Starting with Uchiha Obito
从宇智波带土开始
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 439k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
163Chapters
6Reads
6.8Score
2Listens
46.5kReads · all time
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Reader comments 45
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It's very good, the story has a smooth flow, the writing is good, and the plot is good. I see that there are no poisonous points for now, and the setting is also good. The setting seems to be in this world. No matter how long it takes, as long as you don't fall asleep, the other world just takes a nap unless you are woken up. There is not too much affection between children. Unlike other times when Obito traveled through time, he had to pick up Harano Rin. It's just that the world view of the other world is not quite perfect yet. No, it has become worse. After he went to the front line with his father, it became worse and worse. What the hell? It's good that I didn't write it before. Has it been replaced?
It's not bad, except that f4's discrimination against Uchiha is too obvious, but it can also be regarded as the result of the intrusion of the rules of other world games, so it's not a big problem. It means that level 100, level 4 involves the rules, and I am a bit worried that the combat power will be too low in the apocalyptic world in the future. Now in the background, level 4 seems to be the boss. When I think that the upper limit of the level is 100, it is really hard to imagine what elements will be added as class characteristics after the tenth level. After the fourth level, it may be possible to use small skills such as tailed beasts, fairy magic and other techniques to improve it. So far, it's a good read.
Not bad. There is no bloody plot. An adult time traveler can use his IQ normally. Come on, keep it up.
Come on, come on, come on
Although there are no snippets of dialogue. . . Not bad. . . Suitable for watching at night. . . Too tired to watch. . Will be sleepy. . It's a routine from more than ten years ago. . . Narrative flow. . . Not a conversation flow
A very good book. I haven't read such a cool article in a long time.
The novel is not bad, keep up the good work. That is. Can you write more? Not much. Just ten thousand words, ten thousand words a day.
It's wonderful, but there are some minor flaws, so don't discount it.
Very exciting, consistent with the original work Write more about daily life. In two lives, Naruto cannot develop unless he plays blood fusion and returns to his ancestral bloodline and becomes Otsutsuki.
Renew! I hope I can see the day it ends in my lifetime!!