Naruto: the Natural Girl Saves the Ninja World with Her Straight Shot

I really love this article. At the beginning, Chaolu seems a bit awkward because of her lack of understanding of human nature. The more she goes on, the better she looks. It is not a simple and crude recommendation of beauty. Everyone falls in love with a skin as soon as they meet. This article depicts the character's personality and emotional changes very delicately. What they love is not a beautiful face but Chaolu's soul. The process of establishing a bond between others and Chaolu is also the process of establishing a bond between readers and Chaolu. Unlike many male protagonists who are quickly killed by their beauty as soon as they meet and then give readers a label "he loves her". This article writes about a series of experiences between the male protagonist and Chao Lu from their first acquaintance to their heart-to-heart relationship, and uses the time they spend together to make the readers feel that "she is so cute and it is natural for him to love her!"

The succubus is really a succubus. I can't stand it anymore. I really want to fall in love with the heroine. The heroine is a pure straight-ball character. The straight-ball really kills everyone. She is even more straight-ball than Naruto. I'm dying to do it. I can do anything. All is the most delicious! I can eat anything [blowing kiss] From the time I discovered this book to reading the latest one in one go, it was so sweet, so sweet that the corners of my mouth didn't even come down, it was so sweet [laughs] To be honest, I haven't watched much Naruto, but it doesn't stop me from reading this fanfic. I don't understand some of the settings, but it doesn't stop me from reading the plot. Those who haven't watched Naruto can also read it.

Generally, I don't have the patience to read slow-burning books, but this one is different! Generally speaking, I don't like Quanguanxiang's books, but this one is different! Chaolu is simply a collection of all the excellent qualities of the heroine, gentle but not weak, kind but not a virgin, persistent but not stubborn, brave but not reckless. Chaolu has her own strength, which is not cheating, but a truly sincere heart. She was born from suffering in the book, but she embodies the best blessings shared by the author and readers and can give hope to the world. She is willing to tolerate the faults of her friends, willing to listen to the suffering of her enemies, and willing to save the future of all living beings. She has many cute little imperfections, lack of common sense, and overly serious thinking, but they make her even more adorable. How heavy the burden of saving the future must be on one person's shoulders, but Chaolu is not trapped by the so-called mission, and treats everyone sincerely. In many books, there are embarrassing jokes, forcibly pieced together CPs, poor writing, and even more messy emotional lines. This book truly analyzes each person's psychology in detail, and gently builds a bridge between the suffering of the original work and the beauty of his colleagues. Every word of Chaolu can touch people's hearts. It is as delicate and soft as a girl's heart. It is not embarrassing, but touching. She is an angel sent by the God of Love, Helen, the all-powerful Helen, a blazing sunflower that attracts people at first sight. Finally, I want to say it bluntly, little angel of morning dew, kill me with a straight shot! Woo!

It looks good, it looks good, I hope it is an NP novel or a solo cp of Naruto. Naruto is super cute, Shikamaru is also very charming, and Sasuke is also well described [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] I love the author so much [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

I read another book by the author and felt that the author wrote it well! The protagonist's emotions are so delicate! Like Rei Ayanami, this book is overall gentle, funny and sad. The author's writing is very sweet. Write more what we want to see [learned] [shy] [smile]

I finished reading it in one go. I have read dozens and hundreds of Naruto fanfics. This one is really outstanding, and the details are quite good. There is no awkward plot. It is sweet and very comfortable to read.

I found Tomato's rare novel with fluent writing and interesting content, featuring a Naruto heroine. The psychological and emotional descriptions of the characters are very delicate and touching. All in all, highly recommended [Blow Kiss]

So cool, this is the cutest protagonist I've ever seen Okay, okay... After reading the memories, everyone likes her, even if they are not from this world... Ok, ok, ok

It's very good to watch. The various unconscious flirtations of the novice heroine are really good. It's just better not to have too close a relationship with anyone too early. The scene with Shikamaru in the movie theater was a bit over the top. The rest is very good and cute. .

