 9.8/9.9, The main character is a bit crazy, but it is not obtrusive, and it is not deliberately funny for the sake of being funny. It is quite natural and worth recommending. This is the second book I've written a review to praise in the past year. After seeing the updated latest chapters, I discovered a point. This book is most suitable for reading one volume at a time. The two or three chapters are relatively messy because the author has laid out a lot of things and a lot of the content is interconnected. Two or three chapters have to change three or four perspectives. The advantage is that the picture is very rich, but the disadvantage is that it tests the patience of the readers, so it is not friendly to those who like to read short stories and quickly feel refreshed. As someone said in the chapter review, this book is very similar to anime, and high level does not mean high combat power. One thing I like very much is that in the Xiaobai text, intelligence, talent, family background, sect, and power are just the background, but in this book, you can clearly see that these things can bring real effects. You can judge whether a character is smart or not by the character's behavior, rather than the author saying that the person is smart; you can also see characters with various talents using their talents to produce outstanding performances; you can also see that people from family backgrounds and sects have different insights from casual cultivators; you can also see that the pursuits of different forces are different, and they are together because of their different pursuits, rather than ganging up to dominate like bandits. This is a story-telling novel. Sometimes I have a sense of immediateness as when I read Jin Yong's novels before. It is also segment by segment. Various events are connected in a big main line. The events and the main line are closely related but independent, just like the narrative style of Tian Long Ba Bu. The style is quite similar, maybe because our generation is used to reading novels written in this way, so we accept it easily, while the younger generation is used to reading faster-paced and exciting novels, so they will find this writing method messy, unpleasant, and annoying. Everyone should choose what they like. If you like to read slowly, you can consider this book. If you like to read a book every two days and feel refreshed quickly, this book is not suitable. After reading 800+ chapters, the general idea of ​​this novel is clear. This is not a spoiler, it is just an outline of the main line I guessed. The Taiping Scroll, I think, is more like the Heaven-defeating Scroll, or the Tiandao Scroll. This volume is to describe what kind of heaven it is; the Qingdi Scroll is to introduce various forces and what each force is pursuing; the Zhuge Scroll is to tear a hole in the struggle between heaven, man, and god; I guess there are two more volumes that should be over, one volume puts the entire contradiction on the bright side, and the other volume brings a Ragnarok. I saw the latest Donghai volume, and I don't know whether it's because I have exhausted my talents or because the author has no intention to write a book. The logic of the plot is declining, the supporting characters have begun to lose their wits, and the bloody plot has begun to appear. The silly and sweet supporting actress is completely inconsistent with the character's experience and cognition. She does some stupid things and only uses words to fill the plot. The author stopped for a while, adjusted, and regained his level. He said that The East China Sea Volume is only halfway through the novel, so he can read it with peace of mind after a while.

I've read it. This book is very good. The main character criticizes men like crazy, but his standing is not broken. The main character has a problem, but why do I feel that other people's problems are better [face covering] and why everyone doesn't want a female protagonist (I haven't seen a female protagonist until I'm halfway through). I'm not very good at writing reviews. If you have any questions, please ask [Like] The writing on the fighting aspect is very good. It's definitely a pleasure to read this volume in one go.

This book is very well written. There are a lot of foreshadowings from the beginning of the diary. What I like the most is the character of the protagonist, our Dongzi, who is really in love and totally crazy about handsome men. Of course, Dongzi is also cute from my perspective. With Dongzi's smart character, one step counts as 100 steps. She has a very good brain. It can be said that she is basically an independent person who is the best at layout but does not follow the rules in the book. The cruelest thing about Dongzi is that he doesn't care about getting hurt at all, as long as he has fun, haha, especially when he comes up and takes out his soul and puts it in the furnace and roasts it to death for the system, it's really crazy! Real love! He is a protagonist with online IQ, online strength, and crazy criticism! Then there is the biggest foreshadowing of the underworld and the reason for crossing over. Let me wait and see.

The story is still attractive, but there is indeed too much off-screen talking, and the male protagonist is not considered crazy to me, but more like a severe secondary disease. Including the off-screen jokes for the male protagonist and the dialogue with some characters, they are all like a second grade. I don't want to criticize it wildly. After all, many things do not follow logic. The male protagonist still has a lot of behavioral logic, but he is just different from the pursuits of people in this world. I haven't seen the update yet. Although there are some shortcomings, the plot and characters all stand up.

