
System Development Starts with Tianlong
系统养成从天龙开始
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 153k Words
- Genre
- Martial Arts
- Subgenre
- Male-Channel Fanfiction
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
532Reads
6.5Score
46Chapters
118Listens
63.9kReads · all time
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The author's description or foreshadowing of emotions is very good. There are basically no novels nowadays. Nowadays, they are all immersive. I still remember Xian Ni, which has very good emotional descriptions. Wang Lin in Xian Ni goes from confusion to certainty in his relationship. At first he regarded love as repaying a favor, but later he became convinced that he likes him. Xian Ni also has no regrets about his relationship.
It's pretty good, but the system is a bit bloated. It is also suggested that if the system is not good enough, the protagonist's qualifications can be improved. Otherwise, the main character will not be able to deduce the skills himself, and the system will not work well and it will feel awkward. The heroine is very well written in this regard. You don't just accept what you see. The heroine herself is also capable.
There are currently over forty chapters, which seems to be okay, because I only know about Jin Yong's martial arts from the original text pictures captured during debates among other book friends and from some popular TV series, so the story written by the author so far is not bad.
The author has done a good job in writing about women, and has paved the way for Wang Yuyan's feelings. Many fan fiction treats Wang Yuyan as a fool and can be easily won.
I like it better. They have upright views and normal logic. Even Wang Yuyan and Xiao Longnu have the same moles. What about Xiaoyao Yufeng as promised? Why is it Hunyuan? Didn't I copy a copy of the Nine Yin Manual a long time ago and then study it again? It's time for the Nine Sun Magic Technique and the Sunflower Book to appear. I won't live in seclusion in the mountains and forget them.
Four stars out of five. I don't know why it only has a rating of 6.5. The writing of this book is smooth and the logic is clear. But the sense of system presence is too low. If it doesn't meet the standards of a really cool book, will it be maliciously rated? Is there any justice left!
Although some plots are not very good, most of the overall plots are still very suitable to my taste. I will give it five stars first. I haven't finished it yet. If the ending is bad and the update is interrupted... Then it will only be one or two stars. I hope this will not happen. So far it is quite good.
This book is really beautiful, clear and coherent! I feel comfortable listening to books
It looks good, I want to continue watching the next world
Preferred type
Can. . Better looking than those mixed martial arts
Not bad, the protagonist's personality is somewhat neutral
Not bad, but not enough
It's pretty cool, looking forward to the follow-up
Okay, okay, quite to your liking
For the author's ability in editing, I give it 4 stars.
Good, good, good
This is another finished book
Not bad, good cheers, author
It's short, but not bad!
Very nice, highly recommended! ! !
It's a pity that it didn't expand further.
Nice! Dou IQ Online
Not bad, you can read it
Pretty good! ! ! Worth recommending
Short, lean and good-looking
Cannot be selected, otherwise I will scold TJ
Good, good, good, good, good, good, good
I'm looking forward to what the next world will be like
It's okay, the writing is quite right.