No spoilers, just feelings: The author's writing skills are very deep, and the articles are full of Japanese style. It feels like sometimes cartoons can be generated in his mind. And you can feel the bond between the heroine and the male protagonists. Little Sun, the heroine's heartthrob, melts the ice of all the male protagonists with complete logic online. And there is a very good reason why Neptune has not fallen over: "She is still a child!" The relationship between the heroine and the male protagonists is not defined by a simple sexual relationship. All the male protagonists are not pure heroes either. Love, friendship, and family affection are mixed together, and [love] shines brightly every day when the heroine lives together. Even readers who have not watched Naruto can understand it through the author's description. This round of investment is not a loss. I personally think this article is very brilliant in this topic.

The settings are okay. I'm used to seeing other genres, but it's quite novel to see this one. Especially the interactive little actions in it really impressed me [laughing evilly], but the number of words is too small, so I still have to save them.

It's beautiful, but the pace is so slow. I'm afraid I won't survive until the Ninja World War.

It's great, it's the first time I've seen such a detailed Naruto fanfic. The emotions are sincere, the writing is excellent, and it is rich in the philosophy of life and the true meaning of emotion. The heroine is innocent and kind, and has very sincere feelings for everyone. This is the first time I like this "silly, sweet" type of heroine. Every time I see the depth of love, I want to cry, it's so touching.

This is the most detailed book I have seen on Tomato so far. This platform is originally a mixed bag, with varying levels of quality. Even highly rated novels are not that good in my opinion, and many of them died suddenly. There are also values ​​that are exported through writing. But there is no problem with this one so far, and it is top-notch elsewhere. It's not easy to write fan fiction, and it's even rarer to have such an apt psychological description. The biggest problem is that the author is developing on two fronts and has another book being updated at the same time. As long as you hold on, it's a great addition to your Tomato Journey. You can read it and recommend it.

I like it so much. I really feel like I am slowly understanding what love feels like. Oh, especially Chaolu is so cute. Baby, you are so cute! ! ! Why do you hug someone to vent your emotions when you get excited? Not only do you hug them, but you also shake them, wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow, so cute! ! ! I like it so much! ! Can you write more about Sasuke? I feel so sorry for him, but I also find that the compatibility between Chaolu, who doesn't understand love, and him is really great! !

A super good-looking female video. She is currently in the love stage of elementary school. She has many emotional lines. The heroine is a kind of dull and beautiful heartthrob type. Because she lacks common sense, she will do some intimate actions and unconsciously tease people. The rhythm is very good! The characters are well mastered, not too OOC, and the characters don't fall madly in love with the heroine the first time they meet her. Overall, it is a refreshing novel that is not boring! Five-star recommendation! !

It's so cute. The heroine's journey from concentrating on the task to finding herself and gradually building a bond is so cute. Feeling... Like you've found yourself? It can be said that she is an Otome, and she can be said to be a heartthrob, because Asoro is so popular, and she has a good rapport with everyone. But she's not OOC, and she's not the kind of heartthrob that I hate - she doesn't fall in love with her because of her inexplicable appearance, and there's no inexplicable feeling about her, it's just natural. Chaolu treats everyone sincerely, and does not deliberately try to please or sell her CP. If you think about all the reactions carefully, ah, they seem to be what they would do, and they are very natural. It's so cute, I can't help but laugh when I look at it. It's good food! (Holding the author and chewing on it)

The author's writing is great, right? [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss], the writing is delicate, the characters are not OOC at all, and the current emotional lines are particularly easy to draw, so it's not a loss to get into. Shikamaru is simply a sapiosexual Amana. He has been tolerating Asagi and taught her a lot. This stock can only go up but never fall [shy]; Naruto and Asagi get along very cutely, like two kittens cuddling together for warmth, but it's not yet ambiguous, so when can you turn back to the track, Naruto [smile]; Shino feels that he is the most suitable to be the main palace. From a friend to a romantic partner, Asahi has always been the butterfly in his heart. The partner is simply your lie, you are just messing with someone [cool]; I blew up the illusion between Sasuke and Asagi. It's hard to imagine how much pain and despair Sasuke endured at that time [crying]. Fortunately, with the heroine, he finally didn't have to relive the scars in his heart alone late at night. And Kadian and Chaolu, why did they suddenly start a fight [almost crying]? Although it was expected, it is still very sad to see them drifting apart. Can the companionship and memories of several years be discarded? The author is great, is there still hope for this stock [crazy] In addition, will there be a love line for Itachi in the future? If there are brothers in the sandwich, it will be a fairy [send heart] [send heart], please let the brothers and Asolu continue the Uchiha bloodline [cool]

