Genshin Impact: Fontaine's Heart Was Eavesdropped by Navia

Give it five stars. Although I don't know how to review books, the author should be able to do this for me. (Let me put it first. There is no malicious attack in this review, including the intention to start a war, nor any bad guidance, including the intention to slander the authors of those works. It is just a very pure book review, so pure that it does not have any other meaning. Of course, if it still doesn't work, and someone still criticizes me, please have mercy on my parents and just say me. After all, it is my book review that caused you to scold me.) Of course, these are not important. I just have a doubt. In the works of Xinshengliu, the characters who can hear the protagonist's voice don't seem to doubt where the voice comes from? Why can I hear the protagonist's voice? There are also some heartfelt works where the character who can hear the protagonist's voice feels like Adou who met Zhuge Liang, but this metaphor is not particularly appropriate. After all, it goes without saying why Adou believes in Zhuge Liang so much, but I don't know the reason why the characters in those works believe in the protagonist so much? There is no foreshadowing or foreshadowing. Of course, this is not the point. The main reason is that there is not much friendship in the introduction of the relationship between the two parties. Even in the descriptions of those works, the character who can hear the protagonist's voice still hated the protagonist before. I don't know why, but I just believe it because it is what he says from his heart. Does what he says in his heart must be true? After reading ten chapters, I personally feel pretty good. Of course, it would be better if the author could be faster. If it is too slow, I can't help reading the book, thinking that I will read it all at once, and then read other books. After reading many chapters, I come back to read it, but it feels boring again, and then it is stored in the bookshelf and collects electronic dust, so I still hope the author can be faster. After 100,000 words, I spent eight yuan, mainly because I only have ten yuan, haha ​​(sad)

Come on, although many people are scolding, there is nothing wrong with the overall writing. I just used a new way of writing. You don't have to use the same old routines and processes. Just keep writing if you have ideas. Don't let those trolls easily influence the direction of your writing. I know many authors, and I also I have seen some authors rewrite their novels until the end because they listen too much to readers. Even if some of the content is not well received by readers, do not change your original writing ideas easily. This is the basis for the sustainable development of a novel. You can discuss and refer to opinions, but don't follow other people's ideas easily. Come on.

The writing is good, but it feels like Navia's reason for asking the protagonist to help is very weak. Just like the protagonist said: We are not relatives, we are not even familiar with each other. You want me to risk my life to accompany you in your investigation? Again and again and again and again? I do want to ask for something from you, but you haven't made any progress in asking for it. Isn't it a bit too much? [It would be okay to make up a process to deceive the protagonist, but there is no such thing. It's like the protagonist owes her, like a licking dog] Moreover, Navia and the others are not the only candidates. It's not like travelers don't have the ability to find people [I can't rule out that it's because the protagonist is a bit stubborn and is afraid of being involved in strange plots. He could have waited until Fontaine's trouble came over to find his fiancée. Of course, this is really nitpicking on my part.] I really liked this book, but it was really uncomfortable that I couldn't get enough of it because of the plot. As mentioned above, Navia can be generous, but she is at a disadvantage when asking for help. Even if she has the status of fiancée, it is very disrespectful to treat the male protagonist like this when she has not confessed. At least superficial efforts need to be made. If there is no confession later, I hope the author will pay attention to it. Please [send my heart] After thinking about it, I decided to change my rating. Although my tolerance level is quite high. But it's really not a good book [facepalm], and several books in the comment section are scolding it [facepalm], so I'd better keep my original point of view. Asking the male protagonist for help for the first time is actually not that inconsistent. When I see a traveler, I don't want to continue reading and have a wait-and-see attitude. People who want to see this setting can basically avoid it. . .

Not bad, it's my type.

From the previous book, it is okay for the time being. I suggest that the author can create a new plot by himself. At the same time, it is suggested that the author can lay some foreshadowing to make readers think deeply or read more. Come on, author, don't stop updating (personal opinion: use less Internet slang and try not to start a harem)

According to your setting, if the male and female protagonists travel to Liyue and meet Gan Yu, the male protagonist will think to himself, "Isn't this my guaranteed wife Gan Yu?" And then the female protagonist hears it. Does this count as being caught mentally cheating?

Maybe it's because I haven't progressed much through the main plot of Fontaine. After reading Chapter 30, I feel that Navia treats the protagonist as a tool and has no intention of caring about the protagonist. Why does Navia feel that the protagonist must help her? Isn't it normal for the protagonist not to help in order to save his life? It feels like Navia takes this for granted.