I barely read part of it, so I can tell you my feelings. It's well written, so there's nothing wrong with it. The plot design is very exciting, the characters are also unique, and the plot is very unique. However, there are some problems with the chapters I have read so far. The combat power is a bit vague. The combat power of Bai Wangdong's four ghost spirits can match a Qianhu with a semi-complete body gradient of 1.5. The combat power of the six ghost spirits has improved so far, but the introduction of the cultivation realm is very vague. He has been staying in the Lingyuan realm, and the person around him has started Xuan Yi, which feels very awkward. If you say that his tempo is slow and his combat power has improved a lot, but if you say that his tempo is fast and his realm is motionless and fuzzy, it gives me the feeling that he has forgotten the setting of the realm of cultivation. Another issue is the plot. To be honest, after reading hundreds of chapters, I couldn't watch it many times. It's not that the plot design is boring, it's exciting. But it is too compact, things are non-stop and busy all the time. No matter how exciting the plot is, you will feel a little tired after watching it one after another. Then there are no other issues. I think it looks pretty good. If it's not serious, I don't need to worry about the above issues. It just represents my personal opinion.

A very good book, I would say it as a bookworm. The supporting characters are also described with flesh and blood. [Learned][Please update] I really like this kind of sickly protagonist [laughs]

It's really good. I have read the volume of Qunying. The reading time can tell everything. The rating really shouldn't be so low. It should be at least 9.5 Or above. The protagonist is very smart, crazy but sensible. They say that the protagonist does not take other people's lives seriously. He still has a gentle side. Now he has 11 ghosts. The only thing I think is a fly in the ointment. The thing is that the character Lan Kui is a bit annoying. Write more plots about the protagonist suppressing her. Really, this person is very annoying. He uses what the protagonist teaches him to fight against the protagonist. Although this highlights the contradictions and highlights the ups and downs of the plot, write more about the protagonist suppressing Lan Kui and give the protagonist a little halo. Overall, it is very good. It is a very good book. Hope the update will be faster

It is very well written and has received very good reviews in the online literary world. It must have a narrative and a plot, and it must be based on real history. The imagination is also good, and the setting is not unconventional. The writing is also good, the overall logic is smooth, and the plot is well detailed. The author's style may be more life-like and more realistic, but it's already very good to write like this. But the background is fantasy and martial arts, so the detailed description still requires some bolder romantic imagination, like the Milky Way Falling into the Nine Heavens, or even beyond. The author may write a serial potion in his next book, or something with a bit of western fantasy. The author will definitely write it well. This protagonist is simply a real clown without clown costumes. He is crazy, loves to act, jumps out, and has a little bit of horror. I really like it.

Very nice. The author's plot transitions smoothly and is full of twists and turns. It also made me, a clever and fun-loving reader, make random guesses in the comment area. No loss in investing. It's just... Embarrassing and exciting. Once again, I would like to praise the rhythm of the story. It is very comfortable, and the segmented layout is also very familiar. It is comfortable to watch on different devices. The character of the protagonist is a refined and self-interested prisoner of pleasure, and he is a crazy person.

It's pretty good, everyone's IQ is pretty good, the characters are all very good, the plot is also very good, and the Taiping chapter is quite exciting. Is it the protagonist, who is from one hundred households and one deputy from one thousand households, a polished commander? Why have you never sent any subordinates? All by myself

I think it's quite interesting. In the small part I've watched so far, the male protagonist has a clear goal and won't change it because of some things. The author's writing style is also outstanding, and his control of the storyline is also good. You can also [eat melon] [eat melon]