I have read all the chapters so far, and I find it very interesting. However, it feels like a drag when describing the confusion of the protagonist in the early stage. But after reading this chapter, the plot starts to look good. The protagonist and everyone's CP are very good.

I really like it!! I was not very interested in these fandoms before! But after reading the teacher's works, I feel that the small interactions between Chaolu and other people are really cute! And the emotional line is also very good!! And it's also very cute! Chaolu is very, very good with everyone! 😭🥺

The author's writing style is very good, especially Chao Lu's psychological description, which is very smooth. The character is also very three-dimensional and does not discredit any character in the original work. It is very touching. But I don't recommend you to read the commentary, it seems to be a romance, but there is always fzl sticking to your face, and you can't prevent it from starting at frame 0, just like when you eat something delicious, you accidentally catch a glimpse of someone next to you making a fuss. (Cover your mouth, a powerful Stranger Things dance./GIF) You can abandon the story after seeing Asahi becoming a rebel ninja in Konoha. The heroine's plot is broken and completely disconnected from the previous ones. It's completely OOC. The author, did you not write about the cute, direct, intelligent, good at thinking, cheerful, genius, courageous, witty, united in knowing and doing, clear goals, daring to think, dare to do, and tolerant warm little sun? Did you outsource the novel later? It's a pity, I feel sorry for the heroine

I haven't experienced this feeling again for a long time. Reading the text seems to see a vivid picture. The whole process is like experiencing those stories with Chaolu. Many words can experience the different tenderness and encouragement of each character. It is really enviable. Whether it is Chaolu or Chaolu's friend, it is important. It's great to be able to resolve some of the sad and heart-wrenching parts satisfactorily, and some interesting places can make people laugh less uncomfortable. I like the sense of humor very much. I feel a long-lost touch and a pleasant healing feeling in my tired heart. Continue to pay attention to Chaolu's story, and it will surely be an impressive journey. A very good story. I recommend it to my friends. I wish Chaolu and her important people, the author, and you and me who read the story happiness.

It's really, really well written. I still can't forget the shock this book gave me at the beginning. It's very similar to the original Naruto story, where once emotions are involved, there will be bitterness and hatred. But the ending is very, very happy. In fact, I have been away from the Hokage circle for a while. It must have been the summer last year when I was suddenly brought into the Hokage circle again by this book. The narrative method of this book is very novel, and the heroine also has very noble conversational skills, but it is not obtrusive. Because many people have seen Naruto's world view and feel that it is particularly suitable for various battles. But in fact, the real attraction of Naruto lies in the creation of each of his characters. This book has done just that for the heroine, showing all the charming aspects of each of them. Both authentic and good quality. Reminds me of the feelings and emotions I felt watching Naruto for so many years. It has been nearly 30 years since Naruto was serialized. But I think it will always be engraved in the minds and memories of our generation. Every time there is a new Naruto spin-off, I think I will continue to watch it. Finally, I recommend everyone to read this book. The teacher writes it really, really well! A must-see for Otome!

