Comparison of the Two Kingdoms: the People of the Two Worlds Completely Broke Their Defenses

Too much nonsense, especially affecting the senses. And it feels like the pacing is very slow [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] It can be finished in a dozen chapters, but it took more than 50 chapters to finish Dong Zhuo. [Laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] There are still a bunch of meaningless dialogues. By the time the Battle of Guandu comes, there may be thousands of chapters. [Face-covering][Face-covering][Face-covering] I skipped a few chapters without feeling too inconsistent, which is evident.

Watching movies and then letting people watch the past developments on both sides, the result is like a fool. For example, in the world changed by the protagonist, the common people and ministers say that the protagonist is the emperor, so everyone should know that the protagonist is alive. As a result, when the protagonist is about to be captured and killed by Dong Zhuo, he has to shout "Dong Zhuo will kill him!"

The writing needs to be improved, it looks too confusing

Messy, disordered, drooling,

It's too watery. I only have to write a few words for a story, so many words are stuck. Read stories or nonsense?

Personally, I think it's too boring and I have no desire to watch it.

It's too chaotic, with things going here and there, and I'm too impatient to watch it.

It was written in a mess, and I even wondered if you forgot to set it when you wrote it.

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It's long-winded and messy, and it's too hard to read. I'll say it here and somewhere, and it's uncomfortable to read.

It's so watery, I don't even know what I'm talking about when I look at it