Halfway Through Military Training, Brother, Why Are You Biting? !

I can only be the first to comment [shy][shy] If possible, I still hope that all readers can leave a review of the book. It has more than 300,000 words and has not yet been rated. I feel so ashamed ε=ε=(＞Д＜)ノノ!! There won't be any ratings until the end, right? (Whisper bb) ｜д•´)!!

I have read Chapter 41 so far. As a bookworm who has read for nearly 3,000 hours, this alternative apocalyptic novel with a humorous and relaxed style is indeed rare and fascinating. There are intact eggs under the overthrow of the nest, and all living things are in the apocalypse. It is commendable that the protagonist can uphold family, friendship and love, because the writing style is more daily and lacks the sobering theme of death and death in the apocalypse. The fully-organized army and the corresponding complete political system support one survivor base after another, and the management system is also quite complete. It can be seen that the author is very careful in shaping the background [Like] The fly in the ointment is that the character's personality is not full enough, and the author should be slightly inferior in depicting the details of the character; secondly, the details of the action during the battle are not three-dimensional and vivid enough, making people always lack a sense of substitution. Later, the author can try to strengthen the description of these two aspects. The above is only my personal opinion. If there are any shortcomings, you can correct me and make corrections [Send your heart] Comments above I typed too much in the last part, hahaha. Don't mind.

I still need to encourage new authors. Besides, your writing style is pretty good. I'm very optimistic about you (づ ●─● )づ. Keep going, when the number of words increases, more people will read it, come on! !

Very nice! Can recommend! And one look at the author shows that he is an interesting soul. Take good care of you! This book has been nurtured by me to the point where I no longer have the desire to read it. I have spoiled it myself [face covering]. Sorry, goodbye author.

Emmm, I feel like you are more suitable for writing daily sweet articles, or writing apocalyptic articles [face covering] [face covering]

Come on, keep at it [laughing awkwardly][laughing awkwardly]

The content is plain, but more like each of us! On the contrary, it doesn't make me feel like I'm pretending to be the protagonist. It feels good. Can the author set up the ups and downs of the content? Love the author! ! (The author please leave me a comment!!! I love you!!) [Laughs] @ pan's cooking again. Teacher Pan kneels down for you! ! ! (Sacrifice your knees)

It's nice to watch, the plot is quite reasonable, not brainless, like it

I also had the experience of writing a novel, but unfortunately I was too busy and died young. I hope the author can persevere. If you have any good ideas, I hope the author can receive them. If it becomes popular, you will be an old fan [laughing]

The author's description of the apocalypse is too relaxed and bland, without any sense of horror or crisis.

It's pretty good, and the writing is different from other apocalyptic stories. It's been a while since I've been here. I took a look and I didn't expect so many people to have read this book [face covering]

It's a very good book. It has some minor issues but nothing serious. It's okay to give it 4 stars objectively. Come on! Looking forward to the next book, I hope to see this five-star masterpiece! ! ★★★★★

It's really good to read, and Xiao Pan's ability to read reviews, listen to suggestions, and answer questions is better than most authors. I highly recommend it (I'm tired, so I won't pay for it in installments with five stars. It's the full price. Come on, Xiao Pan)

Come on, keep writing, it looks good

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch

The author is not suitable for writing this genre. I can only say that the author is more suitable for daily writing, but it is okay.

Author Hello Who is the heroine? In which chapter? [Blowing kiss]

The content is wonderful, the plot is dense and coherent, the characters are vividly portrayed, and the author's language style is cute and cute. It is worth recommending.

Come on, the author, keep writing hard

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good

I think it looks pretty

Very good and very realistic

It's pretty. . Come on

Next time you can try writing daily essays

I read dozens of chapters in one go, and I still like this kind of daily and relaxed apocalyptic novel. I hope the author can finish this novel, come on!

In fact, the writing is okay, relatively relaxed, and quite beautiful!

Although the writing style is a little immature, he is a new author after all, and it is quite good to be able to write like this. I look forward to the new book.

Very OK, the plot logic is very stable

It seems quite logical so far.

Good! Keep up the good work!