[Pokemon]+[Long story]+[World Fusion]+[Elf version of Squidward]+[No heroine]
Original title: Elf Descent: Game of Champions/Book test found the best title: Elf Descent: Rise of the Flame
"A certain god": I didn't expect that after so many years, there are still people playing the ancient version of the elf game.
Lin Mo:? So? You just killed me?
"A certain god": No, there are two ways for you now. The first is to reincarnate normally, and the second is...
Lin Mo: Two two two, I am two!
…………
Lin Mo: As you can see now, elves are not all evil. They should be treated rationally...
Ding!
"A certain god": Tsk tsk, the response is good. You are worthy of being the one I selected. Next, we can start the "comprehensive internal testing"
Apart from me, there are 17 gods participating in the competition, 180 beta testers, I'm optimistic about you, kid!
Lin Mo: Σ(ŎдŎ|||)ﾉﾉI will work for you, where will you dig a hole? Squid competition! ?
Reader comments
It's very interesting, the author is very active, please write it without being too eunuch. I just personally feel that the protagonist can be more decisive and ruthless. After all, this is a competition between countries, and the protagonist is lucky. The elves are relatively not strong and are not as good as the Quasi God or the Yusan family. After all, they are more famous.
The author writes very well and I will continue to follow it.
The idea is good, the plot is good, and the writing is above average
Worth a look, only one or two minor flaws
It can be said to be a superior work on Tomato.
But there are many strange operations, and they are not pointed out clearly.
I wrote a lot of things that were said to be foreshadowing, but in the end the author still needs to explain it himself. This is foreshadowing.
Not only does it fail to attract others and create a sense of expectation for future reading, it also further lowers the reader's sense of expectation (shame)
The author's writing style is good and the writing is comfortable to read.
But the author's writing style is inferior
I wrote a lot of useless ideas and learned ideas in the opposite direction (many wise ideas)
If you write it without considering what impact it will have on readers?
At least as far as I am concerned, when I saw the author's thoughts in those paragraphs, I was immediately silenced, and I had no interest in reading further.
There is also not enough information released by the author, resulting in an imbalance in the amount of information between the author and the reader.
Discussion conflicts can easily arise
For example, a strange operation that looks weird in the eyes of the reader, but without explanation, seems to be a perfect magical operation in the eyes of the author.
The result is that both parties have a reasonable discussion
As a result, other readers felt uncomfortable after reading it.
It is easy to reduce the impression score of books
It led to raising books, but ended up keeping them, and ended up forgetting them.
But the plot writing is very good, very smooth and comfortable, so it scores points
Excellent
There are only one or two blocking points, but overall it is still excellent in terms of excellence.
After visual inspection, the lowest is hovering at 8.4
A better one might be around 9.2
Giving four stars is just to express my dislike of that part.
Five stars are added because the author is writing very seriously and the future is promising. The low score should not cause the scorer to lose motivation and continue writing.
Most of them are okay, except for the Charmander at the back. This way, you can quickly gain experience and evolve into a Charizard in a very short time. This way of leveling up is a bit biased towards the game, which I don't like a bit. I don't know if mythical beasts will come out later. If they do, I don't want anyone to conquer them. Most of the mythical beasts will be persecuted. I hope I won't be persecuted here again [face covering]
The writing is pretty good. In my opinion, it doesn't have any bad points. It's all acceptable. The plot is quite enjoyable. Come on, I wish the author's writing will get better and better and the rating will get higher and higher [Like]
The idea is pretty good, but a bit idealistic. In this kind of national sports competition, it's okay if you don't take the initiative to eliminate your opponents. How can you say that after the enemy attacks you, you still casually let the opponent go? It can only be said that it is suitable for young people in the younger age group to watch.
Very good, I am writing it very seriously.
The book is good, but the integration is not very good. There are passages in the advent of elves, and the national luck category is added later. The rewards of national luck books are not enough. I have read a similar book before, where the elven world is divided into regions. As long as you capture or kill the leader, you can conquer this region. Each region is divided into a grand final. It's a pity that it was cheated. I hope the author will write better in the future.
Not only is the plot very good, the author also pays great attention to the paragraphs and comments section, and it would be hard to live without a five-star conscience.
After watching it for a while, I thought it looked really good. Keep watching.
Can't Gyarados fly?
Nidoking who can forcibly add life orbs to his attributes (◦˙▽˙◦)
It's really useful and has a wide impact area.
The plot is very good and combines many advantages, especially the fighting, which is very exciting and I like it very much, so keep up the good work, author! When there are more words later, more people will read it.
The author updates steadily, my favorite is [flying kiss][flying kiss]
Come on!
It is enough to be the mainstay of the theme of fighting against the National Games. The quality must not decline [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts]
The plot is compact and the pace is fast, suitable for enjoying while fishing...
Once I really couldn't watch and had a headache...
Unlike others, the accuracy of the start is very good. The first copy is very enjoyable to watch, and the positioning of weak elves is also very accurate. I look forward to the next plot.
The plot is very good and well written.
