Davian's Holy Grail War

The book is definitely a good book, and the title is very discouraging. Among the fanfics I have read, it is considered to be T1, but there is still too little written. But for now, it is very good. I still recommend fans of Holy Blade to read it. Although the Holy Blade fanfic is not finished yet, it is difficult to draw a conclusion, but for now, it has the potential of T0

The writing is quite good. Personally, I don't quite understand Sister Wang's part. I still understand Davian's relationship with Sister Wang, but I don't understand Sister Wang's relationship with Davian at all. However, I think it's harmless. The author's two updates a day are still very good. I'm looking forward to the following plot.

It looks good. Has the author considered writing three different lines for the protagonist? My king's line, Guinevere's line, and Morgan's anecdotal line [laughter] It's very beautiful. I'm still looking forward to it now.

Needless to say, it's good-looking. The description of the protagonist's heart and growth process are very reasonable. This is an author who writes books seriously and deserves respect. The Lostbelt part really doesn't work, it just seems to highlight the protagonist's incompetence. I couldn't do anything, couldn't vent, and finally I was forced to sublimate. They were all forced into an irreversible situation, and just ended up writing to erase everything, and finally returned to a happy ending?! After reading these more than 400 chapters, I saw that from the initial confusion to being tortured and tortured, even forgetting my original hometown, and finally being tortured to the point of mental breakdown, it was like suddenly waking up and saying that I let go. It is true that the previous chapters were very exciting, but they have been used as tools for thousands of years, and are even often morally kidnapped. Why can't the protagonist be brought back to modern times? Instead, you are disgusted again and again like a zombie?

It's okay. The first one is my hand tearing of heroic spirits. This is the third one. I have to complain about the protagonist who has made himself the ultimate weapon. Every incident is like a sledgehammer shaking out the powder of human beings. In today's era, everyone is pitiful and hateful. The author's war scenes are very sufficient and exciting. It can only be said to be a cool article. There are two female protagonists who hope to develop after the sequence.

You are worthy of the five-star rating. Righteous and great Lord of Camelot, your brilliance is already comparable to that of King Arthur.

Very good book, it makes my superhero fantasy omnibus rotation 😏

The compatibility of Holy Blade + Fate is really good, and the other book is also a Holy Blade. It goes in the direction of eventually becoming a servant. After all, Britain is definitely going to die. It's a pity that Guda failed to summon the protagonist. As a teammate, he only has the seventh singularity. I still hope there will be more content. Guda summoned the round table men's team to participate in team building activities

Okay, let's give a brief evaluation… (I'm currently skipping to see the end of Volume 3) Summary: The book is a good book, and it is considered a very high-quality fate article in Tomato, but there are some poisonous points that may be difficult to accept. Excellent: Most of the character creation and plot advancement are not so abrupt, and are relatively smooth. This requires readers to be familiar with Fate, otherwise many parts will be easy to understand. (Of course, fate fans don't need to care) In fact, it can be seen that the author's writing style is actually constantly improving. The overall book cover, I think, is more like the experience of a local named Davian than a common fan. The immersion and coherence are still comfortable. Xiaodu, don't worry too much (it may be a nitpick): If you read this book from the beginning, maybe because of the identity of the time traveler and many of Davian's actions in Volume 1, it may dissuade people. It gives me the feeling that he is a time traveler. If you know, you know, and if you don't know, you don't know. However, Davian's actions give people the feeling that he seems to know a lot but also doesn't know. If you say he is a time traveler, it would feel a bit weird; if you say he looks like an aboriginal, some of his behaviors are not like it. In short, just think of the protagonist as a native with the ability of the holy blade. Little Poison 2, don't pay too much attention: it may be my personal reason. The overall feeling is a bit aggrieved. There may be some reasons for this due to the setting of Morgan in Volume 1 (this will be discussed later) Regret: How to put it? The author does not seem to have the intention to significantly change the fate of Britain. He can only say that the birth of the protagonist only adds to the destruction of Britain and makes it more glorious. Is this the fate of getting the Dark Sword... The bigger poison (think about it): It is actually the setting problem of Morgan in Volume 1 mentioned above. The advantage is that the writing is really similar to the crazy one, but the disadvantage is also here. When Morgan is a wife and her husband is not dead, approaching the protagonist, if the reason is just jealousy of Arthur or resentment of Merlin, I think this... Logic is a bit far-fetched. At the same time, what makes me more uncomfortable is that after the protagonist meets Gawain, he still has feelings for her despite knowing that she is a wife... I can't say anything. Personally speaking, Morgan's emotional line and some characterizations are really uncomfortable. This may be a major reason why this book has not been rated 9 points yet. In addition, while reading other book reviews, I found that it seems that in the third chapter (Holy Grail War), Sakura was sent into the insect cave T_T (but I didn't seem to find this part of the plot, maybe because I wasn't looking carefully) Summary at the end 👍: As an FGO fanfic, this book is undoubtedly excellent, but as a million-word fanfic, the poisonous points set in the early part (basically concentrated on Morgan 🤦), many contents are too bland, lack ups and downs, and lack personal modifications to the main content. The protagonist feels more like an experiencer and witness to me. The impact that an individual can have on history is minimal. Davian is a good example, but for fan fiction, writing like this will have a bad impact on the audience. The writing style is exquisite, the structure is realistic and coherent, it is quite excellent and worth looking forward to. Next, I will go to Chapter 4 and the Fairy Kingdom that follows. The author is preparing us to sprint for another wave ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

I really can't change my name. I've missed such a good book many times because of its title 🤦 During the May Day holiday, I have been reading this book all day today. I really like it. I finished reading it in one day and I still have more to say. The author will update it soon [Thoughts]