My Fairy Won't Become the Final Boss

I hope the author will stick to it, and don't stop updating twice a day if the requirements are not high. [Shy] This book shows the author's progress. The first volume of the Immortal Realm chapter is a bit abrupt and discouraging, which is not suitable for writing in Tomato. The beginning of the second volume looks a bit like a pseudo-saint. It must be that the author has read a lot of Nissei's Bianwen, and the author has lost his own ideas. By the fourth volume, it really has its own style, and the story plot is getting more and more interesting. To put it simply, it is a love story between a tsundere and an idiot and an innocent boy. It looks good. If you like it, write it quickly! ! ! Why not update twice a day? ! !

The multiple writing perspectives of Japanese-style light novels are a matter of opinion, so I won't comment too much. I have read some Japanese light novels and I think I accepted them well. The motivations and logic of the protagonist in the early stage are a bit far-fetched, but they will be supplemented later. The author is too obsessed with expressing the gameplay, resulting in the plot being too dependent on the settings and not complementing each other as it should. I guess the author also wants to make it unique, but after all, this is a novel and not a real game. I evaluate this from the perspective of a reader. The story is still very good, telling the growth and redemption of the protagonist. As for the brain-burning mentioned by the author, it is actually due to the complexity caused by the author's frequent switching of perspectives, and the reason why the progress bar is too fast in the later stage. If you have experience in watching multi-line narrative works, you can basically figure it out as long as you remember the sister line and the future line. The writing was too hasty in the later stages. Many storylines and settings were not fully developed, and many foreshadowings were not taken back and their whereabouts were stated. It felt like a hasty ending. I believe it would be better if the length could be increased.

I really like this novel, the plot and plot are well connected. It's just that I haven't played galgame very much, so I didn't understand some parts, so I skipped it. Anyway, I read it quickly, so update soon! ! It's not enough. The author will update it quickly. I finished it after a few days [crying]

There's not much to say, it's great, I love it, I'm giving it a gift, bro, keep updating, keep at it, there will be more people [Working on it] [Working on it] [Working on it] [Working on it]

Mader, the last time I saw a story about changing marriages with such smooth writing, a little bit of depth, smooth and interesting plot and non-toxic plot was almost 4 years ago. Author, if you cut it off or just unfinish it, I really won't let you go. The male and female protagonists also have a good CP feel. You know how to write🤤

Although I think it is very interesting, I still want to ask a weak question - can I keep books?

After a blind guess, the protagonist will pull the strings and get himself involved [laughing][laughing]

In fact, it is a good book, and the story is very interesting, but as a novel, although I understand your feeling of wanting to write a galgame, the excessive repetition will inevitably make people upset and irritating, and the consequences will be obvious, and the results will be poor. If this story can be written as a serious novel, I believe that the score will not be bad, and it will not be only 7.9 Points. Can you do some sweet extras? !

Give me five stars to show my respect. For some reason, I felt a little uncomfortable with this book. I always felt uncomfortable somewhere, but I couldn't tell where it was. I guess I couldn't stand it anymore, so that's it.

The disadvantage is that the plot in the later volumes is too fast and will be finished after just a hundred chapters. In fact, there are still many things to write about, such as writing more about daily life and slower emotional lines; and the plots of other female protagonists (the five female protagonists are all well portrayed); and a lot of content such as the battle between Tao and demons, the demon clan, the fairy world, etc. That can be written as the main plot have been almost skipped. But the flaws are not concealed. I think this book's status in Tomato is equivalent to the God of Tomato Marriage. Why can't I give ten stars? [Pout] Advantage 1, galgame's CG perspective is very interesting Advantage 2: The logic of the whole book is normal, the writing is fluent, and occasionally even a few golden sentences are skipped Advantage three: the plot is fascinating and has well-completed foreshadowing, although it is a bit rushed in the later stages. Advantage 4: The emotional line is well written, there is no abrupt inflection, nor is it just hs. Advantage 5: The characters have distinct personalities and the portrayal of the heroine is really, really, really good.