Naruto************

The subject matter is okay, but some settings are mentioned in the front but not in the back. The writing structure is not very smooth. Maybe it is because the time span is not grasped well, which makes me feel uncomfortable reading! And... Forget it, come on!

It's okay, but some plot magic changed Hiruzen and Danzo to be good friends. Danzo felt like he knew everything when he saw the Rinnegan. At that time, the Rinnegan only existed as the eyes of the legendary Sage of Six Paths. Also, his eyes couldn't be controlled to open and close by themselves. Otherwise, Kakashi wouldn't be a unit of measurement, and Nagato wouldn't be like that. As for the strength, it's just reasonable. Although the Eight Magic Techniques want to increase the strength directly, after all, there is less of a process for the protagonist to slowly develop.

Wonderful plot design The characterization is penetrating It's truly a work that makes the world and the gods weep [like] [laughing evilly]

It's not a lot to see. Can't these abilities be passed on to others? It's not the legendary Eight Miracles. It is the ability of the world beneath another person

I just pursued Xiao Nan's book. I hope it's a single girl

What do you think? Shiro must not do it. He must go to Konohagakure.

Most of the eight magical skills have been nerfed, so there's nothing exciting about them.

It's really good, very good-looking [shy][shy][shy]

It's okay, but the timeline is unclear.

The author is very active and will reply to you, and he will check the information carefully.

Very good, the plot is exciting and the ideas are clear, worth watching

It's good to read. Even though I'm a small reader, I'm just marking it. As long as there are reviews, it's the ones I've read.

Come on, come on, come on!

Good writing, keep it up

So hard to find fault with

At the critical moment, the author suddenly stopped updating for two days [smile]