Time Traveling Moon: Tortured by Morgan to the Point of Death

The book is definitely a good book, and the title is very discouraging. Among the fanfics I have read, it is considered to be T1, but there is still too little written. But for now, it is very good. I still recommend fans of Holy Blade to read it. Although the Holy Blade fanfic is not finished yet, it is difficult to draw a conclusion, but for now, it has the potential of T0

The writing is quite good. Personally, I don't quite understand Sister Wang's part. I still understand Davian's relationship with Sister Wang, but I don't understand Sister Wang's relationship with Davian at all. However, I think it's harmless. The author's two updates a day are still very good. I'm looking forward to the following plot.

It's okay. The first one is my hand tearing of heroic spirits. This is the third one. I have to complain about the protagonist who has made himself the ultimate weapon. Every incident is like a sledgehammer shaking out the powder of human beings. In today's era, everyone is pitiful and hateful. The author's war scenes are very sufficient and exciting. It can only be said to be a cool article. There are two female protagonists who hope to develop after the sequence.

Needless to say, it's good-looking. The description of the protagonist's heart and growth process are very reasonable. This is an author who writes books seriously and deserves respect. The Lostbelt part really doesn't work, it just seems to highlight the protagonist's incompetence. I couldn't do anything, couldn't vent, and finally I was forced to sublimate. They were all forced into an irreversible situation, and just ended up writing to erase everything, and finally returned to a happy ending? ! After reading these more than 400 chapters, I saw that from the initial confusion to being tortured and tortured, even forgetting my original hometown, and finally being tortured to the point of mental breakdown, it was like suddenly waking up and saying that I let go. It is true that the previous chapters were very exciting, but they have been used as tools for thousands of years, and are even often morally kidnapped. Why can't the protagonist be brought back to modern times? Instead, you are disgusted again and again like a zombie?

You are worthy of the five-star rating. Righteous and great Lord of Camelot, your brilliance is already comparable to that of King Arthur.

Very good book, it makes my superhero fantasy omnibus rotation [smirk]

The compatibility of Holy Blade + Fate is really good, and the other book is also a Holy Blade. It goes in the direction of eventually becoming a servant. After all, Britain is definitely going to die. It's a pity that Guda failed to summon the protagonist. As a teammate, he only has the seventh singularity. I still hope there will be more content. Guda summoned the round table men's team to participate in team building activities

Okay, let's give a brief evaluation.... (I'm currently skipping to see the end of Volume 3) Summary: The book is a good book, and it is considered a very high-quality fate article in Tomato, but there are some poisonous points that may be difficult to accept. Excellent: Most of the character creation and plot advancement are not so abrupt, and are relatively smooth. This requires readers to be familiar with Fate, otherwise many parts will be easy to understand. (Of course, fate fans don't need to care) In fact, it can be seen that the author's writing style is actually constantly improving. The overall book cover, I think, is more like the experience of a local named Davian than a common fan. The immersion and coherence are still comfortable. Xiaodu, don't worry too much (it may be a nitpick): If you read this book from the beginning, maybe because of the identity of the time traveler and many of Davian's actions in Volume 1, it may dissuade people. It gives me the feeling that he is a time traveler. If you know, you know, and if you don't know, you don't know. However, Davian's actions give people the feeling that he seems to know a lot but also doesn't know. If you say he is a time traveler, it would feel a bit weird; if you say he looks like an aboriginal, some of his behaviors are not like it. In short, just think of the protagonist as a native with the ability of the holy blade. Little Poison 2, don't pay too much attention: it may be my personal reason. The overall feeling is a bit aggrieved. There may be some reasons for this due to the setting of Morgan in Volume 1 (this will be discussed later) Regret: How to put it? The author does not seem to have the intention to significantly change the fate of Britain. He can only say that the birth of the protagonist only adds to the destruction of Britain and makes it more glorious. Is this the fate of getting the Dark Sword... The bigger poison (think about it): It is actually the setting problem of Morgan in Volume 1 mentioned above. The advantage is that the writing is really similar to the crazy one, but the disadvantage is also here. When Morgan is a wife and her husband is not dead, approaching the protagonist, if the reason is just jealousy of Arthur or resentment of Merlin, I think this... Logic is a bit far-fetched. At the same time, what makes me more uncomfortable is that after the protagonist meets Gawain, he still has feelings for her despite knowing that she is a wife... I can't say anything. Personally speaking, Morgan's emotional line and some characterizations are really uncomfortable. This may be a major reason why this book has not been rated 9 points yet. In addition, while reading other book reviews, I found that it seems that in the third chapter (Holy Grail War), Sakura was sent into the insect cave T_T (but I didn't seem to find this part of the plot, maybe because I wasn't looking carefully) Summary at the end [like]: As an FGO fanfic, this book is undoubtedly excellent, but as a million-word fanfic, the poisonous points set in the early part (basically concentrated on Morgan [face covering]), many contents are too bland, lack ups and downs, and lack personal modifications to the main content. The protagonist feels more like an experiencer and witness to me. The impact that an individual can have on history is minimal. Davian is a good example, but for fan fiction, writing like this will have a bad impact on the audience. The writing style is exquisite, the structure is realistic and coherent, it is quite excellent and worth looking forward to. Next, I will go to Chapter 4 and the Fairy Kingdom that follows. The author is preparing us to sprint for another wave [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

Wear it firmly! Wear it firmly! You are a real man! ! ! [Hold face][Hold face][Hold face] There are not many male protagonists with normal outlook, and even fewer with such upright outlook. Although I came here for Holy Blade in the beginning (this book actually does not have many knight elements), this book has a special magic that makes people more and more addicted the more I read it. The author's writing style has a sense of historical epic, which is rare, and the author is worthy of being a person who claims that his idol is Inoue Toshiki. The plot is indeed very twisted. Li'an Li'an Li'an is so beautiful that she pursues the love between the king and her subjects in both directions! ! ! ! Morgan should die! ! !

