The Elves Arrive: Champion Game

It's very interesting, the author is very active, please write it without being too eunuch. I just personally feel that the protagonist can be more decisive and ruthless. After all, this is a competition between countries, and the protagonist is lucky. The elves are relatively not strong and are not as good as the Quasi God or the Yusan family. After all, they are more famous. The author writes very well and I will continue to follow it.

The idea is good, the plot is good, and the writing is above average. It is worth watching, with only one or two small flaws. It can be said to be a superior work on Tomato. However, there are many strange operations, and they are not pointed out. I wrote a lot of foreshadowings. In the end, the author has to explain it himself. This is foreshadowing. Not only does it not attract others to look forward to, it also further lowers the reader's expectations (shame). The author's writing is good, and the writing is comfortable to read, but the author's writing style is inferior. I wrote a lot of useless ideas and learned a lot of opposite ideas (a lot of wise ideas). I wrote them without considering what impact they would have on the readers. At least for me, when I saw the author's thoughts in those paragraphs, I was immediately silenced, which made people have no interest in reading further. In addition, the information released by the author was not enough, resulting in an unequal amount of information between the author and the readers. It is easy to have conflicts in the discussion. For example, a strange operation that seems strange in the eyes of readers, but has not yet been explained, is considered a perfect magical operation in the eyes of the author. As a result, the discussion is reasonable for both parties, which makes other readers uncomfortable and easily reduces the impression score of the book. As a result, I kept reading, and ended up forgetting about it. However, the plot writing is very good, very smooth, and very comfortable, so the score is excellent. There are only one or two blocking points, but overall it is still excellent in terms of excellence. After visual inspection, the lowest is 8.4, And the better one may be around 9.2. Giving four stars is just to express my dislike of that part. Five stars are added because the author is writing very seriously and the future is promising. The low score should not cause the scorer to lose motivation and continue writing.

Most of them are okay, except for the Charmander at the back. This way, you can quickly gain experience and evolve into a Charizard in a very short time. This way of leveling up is a bit biased towards the game, which I don't like a bit. I don't know if mythical beasts will come out later. If they do, I don't want anyone to conquer them. Most of the mythical beasts will be persecuted. I hope I won't be persecuted here again 🤦

The writing is pretty good. In my opinion, it doesn't have any bad points. It's all acceptable. The plot is quite enjoyable. Come on, I wish the author's writing will get better and better and the rating will get higher and higher 👍

The idea is pretty good, but a bit idealistic. In this kind of national sports competition, it's okay if you don't take the initiative to eliminate your opponents. How can you say that after the enemy attacks you, you still casually let the opponent go? It can only be said that it is suitable for young people in the younger age group to watch.

Very good, I am writing it very seriously.

The book is good, but the integration is not very good. There are passages in the advent of elves, and the national luck category is added later. The rewards of national luck books are not enough. I have read a similar book before, where the elven world is divided into regions. As long as you capture or kill the leader, you can conquer this region. Each region is divided into a grand final. It's a pity that it was cheated. I hope the author will write better in the future.

Not only is the plot very good, the author also pays great attention to the paragraphs and comments section, and it would be hard to live without a five-star conscience.

Can't Gyarados fly? Nidoking who can forcibly add life orbs to his attributes (◦˙▽˙◦) It's really useful and has a wide impact area.

After watching it for a while, I thought it looked really good. Keep watching.