Write a long review for our Chaolu Baby It's completely a work by a fan, a rare piece of chaff... I have always felt that writing an otome fanfic is a very difficult type of writing. The author not only needs to make the original character fall in love with the heroine logically, but also convinces picky readers that the heroine deserves to be loved. Teacher Tang's writing is like a slowly unfolding picture scroll. It is not gorgeous writing but it is very comfortable to read. Therefore, within ten chapters, I fell in love with this heroine who is anxious about the future but working hard towards her goal - Chaolu. Like morning dew, it will be more painful every day when it goes away. Morning dew is a man-made product that has been placed on many people's expectations, but has not been properly cherished, so she has great trust in Shikamaru, who gave her first care. Going back to the past and entering Konoha before being taken for a physical examination by Kakashi should be the happiest chapter I have read in the whole story. The process of growing up with little Chaolu and her little companions always makes me soft-hearted. I like her thinking about human relationships, her views on bonds, and whether she can change in the future from hesitation to determination. I like Chaolu's straightforward and unabashed expressions the most, much like a stubborn deer. So Sasuke, Naruto, Shikamaru, Shino and others are attracted to her just like me, and it is very natural to fall in love with her. Morning dew can also be the first hotbed for a tree to grow, reflecting dazzling light under sunlight. Lin's interpretation simply made me applaud. Chaolu can be a name that is loved by others and an existence that makes people look forward to it. In this dream of saving and being saved, everyone's feelings are so beautiful. Who would have thought that Obito would be so delicious... Sure enough, abnormal feelings are really addictive. I just happened to read a handwriting written by a Hokage about Uchiha, "May you be like a begonia flower, and still have lovesickness without separation", which was given to Zhaolu. Thanks to me who accepted Amway and opened this book last year. Thanks to Teacher Tang for the story. It would be great if there were more extras!

Good looking The protagonist's emotional line is smooth, the writing is delicate, and the author lets the sweetness show through the tip of the pen. Watching the protagonist grow up step by step from a little girl who speaks her mind to letting her destiny flow in the direction she wants is heartbreaking and touching. But it feels like Sasuke, Naruto, Shino Shikamaru in the original world have no role to play in the later stages [laughing awkwardly] The CP party is still not enough [shy] This main early stage is very beautiful, but this late stage is a bit broken. I feel like the Holy Mother inexplicably.

I was really surprised when I received the recommendation. The heroine is very cute, a straight-up little angel. The writing is also very good. It can make people feel the beauty, there is no incongruity and it will not be awkward. The reading experience is great when watching it. In terms of plot setting, I like the characters written by the author very well, so I like to read them no matter what they write. Although I think it is a topic that many novels will talk about in many places, when the protagonist speaks it out and debates/talks with others, those words can still touch me, and of course I shed less tears. Of course, the people inside are also touched. I feel very happy watching this. Everyone likes the heroine, and the others have not lost their charm, I love that! The cuteness of the heroine makes me think that it is right for so many people to pay attention to the heroine. At the same time, the charm of other people is there. Otherwise, if I like it very directly, I feel that the pleasure is gone. Others are not attractive anymore and I don't want to watch it... I found that my reading time was only 1 hour. It was shorter than I thought. Doesn't offline reading count? [Crazy] But because it's so good, I caught up with the latest chapter yesterday and today. When I finished reading it, I felt that I read it too fast and couldn't get enough. No matter what line I write, I am looking forward to Zhao Lu's story: Zhao Lu is loved by everyone in Konoha Mamoru. As Zhao Lu faces more complicated situations and has to grow up, Zhao Lu is loved whether it is because of love or family and friendship. Second follow-up review: I am so happy to watch it, not only because of the cp, but also because of the morning dew ^_^

[Big heroine·Reverse harem (avoiding lightning on your own)][Growth of artificial human·Delicate writing·Thick emotions·There is a knife in the sugar (low tears, please pay attention)][Each male protagonist has a side story][Thinking] At first, you will feel that the heroine has the feeling of a human machine learning to be a human, but because the protagonist's character is very It's very good and stable, so it seems that the heroine has a clear goal, walks on her own path, and really learns and thinks while walking, so she embarks on a better route than the original "set optimal solution", and she is still exploring various unknown attempts until the end, which is really awesome. The various emotional lines have become side dishes. I always feel like "although this man is very good, but he seems to be uninteresting in playing the heroine", so it is not surprising to me that the harem is the story. The heroine is so good, and it is normal for many people to like her. [Thinking] There are many places that are well written. For example, when faced with emotional confusion, the female protagonist is simply terrifyingly rational (probably the power of human-machine). She speaks directly and actively communicates without being muddled. Therefore, the male protagonists are basically all talkative, which is very nice.

