Deduction in the Hunt: The Manor Mystery

Basically, it tied the game without skipping a chapter. It can be said that in today's environment where stereotypes are everywhere and horror downgrades are hard to watch, this is a really good micro-horror infinite flow. The plot, IQ, and characterization are all online. The author has been able to make good use of the advantage of the first-person perspective. The overall writing feels more real and has a strong sense of substitution. There is a feeling of "if I were like the protagonist... Then I would choose this way". The logic of the plot and emotional line is basically self-consistent based on my personal experience. The author's writing style is also very good, with all kinds of descriptions, and the Internet speed is consistent with literature, and the playful and hard-core coexist. It can be seen that the author's literary quality is quite high. He can easily refer to many high-level and appropriate sentences and classics, and it is very natural, which really has the effect of enriching the protagonist's erudite character. The pace is very good when reading, and it doesn't make people feel dragged out and anxious. Here are a few points that I think still need to be improved: First of all, perhaps due to the first-person perspective and the high IQ of the protagonist, the plot often lacks proper explanations as it goes on. Because the protagonists understand and have a tacit understanding, there is no explanation (for example, why Chen Ge did x behavior after reading it several times but I still can't understand it). But if the readers can't understand it, sometimes it will give them a headache. Secondly, I feel that the author may want to create an onion-skin effect and unfold the truth bit by bit, but I feel that it is not close to the truth so far. However, the number of words in the riddle has seriously exceeded the standard, which reduces the cost-effectiveness of promoting the plot. It will also make the reader feel confused beyond the scope, affecting the reading experience and the coherence of the plot narrative. The third thing is that as the male protagonist's character develops, Chen Ge is obviously relatively weakened and marginalized. Since he is at least set up to be a relatively long-lasting ambiguous object, it is necessary to reflect his usefulness or reveal his secrets, otherwise it will create a very unbalanced state. The fourth is the emotional line. I feel that the emotional line actually plays a very important role in the main line of this book, and it can always promote the plot and character creation at critical moments (various memory recall, emotional analysis of the male protagonist, and the attitude of the people around the male protagonist towards him). But I feel that the current emotional line is a bit too messy and complicated. In the case where the emotional line also has a great impact on the main line, it makes the main line a little messy. Moreover, as a person who has had an ex like "Lin Nian" who can be heartbroken and stabbed for her and has a relatively depressed family environment (she is also very rational like Lin Nian, so our relationship is not bad now), I feel that when Lin Nian is not entangled, Brother Jiang's feelings for her are a bit too strong and a little fake (I think the author wrote that Brother Jiang is like "if her husband dies" "I will still try to take over." This idea is actually quite real. I have thought about the same thing about Bai Yueguang, who doesn't like me now. But it's a bit outrageous that Brother Jiang's high-IQ criminal character can dream about people every day and night after meeting people. I think it's okay to use it to overcome psychological barriers and promote the emotional line of the plot at critical times, but now it feels like it's a bit too hard, and sometimes she suddenly becomes angry like an old mother) The fifth is that the frequency of digging holes is too high. Sometimes the pace feels a bit rushed. Many words are not heard clearly before moving to change the scenery. You have to go back and watch it several times. The above are all my personal humble opinions. In short, the author's writing is very powerful and beautiful! I've been relying on you to enjoy the Cyber ​​Palace banquet recently, so please be sure to update to the end! I will keep following for updates!

It's very powerful, the first person is not awkward, the logic makes sense, there are ups and downs and foreshadowing, the characters are stable and charming, and the plot is not limited to horror, but what is more cruel than these is the debauchery flowing in these horrors. It's very straightforward and unbearable, like a lowly beast, but it's not the disgusting kind of lust, it's more like a one-night fling. This is very presumptuous, but I really think that this most naked desire and appeal is full of sexual tension.

I really like big books! The emotional pull between the protagonist and Chen Ge is so subtle that it made my heart itch. There is also the complicated emotional entanglement of Lin Nian when they meet again. The reasoning is also very well written! It's easy to draw people in and has a strong sense of immersion. The emotional line will not affect the normal plot development, and the writing is quite delicate! Highly recommended (I like the protagonist and Chen Ge very much, keep it up!

It looks so good, it's so exciting to me😳I can't resist the collision of life and death in this bloody and dark environment, which is full of sexual tension😳 It's hard to find a book of this type. The author must keep writing. I really like it💕

I thought it was a regular suspense story, but I didn't expect that the emotional line between Xiao Jiang and Xiao Chen was written in such a way, you know! Enjoy it, every interaction makes your heart beat faster, adding warmth without dragging down the suspense. The author's writing style is also excellent, with a suspenseful atmosphere, the horror of the hunting game, and the strange organisms in the villa, dragging people into the fog. The reasoning and emotion run parallel, and the more you read, the more you get addicted!!! I want to push 📚 Chen Ge and Jiang Zhou must be locked up!!!

It's so beautiful. It's all about me. How can you understand me so well~ I really like these emotional lines~

The copy is very exciting, but when reading the cp with two male protagonists, be cautious and read the chapters after the ex-girlfriend of the male protagonist appears. In the later stage, the two of them almost kissed each other to death. It may not be the ex-girlfriend. Anyway, the male protagonist and the female character have a lot of intimate scenes with kissing and touching. The relationship with the male character is relatively ambiguous and nothing too out of the ordinary. The basic cp of the cp is both male and female. If you want to watch cb with two male protagonists, it is more suitable Oh, my definition of intimate scenes is the proportion of intimate scenes among all the people who come into contact with the protagonist. Compared with Chen, the ex-girlfriend has more intimate scenes, and the protagonist and Chen have more ambiguous scenes. Although the author positions the ex-girlfriend as a tool, but there are intimate scenes, so be warned, some people can't accept it.

Looks good^ω^, cheers =￣ω￣=

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The writing is very touching. I hope Tomato can give the author traffic and let more people see it 💕