Ye Luoli: Time Is Not Allowed to Be Violated

Fortunately, okay, the male protagonist is not the water prince. I hope it can be free of CP, Shi hope is beautiful alone, which is great.

This article is truly outstanding, every word shines with wisdom and light. Especially the protagonist's character, the elegance and generosity mentioned are just right, full of charm and attraction, which made me fall in love with him. First of all, I have to give you high praise for your writing skills. The article's theme is clear, the plot is compact, and the language is fluent, giving readers a pleasant reading experience. More importantly, you succeeded in shaping your protagonist's personality and making her appear elegant and graceful. This image of confidence, strength and wisdom deeply captures the reader's attention and makes it unforgettable. Secondly, the detail processing of the article is also very good. You successfully brought out the characters' emotions and psychological activities to the fullest, making the readers more engaged in the story. At the same time, you also cleverly use the environment and atmosphere to create the atmosphere of the story, which enhances the appeal of the entire story. Overall, this article is excellent and demonstrates your excellent writing skills. I believe that as long as you continue to maintain this innovative and professional attitude, you will definitely achieve greater success in your writing. However, I think further improvements may be needed in the following areas: On the one hand, while you successfully create an elegant image of your protagonist, you can delve deeper into her elegant appearance and inner conflicts to enhance the complexity and depth of the character. On the other hand, in terms of plot design, you can consider adding some suspense and dramatic elements to better attract the reader's attention and emotional investment. Finally, it is recommended that you continue to maintain an attitude of excellence in your future writing and continuously improve your writing skills and creative level.

How come no one reads such a beautiful book? Come on, update more, it will definitely become popular

What a beautiful book, why doesn't anyone read it? If you add more fuel, it will surely catch fire.

Although there is some oocc, but in my personal opinion, everyone sees things differently, which is normal. Da Da wrote it very well, and wrote Shi Xi very grandly. If you feel emotions, the master of time, the god of time, it would be very strange if there was a fixed cp. Time is fair and will not stop for a certain person... Personal thoughts [laughing and crying]

I came here this time considering that Toki doesn't have his own mount yet, which is a holy beast, and I want to submit it to the author. Of course, it doesn't matter whether he adopts it or not. Considering his identity, I recently read another novel, in which there are several dragons that are particularly suitable for Toki. The power of pressure and the power to control corpses. The second is the Void Reincarnation Dragon, which possesses the power of the void and reincarnation. The third is the Star and Sea Dragon, which possesses the power of the universe, stars and oceans. These three dragons also come from a novel by Tomato. It is called Being a Dragon Master. It is not too much to have more dragons. Some words may be biased. , But that's about it, I hope to extract some power from these three dragons, such as the power of time from the first dragon, the power of void and reincarnation from the second dragon, the power of stars from the third dragon, plus my own power of space, such as space, I kind of want to use these powers to create a path dedicated to Shi Xi His own dragon mythical beast, please note that it is a mythical beast, not a holy beast, the kind of upright mythical beast that becomes a god. If you want to know more about these three dragons, you can go to this book to have a look, just submit a contribution, please, hurry up and arrange a holy beast for my Shixi, it doesn't matter if you don't adopt it, hurry up and arrange one! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Let's change it. The name of the novel I recommend is: I am a beast master, Long Duo. It's not too much, right?

The big book is really beautiful, I just really hope that CP is the king of the world [love]

Awesome, really beautiful, highly recommended

I think the god of time, CP Water Prince, is the author! ! !

Very nice. I like it very much.

Big cheers for the author, it's a good read Why hasn't Shi hope appeared yet?

I don't have much to say, in short, it looks good, especially the description of the characters' clothes, spells, and creation spells are really first-rate. On the other hand, I don't know what to use when I create spells, so I can put 5 here.

Very nice novel

It looks great. I hope it will be updated more often. I like it so much [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

The first few dozen chapters are quite good, but in the middle, more chapters are written about other people, and very little is written about them. So those who come to see Shixi can still read the first few dozen chapters.

Such a beautiful storybook How come no one is watching?

It's nice (♥∀♥) and I like (ღ˘⌣˘ღ) the heroine's character. The plot of the novel is eloquent and the content is exciting. It's worth reading.

Very beautiful, worth recommending

Author, has Shi hope's CP been finalized? I hope it's Mo Ran. Mo Ran is the only son of the Creator God and Shi Xi. I think you want Shi hope to become the supreme god besides him. Who else is worthy of Shi Xi except Mo Ran? But it's not that I can't accept no cp. I respect your choice.

... How can I put it this way? It's pretty good-looking, and the main character's views are quite upright. It's a systematic article, right? (After all, the system's presence in the later stages is a bit low) It's not finished yet, it's a (I guess? It's not finished after all) story with no CP and no Holy Mother. The moment when he becomes the God of Time in the later period and judges the sinners is quite cool, and it also involves Meng Po Yue Lao and the like. Anyway, I think this book is pretty good.

How should I put it? There are too many descriptions of other people. I just wanted to come to Shixi.

Isn't Shu Yan a reincarnation? Why did it appear again?

It's good-looking. I think there's still room for Shiki and Toki's preference for each other. Even though Toki is the main storyline, I still want to see more Mozome. In addition to that, every time I finish Shixi's timeline, I have to make up for the timeline of the human world. It doesn't look like I'm used to it, it's a bit awkward. The ending is so sloppy, I look forward to a big revision.

I have one thing to say, but everything else is good. It's just that it was originally written by Toki. It would have been nice to keep writing it from Toki's perspective. We all really enjoyed watching it. There is no need to suddenly feel that the writing is too narrow and rush to fill in the human plot. This will actually reduce the viewing experience a lot and make people feel very draggy. One star will be deducted. I hope the author will continue to work hard and keep up the good work. I am optimistic about you~

It will definitely be popular, don't be discouraged, it was already finished when I watched it

It would be better if Toki didn't cut off the seven emotions and six desires

I hope I can stick to it [laughs][laughs]

It's okay so far

The heroine is fine. Love to watch

My condolences, your grandma will watch you grow up in heaven