This is a Naruto fan with smooth writing and a clear mind that makes people think, "Ah, this seems reasonable." Plus it's really sweet~ Regardless of whether there's a knife behind it or not, just lick the cream first and then suck it~ It has been many years since I read the main point of view novel. The author's writing skills are very good, with frequent golden sentences, and he can firmly grasp the complex emotions of children in their childhood when they are ignorant and want to explore the world. So far, every character portrait has not made me feel out of touch, especially the interaction between the protagonist and Sasuke... This is a fanfic that didn't show any large-scale scenes until more than 90 chapters, but it made me laugh and cry constantly. The protagonist is really a kind little angel~

I can't comment on the plot, but the heroine is really cute. She has been searching for the value of her existence, and it feels like a self-awakening. Really very innocent and cute. It's very much like a child's ignorant view of the world. He also likes to hit the ball straight and doesn't hold back everything he wants to say. She is capable of being coquettish, clingy, and is a living image. Moreover, the heroine can always enlighten others, and her childlike words have a feeling of purifying the soul [laughing] This book is more like the heroine's diary than a novel. The heroine has a kind of innocent cruelty. Not tampering with the enemy's memory at will is not like sticking to one's own bottom line, but more like proving that oneself has not changed in the eyes of outsiders. Thinking about it over and over, sometimes it's like the heroine's self-awakening, and sometimes it's like the heroine's self-brainwashing. At the same time, the heroine will accuse Deidara of not caring about ordinary people's names and taking away the lives of ordinary people at will. Deidara's logic is that he doesn't care about those people, he only cares about the people he cares about. The heroine cannot attack Deidara because Deidara is a concrete ordinary person, but illusory. It is normal for people to have close relationships, but the heroine and Deidara are essentially the same people, but the heroine blames Deidara. This plot is very strange. Being unable to attack Deidara, but being able to attack Scorpion, is even more problematic: the heroine uses her own emotional connection to decide who will die and who will not die, and then packages the emotional connection into a moral principle. The previous content is well written, but it is all about the heroine dealing with crises from the outside. Since defecting, the problem has become apparent. The heroine cannot deal with the crisis caused by herself. The heroine has her own set of narrative logic (I am kind, I can empathize, and I do not kill innocent people indiscriminately), but if this logic conflicts with behavior, the heroine will not admit the contradiction or change her behavior, but will use more narratives to cover up the contradiction. If the author cannot write about this moral crisis, it can be reduced. There are already enough in-depth plots in the past, and there is no need for a follow-up plot that imitates depth. I'll revise the review again. The follow-up is very good. It seems that the previous questions have been taken seriously? But it was indeed not mentioned again.

After looking at it for a long time without seeing any meat, I felt like a desperate widow... The previous article is very good. I personally think that everyone has a good rhythm when it comes to controlling the straight ball and controlling the ball naturally. Some of the content in the middle section is shocking (although I understand it is a compromise, I personally think it is an insult to arbitrarily let others return to the IQ of a baby). There are also some descriptions that make me feel that the heroine's interference with other people's memories and the oral escape that both wants and wants is redundant. Based on the entire novel There is a kind of innocent cruelty in the chapter? Is the companionship in the fantasy world really so addictive? But what if the heroine's aura is removed?) So I skipped to read it, but it was not bad in my opinion. Maybe I personally don't like the entanglement of the same characters in parallel worlds? I still feel that memory itself cannot be equated with actual experience. With the development of technology, will it be possible to have 100% empathy by adding a parallel life in which I clearly recognize that it is not my own? I always feel that human subjectivity has been weakened. However, I reiterate that the author is very good. He can handle the relationships between so many people and give such another possibility to the world of Naruto. It is really awesome🥹