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Thank you readers for your support. As long as there are people reading, the book will continue to be updated. The author is just starting out and has many shortcomings. I hope you can forgive me. Thank you again [love]

It's been a long time since I've found such high-quality Pokémon literature! ! There are so many good ideas and the plot is also very good. I just like this kind of plot with tight ups and downs. This is the first time I have seen such a good writing by CP. The two male protagonists are super handsome. Of course, this is the first time I have seen such a plot (currently fighting against Lu and Shi Yun. Lu Jianming is always Shi Yun's support!! In addition, the plot mainly refers to the way they get along. This is the first time I have seen the two male protagonists)! ! Looks good! ! I like elf novels with crisis mixed with suspense, rich plots, close connections, and emphasis on bonds. And I like the personality of the protagonist very much (woohoo, he is really willing to sacrifice for the people and things he loves, even for an NPC (it's Xingyue!!). Seeing that her Sun Eevee is dead, he is willing to spend points to sacrifice for her. It really shows that he is not a selfish person, he values feelings, perseverance, and has a brain. But after all, he is also a high school student. Occasionally, he will have brain cramps, which is normal for everyone. (It feels more alive this way. Reality), not to mention the high-intensity almost continuous copy and the responsibility of finding the truth about his parents' case and the younger brother he protects and cherishes (there are many details to see! Pippi dolls, Zoroa's transformed Sun Eevee, etc.), He knows that he needs to work harder to protect what he loves, and he still thinks about the copy and his parents' case during the holidays. However, it can be seen that Lu Jianming can help. He can always save Shi Yun at critical moments, because there are still many things that Lu Jianming doesn't know about Shi Yun (for example, he will die when the power of evil spirits is exhausted). Shi Yun also has too many shoulders and hides a lot from the people he loves. It will be very tiring for him to get into Shi Yun's heart, and Blood Crow still has a lot of love.！！，…！！！！꒦ິ^꒦ິ ！！！！！

This is my favorite Pokémon fanfic with two male protagonists that I have read so far, and it is the kind that favors male characters. I hope it will continue to develop in this direction, and I will always support you. @ No matter what other people say, just write the story you think is the best. Come on, the author I have never met.

Come on, the author [sending my heart], don't pay too much attention to the bad comments. As long as this book continues to be updated, there will be people who like it and will continue to read it [please update]. I really look forward to Shiyun bringing his friends to give the enemy a grand Hyakki Night Parade [Adoration]! And the copy of Giratina later. I also like the emotional line between Xiaolu and Shiyun very much [shy], and I hope the author will not give up on this book in the future [almost crying]. If you really can't update or can't continue writing, please let me know [grievance].

I saw that it is a great elf novel, the subject matter is quite novel, and Zoroa is very cute. It can be seen that the author has a lot of ideas, including the original game, animation, the legendary Arceus, and even the island of Eos where the big gathering is held (although I haven't been there yet). However, for people who have never been exposed to Pokémon or have only played GBA, many things are easy to understand (such as the two masteries of Chua), but for old Pokémon fans, it is really interesting to understand every place. But one question is, are the two male protagonists the protagonist and Lu or the protagonist and his brother? (I hope it's Orthopedics QAQ) I feel like not many people have read it. So far, it's a really good non-traditional elf novel.

To be honest, the plot is quite innovative, but please don't stop updating it, please. It's not enough, it's really not enough! Oh my god, please update it quickly.

The plot is tightly linked, the characters are clear, and the appeal is strong. It is easy to get involved if you are not paying attention. Moreover, the emotional line between Shiyun and Lu is well written, not too fast, and grasped just right, making people feel very comfortable. I have read so many Pokémon fanfics, and this one is truly No. 1. The plot is very brain-burning, and my brain was racing faster than usual while watching this. Please give the author a thumbs up here, awesome! ✧*｡٩(ˊᗜˋ*)و✧*｡

It feels pretty good. It's a long-lasting story. It's just that the character of the protagonist has too many flaws. Of course, that doesn't mean that the protagonist's personality is not good. He always takes care of things on his own. My younger brother is well protected. I hope another male protagonist can teach him self-love soon [Blow kiss]

The author's writing style and plot are both great. Normally when I read other Pokémon, I don't feel like I want to keep reading, but since I read this book, I really can't stop. I love it so much [Adore][Adore][Adore]

Nice! Rich in content and novel in subject matter.

It's super good-looking, but there are too few authors and it's not enough to read (இωஇ )

I feel it's very interesting. Although some copies use weird and straight stories, I hope it won't stop updating. Keep up the good work, author.

What is the name of the other male protagonist? When will it appear

The plot before the second dungeon was a bit depressing, but the rest was fine. The overall flow is a bit biased towards the infinite flow, and the interaction with my own elves is not particularly great.

It's the first time I've seen this style, it's great

Really beautifully written

I know, although there may be some reasons, the part about catching Ibrahimovic of the Sun poisoned me, so I'll wait and see.

It's pretty good-looking, no surprises.