The logic is clear and the setting is rigorous. The only negative point may be Davian's relationship history, and it's a bit uncomfortable that I can't see the male protagonist all the time when I'm following the update. But the author is very persuasive. Anyway, for me, it's a good book and a good story.

Lao Dai worked very hard, I don't know how to put it, but it's really good-looking and a really good story. It's a pity that it's over and was taken off the shelves due to elbow strikes.

I can say that the compatibility with me is very good. The first part of the epic is very well written. In the second part of Lostbelt, the protagonist's role is a little less, and it feels similar to the main plot. All in all, it is still a very good book.

Em... Overall, it's pretty good. Except for the immature language and some flaws, there aren't many problems with the overall look and feel. It's worth watching. The combination of Knight and Xingyue is also pretty good, not too stiff.

It's very good. It's a very good second-generation monthly article. Most of it is similar to the game information (why don't you pay attention to the game plot settings in the comment area and go directly to the second-generation article? This is not suitable for reading directly. You need to understand the official settings) Lao Dai: Hehe, I must persist in the Lost Belt.

It's so beautiful [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] but it's just not good enough [crying] [crying] [crying]

I personally think this book is very good, and it made me feel uncomfortable to read it, both emotionally and in the overall story line. This book can arouse the readers' emotions very well, which is a great point. This book does not make people feel angry at being insulted by their IQ like those mentally retarded Dragon King novels. This shows the author's level. This book is also not like famous books like Luotuo Xiangzi Lives. There is philosophy in the pain, which also shows the author's level. This book is very unique. It is undoubtedly a brilliant flower among the books I have read. It should be very suitable for the taste of some psychology seekers (I had a very complicated mood when reading this book and could not express my thoughts well. I have time to sort out my thoughts and then make a comprehensive review. Of course, it refers to the place where I saw it)

I've finished reading it, it's very interesting, but I knew in the early stage that Morgan was still ambiguous and vicious after having three children. Do you really want to change your mind? Author [Explore]

It's not a bad idea to enter the trap, but the segmentation is a bit strange. At the same time, the emotional drama is of poor quality and has many typos. But if you insist on saying it, you can expect it in the future.

It's so good-looking, don't mind the male protagonist in the early stage, Xiao Chunan. In the later period, he became a qualified knight. The plot was well drawn, but it was so painful that I couldn't bear it.

The fanfics in the fate series are works that are very consistent with its structure. The content is excellent, the plot is very reasonable, the general plot is very magnificent, and the character relationships are very interactive. At least in the case of fate, it is very good under the theme of fate. Thank you to the author for his work.

It's a very good novel, but the prequel and 2.6 Are really sad. Fortunately, the Holy Grail War chapter is relaxed and happy, so please suppress it first. Now I'm so happy to see such a sunny scene at the beginning of the Old Sword Chapter😭 Water Dai is also a firm one😭, but in the end it has a happy ending but also very sad.

It's beautiful, it's really the ultimate sadistic novel🤣 but it doesn't affect the excitement of the book

I still feel that people are different, and everyone has their own Hamlet in their heart, right? Some people think it is good, some think it is bad, some think it is wrong, poisonous, some think it is okay, you can watch it, you like it, it is about the same, it depends on yourself, I think it is not bad, the author wrote everything he wanted to write, I can support it, after all, I still see it is quite good

I quite like this type of coming-of-age novel. There are very few of this type here, so this one is very interesting.

This is one of the best novels in the fate series that I have seen on Tomato so far! The author wrote the protagonist so well that he could not be said to be a real hero. Although the protagonist has some shortcomings, how can a person not have any shortcomings? My chosen one works overtime, Lao Dai, I love Wang Dai's [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

The previous Morgan plot is a bit toxic, but the combat description is okay. I hope the protagonist can become stronger and change his destiny. It's pretty good. I can barely accept the ending. I still hate Metahuman History Morgan. I hope the author writes more extras.

Please, author! Please! Hold on! This is one of the few FGO fanfics I can read in Tomato. Look at my time, I've been reading this book for the past few days, please! I'm stunned!

People who like epics like me should not miss it. To be honest, I really found a treasure from a pile of garbage. It was really enjoyable to read 880 chapters in one go. Like Chapter 80, add one more zero. I couldn't stop watching it all afternoon

When I saw it for the first time, I thought it was just the same story about King Arthur who traveled through time and traveled to Germany. When I saw it for the second time, the title was Lords of Camelot, and the cover smelled like a dick. However, I had just finished reading Blade of God at that time, and the cover was also Phoenix. My curiosity prompted me to click on it, and I found that I couldn't understand it at all. The third time I passed by, it was at a place where I was looking for good Fate fanfics. At this time, I had finished watching the Five Holy Grail Wars, a ruthless series. When I came in and took a look, I found that every bit of it was in line with my preferences. From this, we also discovered that Fate actually has more than five battles. . This is one of the sources of my love for the fate series. The article is too long, and I don't watch much of Fate. I will finish this book. Make up little by little. I filtered through the titles of each volume to see which one I wanted to read. Just like Zhu Ziqing's Shuowen Jiezi. Good look and feel

This is the best style article I have read on Tomato so far, but it seems like it [crying] [crying]