Immortal, the Big Han Mountain Patrolman at the Beginning

Advantages: The protagonist is a hard-working cow who likes to farm. I like such a hard-working protagonist. Disadvantages: In the early stage, the system was too complicated. Later on, the author couldn't bear to upgrade the system. In the early stage, it was regarded as an immortal novel. The protagonist said that I wanted to be stubborn. In the later period, it became an invincible novel. The system even changed to killing enemies to get rewards [face covering]

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Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful.

It's a very different setting. Although it's time travel, except for one poem, it doesn't have anything to do with modern times. It kills decisively without pretending to be a gentleman. Enemies should be killed and women should be taken advantage of. It's not sloppy. The plot setting is also good. It's step by step and there is a system to save lives. It's very satisfying.

Others may think I am being swindled because I gave a novel with such a low score 5 stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐! The novel was not very good at the beginning, but the more I wrote, the better it became! Very suitable for my taste. What others think, but I only make my own comments - the novel is very good, but too short!

I just read the first few chapters. They are very good. The protagonist is not a saint, nor is he a eunuch. Unlike those immortality stories where all the eunuchs are eunuchs. I don't know what will happen next. I will give you five stars for encouragement first.

The whole text is neither procrastinating nor watery, and there is no brainless plot. The protagonist is very stubborn but not cowardly. He just wants to stay alive, but if there is a threat, he will take action without hesitation. The psychological description of the protagonist in the article is very good, consistent with the psychological thinking of the protagonist at each stage of his strength.

The book is good. I recommend this book as a thirty-year-old bookworm. The plot is reasonable, full of ups and downs, and decisive in killing. Although the method of cultivation is different from the traditional cultivation of immortality, it can be understood by people. Come on, I will keep an eye on you. Don't get carried away? Just wait until there is a female protagonist and don't pull her in. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Invincible and beautiful, why is the rating so low?

It's so good, I watched it all day long and I haven't finished it yet! I also think the protagonist's character is pretty good! The early stage is relatively dull, but the later stage becomes more and more exciting! I think the Great Wilderness was the most wonderfully written, and I was so excited to read it! The author will update it very well, I will keep reading it! It's beautiful and exciting. I really want to know what the relationship between Gu Miaozhu and Luo Shui is [laughs]!

The plot develops smoothly, the pace is tight and does not drag... A very good story of cultivating immortality! I hope you continue to work hard and have endless surprises!

Nice! I hope the author keeps it up

This novel is indeed beautiful. Love watching it. But it's very short. I want to wait and see again in the first half of the year. You will write more at this time, right? [KISS] I hope you can speed up 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌈🌈🌈🌈

This book is not a poor seller, has few flaws, is quite enjoyable, and can completely pass the time - of course, this kind of book (fantasy type) is so attractive, but it is also overthinking [laughing] [laughing] - "Code words are not easy", four stars [laugh][laugh]

On the whole, the structure is reasonable and in line with the manifestation of human nature. Different people have different bodies and smells in the three realms and the five elements. People cultivate the same body. Growth follows common sense but outside of change. It is an interesting divine and mysterious novel to read. Not uncomfortable.

The description of the main character in the front, such as the immortal lonely traveler, is eye-catching. The cruel cultivation of immortality in the middle period is also okay. The battles in the back are like matryoshka dolls. I just skipped and watched. Overall, it is not a bad way to pass the time and I can get into it.

The writing is flesh-and-blood, at least the early stage is very interesting. It's really a holy scripture, I can't read a bit of it.

Based on my decades of reading experience, I evaluate the plot, content, and writing style of this book as very good in all aspects! The update speed needs to be improved!

This longevity book is much better than all the books on longevity in 🍅. The rhythm and handling of things are well grasped, making people want to read on. Although it has flaws, it does not hide the beauty, which is in line with my taste. Unlike other immortality books, the pace is so slow that it makes people sleepy, or they deliberately live forever for the sake of immortality, which is very boring.

Overall it's well written! There are no matryoshka dolls like ordinary novels, all the plots are in the same plane, and there seems to be a sequel! Although there are multiple female protagonists, there is no emotional drama, so I can barely accept it. The realm is clear, because there are no matryoshka dolls, so there are only nine realms. Overall, it doesn't have any flaws, because it doesn't have Matryoshka, which I personally like very much, and it doesn't have Madonna, so the rating is slightly lower. It should be considered a masterpiece!

The writing is smooth, the plot setting is reasonable, and the writing is excellent. Good book.

I really like this kind of opening. The protagonist is given a high level of force at the beginning, and he can solve problems quickly without causing any problems for the readers, so that the readers can read on easily and calmly. After leaving Novice Village, I felt bored and uninteresting.

It's not bad, but I can't keep up with the cancellation, because it's too slow, no matter how good the book is, I won't be able to keep up with the rhythm and I won't read it. Look at the tenth picture ahead. That's it. If you keep repeating it and it's not over yet, it's boring.

The emotions are in place, unlike those fools who never break a woman's melon. This is the real man in this book. Just do it.

It's pretty good. At least the outlook is normal, and the character's personality feels pretty good.

It looks quite enjoyable. I hope the author will keep up the good work!

Yes, although it is different from what I imagined, it is generally good. It would be better if I went to the Imperial Mausoleum Continent to write it.

One of the rare good books in recent years, you can read it. Collect it.

It's pretty good. I have the desire to read it.

Well worth reading! A rare good book!