Taking care of every new flower on Rotten Tomatoes, I feel like there are so few people still following the latest ones [Chigua]
The book is very good, I hope the author will continue to read [laughs][laughs]
Big cheers for the author
There is nothing poisonous at the moment, you can watch [Eat Melon]
Come on!
It's okay, I feel like there's something wrong, but there's nothing wrong [thinking]
The plot is reasonable, the supporting characters have online IQs, and sometimes they're very interesting. It's quite enjoyable to watch.
It's pretty, don't be a eunuch
Don't come here, heroine. It's a little bit painful to level up quickly.
It's very interesting, the author is very active, please write it without being too eunuch. I just personally feel that the protagonist can be more decisive and ruthless. After all, this is a competition between countries, and the protagonist is lucky. The elves are relatively not strong and are not as good as the Quasi God or the Yusan family. After all, they are more famous. The author writes very well and I will continue to follow it.
The idea is good, the plot is good, and the writing is above average Worth a look, only one or two minor flaws It can be said to be a superior work on Tomato. But there are many strange operations, and they are not pointed out clearly. I wrote a lot of things that were said to be foreshadowing, but in the end the author still needs to explain it himself. This is foreshadowing. Not only does it fail to attract others and create a sense of expectation for future reading, it also further lowers the reader's sense of expectation (shame) The author's writing style is good and the writing is comfortable to read. But the author's writing style is inferior I wrote a lot of useless ideas and learned ideas in the opposite direction (many wise ideas) If you write it without considering what impact it will have on readers? At least as far as I am concerned, when I saw the author's thoughts in those paragraphs, I was immediately silenced, and I had no interest in reading further. There is also not enough information released by the author, resulting in an imbalance in the amount of information between the author and the reader. Discussion conflicts can easily arise For example, a strange operation that looks weird in the eyes of the reader, but without explanation, seems to be a perfect magical operation in the eyes of the author. The result is that both parties have a reasonable discussion As a result, other readers felt uncomfortable after reading it. It is easy to reduce the impression score of books It led to raising books, but ended up keeping them, and ended up forgetting them. But the plot writing is very good, very smooth and comfortable, so it scores points Excellent There are only one or two blocking points, but overall it is still excellent in terms of excellence. After visual inspection, the lowest is hovering at 8.4 A better one might be around 9.2 Giving four stars is just to express my dislike of that part. Five stars are added because the author is writing very seriously and the future is promising. The low score should not cause the scorer to lose motivation and continue writing.
Most of them are okay, except for the Charmander at the back. This way, you can quickly gain experience and evolve into a Charizard in a very short time. This way of leveling up is a bit biased towards the game, which I don't like a bit. I don't know if mythical beasts will come out later. If they do, I don't want anyone to conquer them. Most of the mythical beasts will be persecuted. I hope I won't be persecuted here again [face covering]
The writing is pretty good. In my opinion, it doesn't have any bad points. It's all acceptable. The plot is quite enjoyable. Come on, I wish the author's writing will get better and better and the rating will get higher and higher [Like]
The idea is pretty good, but a bit idealistic. In this kind of national sports competition, it's okay if you don't take the initiative to eliminate your opponents. How can you say that after the enemy attacks you, you still casually let the opponent go? It can only be said that it is suitable for young people in the younger age group to watch.
Very good, I am writing it very seriously.
The book is good, but the integration is not very good. There are passages in the advent of elves, and the national luck category is added later. The rewards of national luck books are not enough. I have read a similar book before, where the elven world is divided into regions. As long as you capture or kill the leader, you can conquer this region. Each region is divided into a grand final. It's a pity that it was cheated. I hope the author will write better in the future.
Not only is the plot very good, the author also pays great attention to the paragraphs and comments section, and it would be hard to live without a five-star conscience.
After watching it for a while, I thought it looked really good. Keep watching.
Can't Gyarados fly? Nidoking who can forcibly add life orbs to his attributes (◦˙▽˙◦) It's really useful and has a wide impact area.
The plot is very good and combines many advantages, especially the fighting, which is very exciting and I like it very much, so keep up the good work, author! When there are more words later, more people will read it. The author updates steadily, my favorite is [flying kiss][flying kiss] Come on!
It is enough to be the mainstay of the theme of fighting against the National Games. The quality must not decline [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] The plot is compact and the pace is fast, suitable for enjoying while fishing... Once I really couldn't watch and had a headache...
Unlike others, the accuracy of the start is very good. The first copy is very enjoyable to watch, and the positioning of weak elves is also very accurate. I look forward to the next plot.
The plot is very good and well written.
Taking care of every new flower on Rotten Tomatoes, I feel like there are so few people still following the latest ones [Chigua]
The book is very good, I hope the author will continue to read [laughs][laughs]
Big cheers for the author
There is nothing poisonous at the moment, you can watch [Eat Melon] Come on!
It's okay, I feel like there's something wrong, but there's nothing wrong [thinking]
The plot is reasonable, the supporting characters have online IQs, and sometimes they're very interesting. It's quite enjoyable to watch.
It's pretty, don't be a eunuch Don't come here, heroine. It's a little bit painful to level up quickly.