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Personally, I think it's pretty good, especially the ones in the first year. I think it's very good, but looking back, I feel that the author seems to be a bit out of his depth. I think it's okay to omit the year in the community. The year back to the village is obviously very promising, but it's also omitted. Especially the military training. In fact, it can be placed in the year back to the village. As a result, this paragraph gave me the impression that the protagonist did nothing during this year. He only farmed and "farmed". There is also the section of the well reservoir. I think that since it can't be used up, it's better for several villages to use it together. And the system really can't directly transform the reservoir. The development of the village will be very comfortable (mainly because I think the protagonist only allows his own well to use water from other villages. There will be hidden dangers). At present, it seems that the author wants to write a lot. The description of the military-controlled areas and the saved grains shows that the author has a lot of ideas. I am looking forward to what the author will write next [get it][get it][get it]

Not bad, you can take a look