Villain *********

The writing is good, and it can be seen that the author has a certain literary level, but the plot is a bit messy, and even the transition does not jump directly to the next rhythm. I hope the author can sort out the plot and deal with some details. For example, the chapter about Lanshide School has no clue at all. In addition, you have to be diligent in updating, as one chapter a day is not enough.

It's okay, but the plot jumps a bit. This scene jumps to another scene in an instant. There is no gap in between. It will make you confused occasionally. Then the setting of the system is a bit interesting. As for the follow-up - to be determined

Everything is good now (sad)

The writing is good~ but some chapters made me a little confused... It's a bit novel, the heroine is very systematic

Can you update it quickly? What the hell is one chapter a day? It's not enough to read, it's not good enough at all.

Dude! This is my first time meeting someone who works on the system! Working on so many systems

It's too short! ! ! ! The author should stop fishing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Just based on this speed, I have to give it five stars.

It's still ok, very fresh! Come on, author

It's very good. I'm here from Douyin. Douyin keeps pushing your books. It's updated. It's not updated today. Don't be lazy. It's very good. It's very good. Come on, I'll give you a five-star reward. 66S.

Good! There is no frustrating plot for now!

This novel is very well written, and the plot is fascinating. You can't help but want to keep reading. Although it is a bit wordy in some places, the overall writing style is smooth and the characterizations are vivid. It is worth reading.

I have been reading novels for more than ten years, and I have become more and more selective. I read many recommendations that were very good, but I couldn't keep reading many of them. I came across a very good one a few days ago, but I didn't finish it. I saw someone recommending this book because I didn't have any ratings, so I just gave it a try. I didn't expect the author to write it very well, but few people read it. The structure is rigorous, the narrative is natural, and the plot is not procrastinating. Unfortunately, it's not finished yet. At least I'm satisfied so far.

This content is absolutely amazing, very awesome. Brothers, I have read more than 8,000 novels, and I have never seen such a good one. The protagonist has an online IQ, and he thinks about us workers. Each character is carefully described, and the description is very awesome.

This writing is okay This writing style and technique are amazing. Why is the plot getting more and more confusing as it gets written?

The reason for the existence of novels is probably to provide psychological comfort. In books, you can find empathy and hope. Therefore, the novel will be a bit idealistic, but the book will not be overly exaggerated.

Nice! Five-star praise!

No, buddy, let's take a look at the commentary, otherwise you won't be able to go far.

Just because there is meat to eat at the beginning, I have to watch it no matter what.

The writing is pretty good, and there is nothing toxic about it so far.

I think the writing in this book is okay, but I feel that the writing style is more novel than the teachings.

Nice! Just missing some details, details

It's really good to read. It's really good to be able to write such an article in this current environment. There are many quotations in it and I even marked them specially. I really have too many feelings.

I stayed up late reading this book, it's really good, I must read it to the end

I've finished reading the latest two chapters. I'm so happy. Go to sleep. Good night everyone.

Really good. Looking forward to it, I hope the author will update it soon. I will read the author's other books first. . . .

It's okay, nothing too exaggerated, the characters are pretty good, no flaws, five stars!

Not bad, the protagonist is very three-dimensional, and the plot is also very exciting, but there are too few and it is not enough to watch.

I have read a lot about this subject, and this book is eye-catching and has great imagination.

The content is really well written. I hope the author will continue to work hard and try to do 3 chapters a day.