Navy: Loyalty Abounds!

I really like this book. The plot line so far is pretty good and there are no major bugs. It's rare to write a good story about Pirates and Lingling. She is arrogant but not brainless, cunning and ruthless, willful but can also calculate the gains and losses coldly and rationally. This is the charming image of a top evil woman who can become the Yonko in my mind, rather than a crazy and obese old woman who follows the trend. The image positioning of the male protagonist is also very good. Let's put it this way, if Oltorun was the little butter male protagonist of R18, I would play through the entire game because of my greed for his beautiful [beep—] and [beep—] and [beep—]. Well, that's pretty much what it means. However, I read a review and said that the author's pirate novels will all turn into harem novels. I don't know what this one will be like. I hope the emotional line won't be too toxic, please.

It's good to read, but I feel a little uncomfortable with Lu Jiu. I hope it's not the heroine. Apart from that, this book is indeed a rare good book in One Piece. The author is great, come on! [Love][Love][Love][Laugh]

Come on, old Z. I chased you from next door. I really feel that the author is the number one among Pirates fans!

Overall, it's very good. The only bad thing is Lu Jiu. I really can't stand it. I have to jump every time I see it [rolls eyes]

The level is much higher than the average level of Tomato fan fiction. It is a high-quality text. There is no deliberately poisonous point. The logic of events is also somewhat original. The writing is smooth and worth spending time to read.

I got it from Fei Lu Chai. Every one of Boss's movies is very good.

From the perspective of someone who has never watched One Piece, this is a great book! It slowly connects the characters of the entire world to the protagonist. The characters are perfectly created and the characters are distinct throughout the whole ending. People who have never been exposed to this comic series can easily recognize each character, and have a strong sense of immersion, making people motivated to follow it. I didn't see any messy problems like ghostwriting, and the plot was described very wonderfully and coherently. Final summary: This is a "One Piece Masterpiece"!

The writing is quite good. I don't understand why in the world of One Piece, you have to be a pirate. Isn't it good to help the navy unlock the shackles and finally change the world?

Now that I've finally finished reading it, let me share my feelings. The first point is that among all the pirate novels I have read, it is the only one that I have finished reading. This is worthy of praise. After all, without delaying him, without water, it would be over directly. It must be praised. The second point is about the protagonist's growth experience and the plot of the characters around him. The whole content is relatively reasonable. I can only say that it is very reasonable and very good. Regarding the third point about layout, I think the overall idea is very clear. Go from nowhere—join the navy—become a general—become king of the world. Every step is connected and not too abrupt. Point 4 is about emotions. I think Lujiu is a better entry point. Then there is the aunt who has to say that she was really beautiful when she was young. I think the aunt's psychology can be described in more detail. This will strengthen the bond of family ties. Then the last scene, Lord Im, I think this setting is acceptable. The above are some of my feelings after reading this book. It is recommended that everyone take a look. You can try it out.

Ben's story is actually very simple, just like the title of the book says, in the name of loyalty. There is a sentence that is very well written (loyalty is not absolute, absolutely not loyal). The development is obscene in the early stage, the secret in the middle stage, and the climax in the later stage is the yellow robe. [Learned] [Learned] Although we can guess the general plot, this is the most praiseworthy point. We all know that the protagonist will definitely brave the wind and waves all the way, but the difficulty lies in the characterization of the details and the grasp of the rhythm. The author definitely has some writing skills! But it is a pity that there is not enough space to depict emotions, whether it is Taotu, Lujiu or even Hancock, who has only appeared a few times. Overall, the writing is pretty good.

Friendly reminder (comments contain spoilers) This article contains a large number of OOC characters, so it is recommended for newcomers who have not read the original work and most fan fiction to read it. Although there is OOC, it is within the acceptable range. There are few fighting plots, and it basically talks about how the protagonist develops in the new world. The most important point (Kozuki Oden was burned to ashes by Akainu, and Momonosuke was transformed into ♀ and sent to the pirate slaves to enjoy)

Too strong! Almost every chapter has a laugh! [Blows a kiss] Others don't know, but they poke me! So is the plot rhythm! There are also people who are worldly and are also absolutely unique hhhhh. Seeing how those little brats became generals at just a few years old or even in their teens, I really couldn't bear it and gave up the article after more than ten chapters. This is different! ! ! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] The writing is great, and there are also jokes! Love it, love it

It's good-looking, no need to say much. Many people think that some of the early words are very ink, but if you have read a lot of cool articles, you will feel that this book often follows some logic, is not particularly brainless, and gives you a sense of immersion when reading it. I won't say more, just read it.

