Apocalyptic Spiritual Awakening: the Fight for Humanity

It can be seen that the author wrote with great care. Although some parts still appear immature, in some details, it can be seen that the author wrote after checking the information. This kind of spirit is much stronger than those who make up things randomly. Support this kind of down-to-earth author, come on! Hope you can get better and better! [Praise]

What I want to see in apocalyptic novels is the protagonist's unyielding spirit and the embodiment of human good and evil in the face of such desperate circumstances, rather than the protagonist's routine of pretending to be invincible. [Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy][Blow a kiss][Nearly crying][Smile] I don't expect him to embody all of it, at least some of it will allow me to learn meaningful things from it. [Explore][Punch][Understand] Wouldn't the author be angry for making this little suggestion? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Okay, very good! Keep up the good work!

There is a reason for the low score. He licks a girl when he meets her. Is this a person who can survive 10 years in the apocalypse? That Zhong Qingyin went to the protagonist for food after being hungry for three days, but never thought of giving any valuable items or help. This shows that this woman has no concept of equivalent exchange and just wants to have sex for free; then she ran to the supermarket to find food. When she came back, she was chased by two zombies. Instead of running home, she kept patting the protagonist's door, and then the protagonist opened the door and rescued her. At this time, the protagonist felt that this woman could bravely run out to find food, so he wanted to recruit this woman as a teammate. The unexpected operation came. The protagonist broke the hands and feet of the zombie, gave Zhong Qingyin a spear and asked her to stab the zombie to death. Just like that, there was no danger at all. Zhong Qingyin beat the zombie to death. The protagonist felt very happy, made food and ate it with Zhong Qingyin, and then concentrated on teaching Zhong Qingyin how to do it. Those who didn't know about the ability to survive in this world would have thought that the heroine's ancestors were the ancestors of this female protagonist. She was a stranger to a female neighbor and wanted to make her a teammate within two days of meeting her. She didn't care at all that this woman led zombies to her door. She was really capable of licking her.

Is it so holy to bring a slug bottle at the beginning?

I have now listened to Chapter 43. If I had skipped Chapter 40, I would have given it 5 stars. But when I heard about the subject of training and actual combat, oh my, it made me so embarrassed that I almost got embarrassment cancer. Everyone has a dream to join the army, but what you wrote is really embarrassing. Originally, there are no rules in the apocalypse, and then you have to establish so many rules here, which conflicts with the theme. Why do everyone like the apocalypse? It is because there are no rules in the apocalypse and there are not so many gaps. Ah, you have to stand guard, you have to salute, you have to report, and you have to use it. You, oh, let me go, this is so hypocritical, and if you have really been a soldier at this point, you may say that it is necessary for certain things and then mention it, but if you are not a soldier, others will not agree with you to use such rules. Suitable, really inappropriate. The two are not on the same level, and they will not ask you to agree to the rules. In fact, these people in the police station have no life-long friendship with you. You have not given anything to others. Your ambitions are cultivated slowly. Why should he be so devoted to you? I really thought that it would be enough to be nice to him. Human desires are endless. When he has a gun in his hand, a hard fist, and you are not invincible, who would like to find a father for himself? Besides, you usually have to ask him to report work and pretend to be cool. You said you are a supporting role, aren't you willing to be the protagonist?

After saving the heroine, save the best friend, after saving the best friend, save the parents? Hey, I was reborn, just to play. If I don't kill monsters quickly to practice and upgrade, I just want to play. I just want to be a nanny, bodyguard, and little licking dog. I just play. What's wrong with the last days of crawling around and enjoying things for so long, then playing music and then dancing.

It's not easy to give four stars to the author's writing! In my personal opinion, the first female character "Zhong Qingyin" to appear is a bit superfluous and dispensable. On the contrary, because of the existence of this character, the content that was supposed to be full of excitement and survival in a doomsday crisis has turned into the plot of a kimchi country idol drama. Another Wen Sihui character is actually somewhat useful. I hope that the author will have fewer plots and links that focus on female characters in the future, and that he will not treat male and female supporting characters decisively and with double standards. Add more sense of the tense and exciting atmosphere of survival in the midst of a doomsday crisis where people's hearts are dangerous and unpredictable. Of course, this is purely my personal suggestion and opinion, I hope the author doesn't mind!