It's okay. In addition, I'll tell you why the death penalty is not imposed in the instructions, because the death penalty is only prepared for the water god Fukalos alone, because the essence of the God's heart of each of the seven earthly stewards (also known as the seven gods) is part of the ancient dragon power of each of the seven elemental dragons. Because of the five hundred years of trial , the chaotic energy accumulated by the arbitration body is enough to destroy the throne, so that the power of the ancient water dragon authority can be returned to the second-generation water dragon king Navellet. After obtaining the complete ancient dragon authority, Navellet also made the Fontaine people become real people and will not be dissolved by the original fetal water. Note: Fontaine's execution was only prepared for the water god Fukalos.

I came here from the last book, which was still very surprising to me. Now that I have read this book, I feel that there is nothing wrong except that the plot is a bit slow (only my personal opinion). I am not very good at writing book reviews and I only read [face covering] [face covering]

It's that the main plot contains the protagonist's voice. . . . Nothing changed, tasteless Keep up the good work,

Well, it suits my taste (personal preference, don't let some people find trouble to criticize me, I'm not a coward, just scold me when you need to scold me), just read some content, it's worth a try

I don't know how to write it, but I got it from the previous book, The Knife Book!

Overall, it's not bad, but after the protagonist and Navia have made their engagement clear, there should be more emotional interactions. To put it simply, it's sugar-coating. After all, the previous connection between the two was mainly due to the engagement signed by their parents. They entrusted the Thorn Rose Society with the protagonist to advance the main plot together. Knowing each other, the two can only say that they like each other, but their relationship was not that deep when they confessed about their engagement. There should be more sweet plots to deepen the relationship between the two. If it is just to promote the main plot, then this second creation novel will be meaningless, right? Give the new author a five-star rating and keep up the good work [note]

Upstairs, you beat me to the first place, it's so bad [crying]

I hope the author will update more quickly. Even the donkeys in the production team can't rest like this [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

I actually finished reading it. Overall, it's a pretty good fanfic, but it's a pity that the protagonist Ron's incredible growth is no longer visible. The system did not play a very big role. The main thing that promoted the main line was the inexplicable voice. I hope the author's writing style will be more exquisite and don't let his talent stop here.

Aha, how should I put it, this book is the highest quality Genshin Impact book I have ever read. The plot is good, but... My dear author, can you do it faster? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

What about the emotional line? The overall plot basically follows the main line. I have to say that it has changed some uneasy things. However, the plot should be driven by people, not by the plot [face covering]. Overall, it is a remarkable novel. You can change the plot appropriately in the early stage, and it will be reasonable in the later stage [eating melon]

This book is brilliant and highly recommended! Every word is gripping, and the 5 stars are well deserved. Plot and Narrative The plot has ups and downs and makes people want to stop. The narrative is smooth and complete in one go. 5 Stars! Role building The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, as if they are alive on the page. 5-Star praise! The characters are distinct and unforgettable. Writing and Style The writing is beautiful, the style is unique and intoxicating. The writing is poetic and picturesque, 5 stars are dedicated to this excellent writing style. Emotional resonance Touch the heartstrings and trigger strong emotional resonance. After reading this book, my heart is full of emotions, and I give it 5 stars to show my respect. Depth of thought Profound and thought-provoking, 5-star recommendation! The wisdom in the book shines brightly and is of great benefit.

Oh oh oh! This is Miss Navia's article! ! !

Objectively speaking, after completing the description, I asked a psychological question to pass the test, but it is a personal feeling. The emotional line of the protagonist is not full at all. The implication is that we should recognize each other quickly. I want to see that kind of expression. Jie Jie Jie

It's too short, it's too short, even you, the author, can't do it [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Tomato is the only fanfic of Navia, it's so difficult [crying][crying] My Navia is so beautiful, how come there is no fanfic ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

It's really beautiful and the writing is better than most. I hope it can be sweeter in the future. It's too bland now and the relationship is progressing a little slowly. It's a pity that the rating is so low now. I don't understand. It's so beautiful.

This book feels very good. From the marriage contract at the beginning to the search for a fiancée at the end, and the wedding at the end, the whole book has a strong sense of logic. The protagonist is not the kind who relies on force to make a living. There is even no fighting scene for the protagonist from beginning to end. But I feel that this is also good. The protagonist is a business person, not invincible, and does not save Fukalos. It is a single female protagonist.

It's obviously a good book, but it's a bit pitiful that the ratings keep falling again and again.

It was quite joyful to write

The first to eat crabs.

It's not bad, but my voice is gone in the later stage. The system is purely a decoration. I'm still looking forward to the second book. Anyway, I'm keeping it for now.

It's okay, but I don't know why the rating is so low