The Oracle of the Gods

I would like to give five stars for encouragement to a new author. The plot is a bit messy, and I quite like the writing style. It would be better if the logic of the writing is clearer - I don't see any flaws in the logic now, but it is a bit unclear. I just can't follow the plot at once. After reading it again, I have to go back and figure out who is talking and what does this sentence mean. It's a bit tiring to read like this🤦 You can refer to the writing format of Lord of Mysteries and Dragon Clan to see how they allow readers to follow their logic🍉 All in all, I like the writing style, but the writing style needs to be improved.

I'm a little bit obsessed with watching the previous world. It seems that I need to use more brains to watch it. Come on, the author [send heartfelt]