This is the most immersive novel I have seen on Tomato so far. Unlike other cool articles that forcefully arrange illogical cool points just to make things fun, every cool point in this book comes out naturally. The reactions of everyone, whether it is the male protagonist or the rest of the people, make you feel real. This is a world of the weak and the strong, and this is a cannibalistic world. The male protagonist's character is also very likeable, crazy but not lacking in intelligence, and there is some humor in his decisive killing. Anyone and anything can become a means to achieve the goal in the hands of the male protagonist. No matter whether it is bloody or not, whether it is crazy or not, the main focus is a happy heart. To be honest, after staying in the dark and high-pressure real society for a long time, this is what I have imagined. The main shortcoming is that the update is too slow. Although the author's writing is good, the plot does not have a quick breaking point. Often a big plot can get a lot of excitement after a big plot. Each big plot has about 100 chapters? The author should also be aware, so the small events in the big plot are also somewhat enjoyable. This is the third time I have read this book, and it takes me a long time to read each time. Come on, author! ! Wait for me to come back to see you in three months [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] [Send my heart]

It is a rare good book in terms of storyline and characters. I have been pursuing this book for a long time. It has gone from no one interested to a rating of 9 or so (although it is still a bit unread by the more stable 300+, but at least there are a lot more people reading it). I remember that when the author wanted to kill it directly after finishing the Yin Dragon Veins due to poor traffic, I also wanted to give the author a reward out of regret ( Although I later gave a reward for my love (hehe) I was following updates tonight normally, so I had nothing to do and opened the book review and read it. I felt dissatisfied. I saw that there were many people who were persuaded to quit the book under the two-star review, and I thought about criticizing the original author. Come to think of it, people have different opinions. In addition, I really don't remember the poisonous points mentioned in those reviews. It's not easy to respond in a targeted manner, and it's not good to test his horse directly. After thinking about it, I posted this review, with a little bit of rambling, to briefly record my few follow-up updates. The protagonist's image is similar to that of Crazy Pi, maybe a single female protagonist? (I remember I read this book because of the single female protagonist) It's a bit too laid-back. The protagonist's brain is pretty good. There's really nothing to say about the investigation, but I feel that the combat power is a bit broken. The protagonist seems to be in the second realm, with eleven ghost beads, and is almost invincible (but this is not too poisonous for me hhh). In addition, I think the interaction between Bai and Xu is also quite interesting. Bai Bai has a poisonous tongue✖️Tsundere tool man Xu? I think it's pretty cool... I'll comment later if there's anything else I want to say hh [I learned it] Also, if you see my book review, don't scold me. I have a glassy heart. If you scold me, you are right [laughs] I have been following this book for three years and have stopped several times. I don't know if I will be able to finish it in my lifetime [laughs]

It's good-looking, the whole text has a rhythm, the story is clear and focused, and the writing is smooth. I hope the author will continue to update the content in the future and don't interrupt or stop updating it. Please write more words and ask for updates [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

Okay, I have read Chapter 60 so far, the plot logic is online, and the character divisions are quite clear. The protagonist is a good person who will do whatever it takes to achieve the goal but will stick to his own morals. As far as the content in Chapter 60 is concerned, I don't think this book will be the kind of ancient harem stallion novel about picking up concubines when seeing a woman. It will not have descriptions that hinder the plot and combat power. It will be a logical Jianghu novel with a little reasoning and a system of cultivating immortals. I think it is worth reading the beginning to get a taste. This chapter is quite exciting. The foreshadowing of the previous ten chapters has reached this chapter, and the plot and reasoning have reached a climax. I really look forward to the next stab, hehe. The specific content will not be spoiled in the comment area. If you are interested, please comment and give a five-star rating in advance to prepare for the subsequent development. Finally, 9.3 Is still too low and too few people have read it. According to the Tomato rating, this book should be slightly higher at 9.6. Chapter 460, this is the end of the second volume. The writing is really great. Compared with the common temporary explosion in battle, this book starts with the protagonist's strength being inferior to the villain, and then writes about the battle of wits and reasoning. Finally, he stands on the villain's head and says to him "I am on the fifth floor". There are also many fights in the book and the writing is very exciting. The plot of the book is not one in which the protagonist defeats the final boss with all his strength and everything ends. Instead, the protagonist mobilizes various talents from around him based on existing resources. It is not like winning two and losing one in a track and field horse race. It is based on a step-by-step arrangement to crush everything the opponent wants to do, while maintaining the original combat power and plot logic. It's really an enjoyable book that doesn't feel inconsistent in terms of plot and combat power. It's very enjoyable to read. However, it's a pity that the data in the book is so poor. I hope the author can stick to it.

