Villain: Seizing Heavenly Fate from the Source

There are currently more than 40 chapters, and they seem to be pretty good, with normal villain writing routines, and the rhythm of the story is OK. I basically collect what should be collected, and the killing is quite decisive. It should be fun, but it is still fun. Two suggestions: 1. It is written in the first few chapters that the destiny must reach 0 to kill the protagonist. This is a bit outdated for various villain novels. However, after reading the latest chapter, a destiny plunder card has been released. If you change it carefully, it should be saved. Otherwise, for some readers, the text routine will seem older (I remember someone said that this is also considered poisonous? I personally don't care). 2. Generally speaking, the author's writing is still quite satisfactory. I suggest the author not to hang himself as a child of destiny. The background of the male protagonist is so embarrassing. The follow-up must be about the beginning of the great era. The author's own things can be written in the beginning of the great era. Otherwise, it is quite satisfactory. Now that I have read the first 40 chapters, my advice to other readers is: it is suitable for readers who are in a book shortage or like me who like to read villain stories but do not have particularly high requirements for writing. It's not easy for the author, so give me 5 stars to support it first, and then add comments if you find the follow-up exciting. Brother, I asked you to write about the great world, but it turned out that the background you wrote was too big, there were too many foreshadowings, the climax battles came one after another, and the heroine's emotional line was almost gone. It's quite fragmented now. It's easy to accidentally miss the ones in the small world and the little fangirls. Let's see how to deal with it later. .

I think it's okay, but don't dig holes and leave too many foreshadowings. Otherwise, let alone the later stages, it will be difficult to decide whether you can write it down in the middle and later stages 🤔

So far it seems to be very in line with taste 😳😳 Well, the Cao Thief series is not a big deal 🥰

Perfect, no girls are given away, no licking, and decisiveness in accepting girls is very good. Even if you want to travel through the heavens, you must be so decisive. Otherwise, it will be a bit regretful. I hope the first time traveling through the world will not disappoint. The world of Wuhun is simply a wholesale of beauties, although this is the charm of another world [smile]

It's pretty but too short. I hope it doesn't end badly.

It was so good that my eyes lit up, and it gave me the same feeling I had when I first read the novel, but some of the plot descriptions were not detailed enough.

Yun Jinzhi (Wansheng Mica) Qiu Yu Tian Jiu'er Youji Liu Yanran Li Xiuru Ning Yueze Luo Hanyi Rakshasa Nu (Princess Iron Fan) Yue Shuhua Qing Yanjing Du Yu Yun Qingxi Empress Huang Tian Qi Ye'er Qian Mengli Qian Tianmeng Luo Xiangjun Yuxu Qi Ling'er Leng Ruoruo Xue Binghe Xiao Qiaoqiao Ao Run Hunxiao Fan Hua Hong [World of Martial Arts] Dong Pope (Bibi Dong) A Lan (A Yin) Xiaorou (Xiao Wu) Qian Renxue (Qian Renxue) Zhu Youyun (Zhu Zhuyun) Tang Yuexuan (Tang Yuehua) Tianhai girl group Bingshui'er seven people Hu Liena (Hu Liena) Zhu Youzhu (Zhu Zhuqing) Ningrong Rong (Ning Rongrong) Fire Dragon (Liu Erlong) Bo Saixi (Bo Saixi)

Author, come out and tell me how the widow became a prosperous husband 🤦

Reading without pictures is half the fun

Hmm... How to put it, the front may make you feel a little frustrated, but I think it's okay, because the character of the protagonist is a growth type, and there is a process. The first part feels a little bit toxic, but I think it's okay, much better than some high-scoring movies, and the later parts are getting better and better, especially after filling in a lot of pitfalls, but I feel that a million words is a bit short. I have to finish reading it. Also, I took a look and found some people who gave low scores. Most of the previous reviews were low scores. It is free in the first place. If you don't want to read it, just go to the paid one.