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I read the latest chapter today. I personally feel that the author wrote this book very interestingly. However, I think there are two small flaws. First, the protagonist's character is too straight, not like the character of a person whose parents have died. Children who have experienced this kind of experience should grow up earlier than their peers. They should not be like the protagonist in the article who has no emotional intelligence at all and behaves like a straight man. However, in the book, the straight male classmate who wants to seduce the protagonist is really cool. Secondly, the description of the Shura field and even the sisters privately competing for the protagonist in the book is a bit too hasty. Two people who love each other as sisters fight each other with fists and kicks, which makes me feel like a beautiful sister. The image of the elder sister is shattered, and she doesn't behave like a big sister should. I don't think Shura Field is bad at all, but the protagonist's character is too straight. This kind of character cannot handle Shura Field. If the author writes the emotional line in this way, it will seem inconsistent. Finally, here is my personal suggestion: if there are curse words in the book, it will lower the upper limit of the book. Although the protagonist feels quite down-to-earth, the images or characters of the sisters feel fragmented. Finally, I hope the author will write better and better books.

It's good to read. I love reading it. I've been following Liu Nanshuang's book until now.

I hope there will be more female protagonists, but if there are too many female supporting characters, I will refuse them. It depends on the author's arrangements.

It looks great, the content is lighthearted and enjoyable

One day fish is produced, either high-quality products or banned products

If the fish is produced in a day, it must be of high quality. It's too short [angry]

It's good to watch, but the male protagonist is too stupid. He's so proactive and I haven't kissed him yet. I hope it ends in a harem.

There must be prohibited items when produced by Brother Yu

May I ask, single or rear?

This novel doesn't look good

Believe me, it looks great and doesn't feel weird when you read it. If you keep fueling a fish, you will definitely write better and better

I hope it will be as comprehensive as this book

Do you know why I watched it? Because the pictures in this book, ahem, everyone understands, the author must have read it a lot [laughing evilly]

Because this book is beautiful, I give it a five-star rating. The reason why I give a five-star rating is because this book is beautiful. I don't like to talk nonsense.

Author, I think the single female protagonist is the best.

Every one of Yitianyu's works is really exciting to watch and really suits my taste [face covering]

I've written it this far, it just doesn't make sense if I don't collect it all [star]

I hope you can read them all, and don't read them all suddenly like the last book. I hope there is some plot so that there is no barrier between them.

Isn't this cover a girl from a rich family? [Shocked][Shocked]

Apart from anything else, the review should have been buried by the author. Very bold writing

I hope it's not a fake harem

The author comes out to say whether there is a single heroine or multiple heroines?

Looks good! I hope the fish will stay safe and not be blocked again. It's acceptable for us to have less cars [laughing evilly] I hope Sister Liu can get Beiran on board soon [laughing evilly]

The fish was produced one day, it looked good

What does cover mean? Author

The four stars are fighting for Shen Nanqiao.

Overall, it's pretty good. It's in line with the psychology and points of view of the male public. [Read carefully]. The article is relatively rich in content and the plot is rigorous. However, some parts are a little bit abrupt. I'll give it a four points for encouragement. [Read carefully]

The author is really great

I want to ask how many female protagonists there are? [What]

Is your cover a girl from a rich family?