Good looking good looking good looking The author is very good at creating characters There are no Facebook people and no tool people. The whole world is portrayed with a super sense of reality. I really don't like this kind of novels with female protagonists. But seeing as the author's writing style is so powerful, I don't exclude the possibility of a female protagonist appearing. I feel like the author still has a little difficulty writing group portraits. After Chapter 90, it's a bit confusing when describing multiple perspectives. I can't quite understand it after reading it once. I have to stop and think about the causes and consequences, which affects the smoothness of reading. Moreover, changing the perspective will inexplicably interrupt the impression of the protagonist himself. Especially the plot of Lu Fu, I really don't feel like it's a bonus, it just makes the camera switch more and makes the reading more confusing. Moreover, in the end, I didn't understand what it had to do with the plot. Is it just used to show the battle of the immortal cultivators, or the abilities of the supporting characters? However, at such a critical moment in the dungeon, using a lot of space to describe these things really has no other effect besides confusing and distracting people. It would be really cool if there were a lot of loose plots, dropped here and there, camera cuts, and then finally gathered together to advance the chapter or deepen the characterization in an instant. But it keeps spreading, and then there is no more, which really consumes the mind of reading. Mainly because it makes people unable to understand... But I hope it will be a long novel, and I believe the author will gradually improve. After all, the basic writing style is still very good. Supplementary review again. I really persisted in reading the first volume. Overall, the shortcomings are not concealed. The author is also very active in making continuous progress. There are not that many good Tomato books. I hope everyone will be more tolerant towards the author.

I have been following this book for almost two years, from tens of thousands of words to now 3 million words. In my mind, this book ranks first, followed by The Night Comes Horror. The writing is not bad, the plot is very coherent, and the protagonist is very strong. Many plots are well designed. What surprised me most is the author's characterization of Xiao Bai. He really has his own personality charm and characteristics. He is confident, powerful, crazy, and has a big picture view. His IQ is also very high, and he can plan many things in advance. In my opinion, the only shortcoming of this book is that it is a bit slow to update. The author writes it in chapters. Each large chapter has its own story. Many people read a book after reading a large chapter. One time, there are dozens or hundreds of chapters. The cycle is too long, which will lead to When reading a book, you will forget some foreshadowing or some important plot characters. This will make some readers lose interest in reading and run away. If the author can be more diligent in updating, I believe that the data of this book can be doubled. Just look at the reading time and you will know

It looks good. I started time travel and then refined the system. Finally, there is a cool article about the time traveler killing the system with unknown origins. The male protagonist has no worries and lives his life in a game. He has a crazy and out-of-the-box personality but still retains his humanity. The fairy tale novel is interspersed with some plots of solving cases and fighting wits and courage, making the routine of fighting monsters and upgrading the novel more interesting and readable. After reading a lot of fairy tales, I have become tired of many of the routines, but the plot of this book is eye-catching. I highly recommend it to readers who are reading books [Like][Like][Like]

This is a Xianxia T1 level novel at the starting point, with excellent character creation and a tight narrative rhythm. There is a lot of content that I want to express and it can be reflected in an unobtrusive way. It is a good book worth collecting and reading.

The author's writing style is really good. I have seen the chapter of Shunde Mansion so far, and there is no sign of collapse. I like the character of the protagonist very much. The conflict in character creation is also very good. I don't know if there will be more descriptions of the protagonist's past life. I want to read. People are contradictory creatures. In this troubled world, contradictions inspire the desires in their hearts. In a world dominated by pathology, I like the world view of this world very much, but there are also shining people in this world, right? Master Zhang Xiaotian? I hope it won't be a eunuch, no, I hope not.

The scenes described by the author, as well as the plot, are really attractive. The plot is also developed bit by bit. There is foreshadowing and it does not feel too stiff. The description of the fighting scenes is really enjoyable (I saw some people said it was very slow, but I think it was really enjoyable). Xiaobai is indeed crazy, but I also think Xiaobai is quite gentle. , As for the heroine, if there is a heroine, I hope it is Miss Xu (I like it🥰) but I have only seen the third volume so far, and I don't like that Lan Kui [grievance]