Pokémon: Transfer to Padia at the Beginning

It's very interesting. I thought it wasn't that good when I first read the introduction. After reading the introduction, I quit once. Then I read it again after reading other books before I came in to read it. It was unexpectedly good! In my opinion, there are no poisonous points, and the plot is quite attractive. From the first chapter to the latest chapter, it is really good. Compared with other practical fans, I think this book is of high quality. I just realized that I posted my comment in the wrong place? But this book is also good

It is the first time for a newcomer to write a book. Everyone can come in and take a look. If you have any comments and suggestions, feel free to put them forward. I will try my best to correct it and be satisfied after seeing it! Thank you all readers in advance [please pay attention][please pay attention][please pay attention]

This book is really good in terms of material selection. It is very worth reading. It feels very comfortable to read. On the heroine's side: It's finally not Zhulan anymore [face covering] [face covering] Most of the heroines of other Pokémon fanfics I have read are Zhulan. I feel that Zhulan is about to become the girlfriend of all Pokémon fans. Features: Personally, I feel that the unique point of Pokémon fan fiction is the encounter and bonding between humans and Pokémon. This article is very well shaped. I hope the author can write at his own pace and not be disturbed by other doubts. And compared to the opening of other mythical beasts, the world of Pokémon fan fiction opens a harem. This article is really recommended.

When I read it, I can feel that the author is a novice. His writing style is relatively capable, not sophisticated enough, and his writing is very simple. The advantage is that it is really easy and clear to read. The disadvantage is that the emotional portrayal is not delicate enough, and the description of the characters is also relatively sloppy. The description of emotions makes people not immersed in it. It seems a bit dry. In some places, I can understand what the author wants to describe, but because of the lack of experience, the writing is not strong enough. It's hard to describe it in depth, but it feels a bit abrupt. The settings are pretty good and there's nothing toxic about it. If you're new to Pokémon, it might be a bit difficult because the writing isn't so detailed and it feels a little vague. You need to read the paragraphs to understand it. My suggestion is to write more emotional descriptions of the protagonist and supporting characters, and write more facial expressions and inner descriptions to enhance readers. Add a sense of immersion, and add some feedback from the supporting characters to the protagonist's various situations. For example, when the protagonist conquers the mythical beasts and reveals his knowledge of Pokémon, the supporting characters show shock and surprise. Adding some psychological descriptions will make the readers immersed in it and make the character feel alive. Describing more supporting characters allows the protagonist to explain the backgrounds of the protagonists and other characters in the special chapter through his heart. , And then slowly enrich the relationship between the protagonist and the supporting characters. It will be more difficult to write like a group portrait, but it will be very comfortable to read once it is written. The most representative of this style is Teacher Lu. The author can read it carefully and combine it with his own writing style. If you can do it, you are very awesome. The current rating is a bit low. I think 8.5 Or above is more reasonable. Five stars are for encouragement.

It's really good. The current main line is basically the main line of the game master. At present, the three main lines of Gymnasium - Star Team - Treasure Master have not been finished yet. Next in the game are plots about Padia Pit, Beishou Township and Blueberry Academy, with some plots from other regions interspersed in the middle. The plots in other regions on the timeline have not yet started, so the future of the book is still promising. This article is mainly about subtitles, and more of a warm plot.

It looks good, but 6.5 Points is really low.

How to put it this way, I personally feel that it is very good, but there are some parts that are not well connected or the wording is not very good, such as the meeting with the heroine's father and the selection of Pokémon in more than 100 chapters. (Maybe it is because of my personal sensitivity or personality, but I always feel that it is not very good. After all, it is a gift from the father to his daughter. Of course, it does not mean that the author's writing is not good or derogatory, it is just a personal feeling, or maybe I think too much). Overall, it is very good. If some of the plots or wording can be slightly modified, the score will be higher. Actually, I'm still quite curious about what the protagonist did to the heroine at the beginning of the chapter.

I think it's quite interesting. Several characters from several generations are put together and they are students in Padiya's school. It's quite innovative, and some of the plots of the story are also very interesting.

I have read more than 280 chapters so far, which is not bad. Personally, I feel that although some parts are not handled very well in the front, it does not affect the viewing. I rated it about 8 points. There is no so-called qualification, which is really good. After all, Pokémon are magical creatures [laughing] I am quite looking forward to the protagonist facing off against Rainbow Rockets [laughing evilly]

This is in line with the Pokémon world in my mind. There are not so many fancy differences, just hard work and sweat. It is very comfortable to watch, and there will be no conflicts due to levels and the like. This makes people feel that it should be like this. The methods of Pokémon techniques also make people feel that they are okay, unlike some fan Pokémon articles that are very awkward. I particularly support this book. If you like the game Pokémon, you can read it. It is an amazing Pokémon article and I highly recommend it!!!

It's pretty good, I don't know why no one is there

This rare and excellent work among Pokémon fans finally no longer adds Pokémon in the real world [face covering][face covering]

The author asked me to give it

Although the protagonist [the author] is a perverted lolicon, he is not a dark style. Urban parallel world💯[laugh]

Well written, I don't know why no one reads it

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It is written very fluently and is considered a good book. However, I don't know much about the Padiya area so I won't comment much.

It's good to read. I finally saw a book about demonic coral.

Not bad, it's a good book

It looks good, cheers for the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's good, but there's no one

It's pretty cool, but I don't have any ratings.

[Laughing evilly] A rare one from the Padia region The author has his own ideas. It's a pity that there is so little traffic. It's a good book.

Yes, you can encourage

There are too few novels about Padya, good reviews [like]

Pretty good, but are there too many typos?

It's pretty cool, but I don't know why the rating is so low

It feels very good. I thought the author has written a lot and I highly recommend it.

It's really good-looking, but not many people see it.

Peony, hey my peony