To be honest, just make do with it. You should read other apocalyptic stories before writing them, and work out the abilities, factions, plots, creatures, skills, etc. Before writing. The abilities are not very good, the plot is too bland, and there is no sense of the apocalypse at all. The protagonist is a bit too taken for granted. I have only read 100 chapters. If I write more in the future, I would like to add more suggestions. Occupations, such as boxers, mechanics, swordsmen, swordsmen, gunners, magicians, etc. Then you can learn skills, and biochemistry also adds more variants, such as those that can expose yourself, such as those that can accelerate, dilute the body, and then after reaching a certain level, you can activate skills, such as blood recovery, berserk, and what equipment, use colors to distinguish levels, you see what you have in the end of the world

The more I read, the more annoying it becomes. The protagonist has so many tricks, but not even a cult master. The tricks are of no use. There are thousands of fanatic followers in a city. Such a cult will be destroyed before the end of the world. You should also use your brain to set the content. The more you read, the more annoying you are. Delete the book and retreat.

Is this a single heroine, a harem, or no heroine? [Think]

Good, good, good, good

I have listened to more than 50 chapters, and some of these sections are handled well, but you started talking about the evolution of superpowers, and after so long, you started to encounter a little bit. It is too difficult. Why not just write about reality directly, so that neither end can be reached. Also, after so many days, there is no other team? Where are the national troops with electricity not taking action? There should be text message broadcasts and so on! This is a bit like a stand-alone game. Please give me 4 points for encouragement. I can only say that it's not to my liking. Goodbye.

The atmosphere of the future is not very strong. You can imagine that the protagonist saved a group of people and trained for dozens of chapters. It was only a month or two in it. Earlier, it was said that the zombies mutated and became stronger. Then in the first dozens of chapters, there was no zombie swarm. There was no protagonist, and there was no mention of finding a place that was easy to defend and difficult to attack. I found two large courtyards in the city and cleared out the zombies. After reading dozens of chapters, I thought the protagonist was playing warlord war in Africa.

How can I put it this way? I have only read more than 20 chapters, and I can understand the addition of a superpower. The plot is relatively bland, and I seem to be satisfied but not satisfied at the same time. Those two girls really didn't write well, but overall it was pretty good. In addition, the plot progress is a little slow, or in other words, the protagonist is not highlighted enough. It's still a five-star encouragement. Besides, this is more than one million words written. What's the point of not having a rating? Shouldn't it? ? ?

Author, does your woman have a family? If it were the end of the world, I would definitely want to find my family! Didn't you think about your family members? They are all stone men without feelings, but you, a woman, have feelings? Generally speaking, apocalyptic stories about base building are like this. You have to find your relatives by yourself, while others are just tools. At least ask your subordinates if the network has been disconnected and whose family members are still alive, and find a helicopter to pick them up.

Come on! ! ,

A rare good book. I have been a bookworm for fifteen years. The writing is logical and rhythmic. I just wonder why there are so many words. There is no reading volume or rating [what]

Good-looking, no exaggeration, I won't leave it until I see a woman

This book seems okay overall, but it feels like after the end of the world, there will be a lot less people, and traffic on all roads will become congested, but the efficiency of doing things is very fast, so fast that without communication, everything can be done on the edge just by knowing one person. In today's life, 40 kilometers takes about an hour, but in the apocalypse, when the roads are full of cars and zombies, it can be done in an hour. Forget it, personnel coordination is now very good. The train boarding mechanism at the train station is already very good. Hundreds, thousands, or thousands of people will need about an hour to prepare, but after the apocalypse, it will take 5 minutes to prepare. , 5 Minutes to get on the bus, 20 kilometers, a total of 15 minutes, and I can go back again. The doomsday novel is trying to save time, but there is no such thing, and there is a feeling that before the protagonist arrives, others are fighting against each other. There is no threat of this or that. As soon as the protagonist comes, threats will come. Looking at the thrills in the end, there is a near miss. Nothing will happen to the people around you, the more you gather together, the more you will get. There was a big difference in the definition of superpowers before and after. At the beginning, I still chose different superpower crystal nuclei. The speed was given to the logistics, and everyone else wanted other things. Within two chapters, it became a speed core and could awaken other abilities. This is a very cool article, I feel so happy.

Don't just read the book without grading it.

The plot is still good. The front is a bit long-winded [laughing]

Who do you most want to know the male protagonist likes? I think Si Hui is more suitable for him. Anyway, it's very well written, I like it!

Learn the knowledge of the end times

Good apocalyptic novel

Very well written and highly recommended.

Why is the rating so low? No recommendations?

I can still make do with it when I'm short of books. I read the beginning.

I've only read a few chapters, and I feel pretty good about it. Interested in continuing to read.

Not bad, come on💪💪💪💪💪💪! It's better to write hundreds of millions of chapters and think carefully!