The writing is good, but I just want to ask who will be the heroine? Has she been developing the series since she was a child? I will go to the East China Sea soon. I hope I can bring Nami and Zoro back. After all, we will not be able to conquer the world without teammates.

A different taste of the pirate novel, it is worth reading. The writing is not bad, and the main plot is also interesting and humorous. There are just some pitfalls that have not been buried. I don't know if there will be a follow-up. Overall, the writing is really good.

The plot is still very compact, and the foreshadowing laid by the author will be filled in one by one at the end, so that it will not be endless. Moreover, the characters' personalities are very distinct. As the plot changes, the changes in the characters' personalities are not sudden. The logic is coherent and it is a good book.

It is different from the ordinary pirate novels that are brainless and cool. It can be said that the human world version has more literary drama, but it is much better than more than 95% of the fan fiction. The only thing that may make you feel uncomfortable is the male protagonist's lovers. Overall, it is quite good, and it can be scored at 9.3 Or 9.4.

It's very good, the pace is good, the writing is interesting, and there's nothing sinister about it. It's one of the best pirate fanfics I've ever read. The ending is unexpected and reasonable, very smooth and perfect, with flowers scattered all over the place.

It's a naval novel with a Machiavellian orientation. The writing is good, but the plot and layout are top-notch. The one I'm currently serializing with Lao Ma is what I would call the Tomato Navy Giants, but that one is more focused on strength. This one focuses on layout and planning. The protagonist is also very strong, but he won't end easily. It has a unique flavor. I like it very much and learned a lot. If you don't like reading mindless cool articles, it's worth reading. Although it's a bit slow, the quality is definitely online [Like][Like][Like]

Suddenly saw the profile change? This new navy seems very attractive to me. Come on, big brother. It's a new year and a new atmosphere. You can't write ten chapters in one day. [Learned]

8 Points. It has all the advantages of a good book and is not too novice. The source of power and some secondary creations are relatively sophisticated, but there are still many bugs. For example, Peach and Rabbit's status as brigadier generals, and Shanks' ability to arm himself at such a young age

It's beautiful and has changed many people's endings. How many people don't write Luffy's timeline? How many people turned Doflamingo into a marine? How many of the three navy generals have a good relationship? How many people wrote a perfect ending for Big Mom and Kaido? All of this is achieved in this book. I would give it a 9.8 Out of 10 points.

So exciting. It has the excitement of fighting without being too over the top. There are ups and downs in the plot, but nothing sinister? All I can say is that Lu Jiu's part varies from person to person. Everyone has their own three views, which can not even be considered poisonous. (Personal opinion, if you think I am invincible, then I am invincible.) [Sneaky smile][Sneaky smile][Sneaky smile]

Among all the pirate fan fiction I have read, I cannot say that the first part is the best, but it is still very good. However, the ending is the best among all the pirate fan fiction I have read. Most of the fan novels such as Pirate Naruto have bad endings or a breakdown in combat power or are exaggerated. I feel that no matter how good the previous writing is, if it doesn't have a reasonable and good ending, it still can't be considered a good book. This book still feels very reasonable to me. I also think Im's mentality is very reasonable. There are some small regrets and it is not perfect. Overall, it is still a very good book.

One Piece fan fiction is one of the better works, but it ended too quickly. The author didn't see that Im was a woman and ended it. Otherwise, the ending would have been longer and different [Like]

It's really to my taste. I like to watch this kind of plot about the development of power, and the setting is also very enjoyable. It's quite high-quality, and the main word count is also good. I like to watch this kind of book that breaks a million and is finished. I like it very much. I'm going to read the author's other works. Five-star praise!

It feels very good, a bit like a novel I read before called Naruto: Flesh Escape Invincible

The book is very good, the plot is reasonable and thoughtful, although the style is quite different from the original work haha The protagonist is a violent person in the early stage, and a wise person in the later stage, so the title of this book is actually a scam. The protagonist is in the navy, but he is not righteous and has a self-interested personality

I've read a lot of Pirates fandoms, and although this one doesn't have a lot of words (I usually read more than 1K chapters), it's very exciting. Even though it has nothing to do with Luffy, the ending is also very good, and it's not unfinished, so feel free to read it [laughs]

The writing in this book is really good, it's not just like other pirate novels that are about killing and killing without thinking. The only thing that made me feel like there was something wrong was probably the setting of Im at the end. He can be set to be the strongest in the world, but it should not be the most domineering, but the strongest in terms of physical strength or ability. It is known that Haki will affect abilities, and Im is suspected to be an immortal who has undergone immortality surgery, so he should not be able to use Haki anymore, otherwise the immortality surgery will be affected. This could explain why he was frightened by Joyboy's Haki. He should have been unable to use Haki.