Stardome Railway: Stardome Train's Titular Doctor

Come on, when will the train arrive? I'm looking forward to the interaction between the cold-faced Xiao Qinglong Danheng and the protagonist (for example, you're an old antique and you're not dead yet)

It's very interesting. Although most of the content is about ordinary daily life, there are also many interesting places. The part where you fight Sudden is also very exciting. Even recalling the past is full of color.

The characters are sufficient, the background is complete, not too OOC, biased toward all

Nice! This is my first Bengtie fanfic to be read by the author. I feel like my taste has been spoiled. It's rare for Tomato to see such high-quality novels that are not awkward. Good luck to the author~ Looking forward to the next article🌹🌹🌹

Super good-looking, I stayed up late to read the latest chapter... The author is great, please update more, it's good-looking, the book is in short supply, I'm looking forward to the sword [Hold it]

The content is novel, the writing style is comfortable, the story is eloquent and unique. I like the image of the protagonist, but the characterization techniques need to be improved. The original characters have the author's unique style and are not OOC. The plot is protracted, the psychological description is too long, and it is tiring to read. The author still needs to work hard. But it's understandable. After all, your livelihood depends on the number of words. When serializing, more words will leave a deep impression on readers. But watching it all at once made me feel tired. The author can make the writing more concise and concise in the longer parts; there can be less psychological descriptions with repeated functions; he can distinguish the priorities, grasp the plot, and grasp the rhythm of the article. The writing is good, the emotions are warm and tranquil, and the rating is three to four stars, with four stars for encouragement. Come on!

Although the title and introduction of this book put me off at first, I fell in love with it after reading it. It's beautiful and I loved reading it. Shi Yun's design really poked me. I really love that kind of caring elder who is cold on the outside, lively and caring at the heart, and the key character is pretty good-looking:) It's really good-looking, and the knife is a real knife. I was just grinning and having fun watching the warm daily life of Yun Wu and Shi Yun, but then there was a loud noise in the sky, and he suddenly appeared on stage. It almost didn't scare me to death. Now I am looking forward to the scene when Shiyun falls off his horse (yes, I love watching this) Big boost for the authorヾ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ

It's very beautiful. Come on, madam. I hope there are more of them. It would be better.

I didn't expect that there would be such a rich language here. It didn't start like usual, and it was so airy every second, and there were no problems like there were in the later stages. Every character was described very delicately. But the author is so short, is it possible for you? ?

A book with good quality and interesting plot, which relieved my boredom when I was short of books (●'◡'●)

It's beautiful and beautiful. It's rare to see an article written from this time. It's a five-star masterpiece!

It is a refreshing novel in a non-traditional sense, similar to the soothing plot of Natsume's Book of Friends, which is plain but interesting. You have to be patient to read this book, and you can't read it at a fast pace. There are a lot of foreshadowings buried, I hope I can explain them one by one later. (That's a bit cool, right?) There is nothing wrong with the writing style, and the characters are not too inconsistent. It is consistent with the original work.

It's quite comfortable to read. Good daily writing. I just don't know what it will be like when it comes to the plot.

It's a nice book. It doesn't have much content. I'd like to read it myself. I haven't played this game but it looks very interesting. The content is very long but the plot in the book has not yet reached the main plot. Those who like to read it all at once may want to read it.

It's very beautiful. I hope the author can draw Yun Shi's carefully described clothes. Thank you!

Come on, make sure it doesn't end badly. I agree that this novel is much better than those invincible systems. How can it be so interesting to directly travel through time and become a star god?

It's so good... I can only say that Baby Shiyun is really a pure Shou (shou). Haha, I haven't finished it. Anyway, it is a very delicious meal. The overall genre is still very funny. However, people say that there are 100 chapters and a knife, so try to finish it within a few weeks.

It's worth a read, the writing is exquisite and the characters are portrayed in subtle ways. I recommend it. It's worth a read, the writing is exquisite and the characters are portrayed in subtle ways. I recommend it. It's worth a read, the writing is exquisite and the characters are portrayed in subtle ways. I recommend it.

This book is slow-paced, and the main plot will not officially begin until about 100 chapters. The characters are all well drawn, and there are basically few OOC ones. (Can you update it soon? The child has nothing to eat and is hungry) Make! Who! Quick! Point! Write!

The plot could be slower, but it is still more comfortable to watch. I still hope that the author can speed up the pace and write about a hundred pictures until the train is about the same. But overall, this book is very interesting among the fanfics I have read, but the pace is slow.

How can I put it this way? The writing is good, and the story is everyday with a little plot mixed in. It seems to be everyday, and occasionally it can bring out some plot and foreshadowing, as well as some memories. There are many interesting places. But, there is a fatal problem. The writing style always gives me a feeling of calm before the storm. There will definitely be glass shards behind.

It's very emotional to see this book's rating rise from 8 points to 9.4 Today. It's also the only book I've been able to follow. It's really great and the writing is exquisite. I really like the time Wuxiao, Liu and Shiyun spent together on the clouds. Shiyun really It's like a reliable parent, super warm, and also has Shiyun's inner drama, especially when it's with Star God Aha. It's a lot of fun. The only drawback is that the pace is a bit slow. Overall, it's one of the few good books. Good luck to the author [Sending heartfelt wishes] Very nice! ! ! ! !

This book is one of the best on Tomato. It is cleverly designed and very beautiful. You deserve it. There is no CP in the main text and there will be CP in the extras. If you like to read Qingshuiwen, the updated version is a bit unreadable. Sisters, I have read it five times. I never get tired of watching the plot. The writing style cannot be described in words. The author's writing style is delicate and ingenious. The ingenious conception is in sharp contrast to me who is poor in words. Author, you are my god! !

This book is very good. It is also the first Broken Iron book I have read. The characters are well handled. The original characters include Liu and Shi Yun. They all have distinctive personalities. They don't have the stench of most of the male protagonists' perspective except Huang (the advantage of a female author). There are no magic changes in the original characters, the character design is broken, or the protagonist is licked. The writing is also very good. This is also my first review of this book. I didn't dare to write it before, for fear of collapse. The author gives you a lot of support [Congratulations]

It's very Laomi's style, sharp and sharp, the characters are not OOC, and the plot is also good. But I really like Wuliu. The author has made him a very good, strong, gentle and responsible brother. I like him very much.

The content is super interesting and very engaging, but there is a little bit of abuse in the middle... But overall it is relatively calm, and I think Shiyun's character is very interesting, I really like it! !

This is the best Bengtie fanfic I have ever read. Every character has flesh and blood. Most of the articles before the main plot are daily. The battles in the Sudden War are also well written. There are humor in the articles, but also knives. Many of the knives in this book are hidden in the details. It may not seem like it at first glance, but when you read it again later, you will find that there are a lot of foreshadowings. The knives in this article are not like other articles. The knives are directly inserted into your heart. , But like a long stream of water, seeping in bit by bit, for me, I cried more when reading this book than the few short stories I read before, but it's not because I feel sad, but because I feel so depressed that I want to cry, but I can't cry. The book's knife is very thin, so it won't make people cry non-stop, but when reading, you will always feel a little bored and uncomfortable. I like the characters Wuliu, Shiyun, and Yubie, but they are both gone [crying]

I like the shadows that are faintly chasing in laughter, I like them fearlessly blooming their lives, and I also like the beautiful writing style~

It looks good, the characters are full-bodied, and the daily life is relatively sweet. The author probably cuts it every 100 chapters, but please remember to open it slowly. After all, on the day when the book was not complete, he stopped updating for a long time, then came back to update, and then stopped updating again.

Very good novel, it made me spin.