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The Honkai Impact Chapter is very well written. If you don't want to skip to Chapter 69, the only complaint is that the Genshin Impact Chapter is just at the beginning. The content is small and it doesn't match the title of the book. But I don't care because I know everything about MiHoYo, so I give it a five-star review. It's really well written.

It looks so familiar. Next is the Rice Wife Demon King, the Desert Emperor, and the Grass God's biological father. I can't understand even if I copy it.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the connection seems quite natural. The start of Genshin Mondstadt is not inconsistent, the monthly refresh settings of the life simulator are not abrupt, Bai Ye is not brainless and invincible, and the insect-infested GG for the first time is quite realistic, and there is no feeling of forcing a golden finger.

The plot of Honkai Impact is very good, but the plot of Genshin Impact is a bit slow. Maybe it's because the author only continued writing after half a year. It's actually very good. It would be better if the updates were more stable [face covering]

The writing style is quite comfortable, there are no fancy words, it is all down-to-earth descriptions. For example, Mebius's fleeting smile when he received the doll, and the scene where Ellie calls "Daddy" for the first time. These small details are very real and not deliberately sensational. The combat part is not too long-winded, and the description of time stop + Honkai control is clear, refreshing but not empty, and it is very smooth to follow.

The randomness of the simulator is quite interesting. There are level differences in talents, and there are consolation prizes for failure. It is not a smooth journey. Byakuya's stand-in "world" setting does not steal the show, and the combination with Honkai's control is also reasonable, without a sense of dissonance that overwhelms everything.

Very good plot design, although the writing is a bit immature and some plots are quite poisonous, but they are slightly poisonous. Overall, the flaws do not hide the good points, so it is quite good.

Give yourself a five-star and encourage yourself [eat melon]

0 God gave me the crystal, may the flawless people love and bless me, the pink fairy, the king of my true self, the Herrscher of the Origin. 1 God gave me classics, knowing the art of war, strategizing, the king of law and the law of law. 2 God has given me a portal to reach the sky of the universe. I can create something out of nothing. I am the king of space and the lawmaker of space. 3 God gave me a crown, to turn thunder and lightning into a bow, to crush all things, to be the conquering king, the ruler of thunder. 4 God has given me the authority to control the endless storm, so close to the end of the world, the King of Desire, the Lawyer of Wind 5 God gave me a brocade robe to control the celestial phenomena and freeze all things. I am the king of stagnation and the lawr of ice. 6 God gave me wine, the wine of death, the sweetness of dreams, the king of silence, the lawgiver of death. 7 God gave me a sharp sword, wrapped in immortal flames, a spark that sets a prairie fire, the king of disease and the lawr of fire. 8 God gave me wings to control the state of mind of all living beings, dreams and reality, the king of spirit, the lawr of consciousness. 9 God gave me jade shoes, and the force of gravity becomes a rock. The sky collapses and the earth breaks apart. I am the king of destruction and the rhythmic ruler of rocks. 10 God gave me a puppet, regardless of the number of bodies, thousands of people with thousands of faces, the king of disillusionment, the ruler of domination 11 God gave me chains to punish filthy sins, a prison made of earth, the king of bonds, the lawgiver of restraints. 12 God gave me the Holy Grail, the brew of resentment, the destroyer of decay, the king of erosion, the discipliner of erosion. 13 God has given me everything, commanded me to eradicate sin and destroy civilization, the King of the End, the Ruler of the End.

The previous plot is quite boring but the simulation is well written. It is a good book.

The point of making up for regrets is very poignant, changing Mebius's lonely childhood, and giving Ellie a happy growing environment. There is no forced sensationalism, and the emotional expression is restrained but powerful.

It's a very good book. Although it starts with Mondstadt and then Honkai Impact, it's very interesting to read the whole first part and then you start Teyvat.

Author, don't stop updating. I also hope to see the day when you finish it. Even if you stop updating, don't let it be unfinished. This is really good, but there are not many people watching it. If you can give a recommendation, if more people click and recommend, it will reach 80 or more points. 90 Or more points are still ok. After all, each short story can be read as a separate chapter, and it is still very exciting.

I can't imagine how the current Fontaine Simulation is going to die. I hope it will end in a reasonable way and not be like a clown in 2.5🤡. I suddenly remembered it when I saw the author's comment later! More than death, a way to end the simulation.

Everything else is okay, except that the female character's personality is a bit broken. Although the game originally produced by MiHoYo has a low limit, it should not be this low. All I can say is that the female character's personality shouldn't be too that way. For example, I can accept both mother and daughter. After all, I'm somewhat used to it. In my case, I can accept it as long as there is no blood relationship. But not too much, be a little more restrained. This is better.

Personal evaluation: It is not recommended for those who don't like multiple female protagonists (I posted this comment when the protagonist was still in the simulation. I don't know if the people in the simulation will find the protagonist). Everything else is pretty good, and it is considered to be average among fan fiction written by newcomers [laughing]

No, this person's writing is okay! Why is it only about 6 minutes?

I hope that I am destined to evolve infinitely, become infinitely stronger, have unlimited potential, and have unlimited possibilities. I hope that I am destined to travel through the heavens. My favorite is Nasida's wife. I hope that I am destined to love Nasida's wife forever. I hope that I am destined to live forever, taking Nasida's wife across the heavens. I hope that I am destined to live forever, marry Nasida's wife. I hope that I am destined to live forever, never to be cheated, never to be bullied, and never to be betrayed. Please, this is my wish. My comment is my wish. Please, this is my wish. There is a substitute in the panel. I hope it is not a substitute. Can you finally remove the substitute? Please, this is my wish

I originally planned to just watch it twice and then leave it, but the plot of "Growing Up My Father" kept me here, and now Ai Li has become Ai Li [laughter]

I feel that Honkai Impact is better than Genshin Impact. I hope I can finish it in one go this time [Blow kiss]

Yes, but I still like the plot of Honkai Impact III, and I don't know when to continue writing Honkai Impact III [Eating Melon]

The novel is good, but, well, it's quite like a spellbinding book, with shadows of the two previous mock novels.

@ Author I would like to ask the heroines in Honkai Impact 3 and Star Iron, when should they go to Bai Ye in Genshin Impact, or should Bai Ye go to them, or should they not want them and just ask for the heroines in Genshin Impact. Please reply.

I feel like the author, your writing about Honkai Impact is better than writing about Genshin Impact

The simulation article is really well written and looks good [like]

The front is pretty good, but there's a clone in the back, which looks weird.

This book is super good-looking, less toxic, and quite enjoyable. It's also a simulator type of body time travel, and the protagonist still has brains. It's great [sending my heart]

Can be good looking Recommended

Personally I like it better

When to elbow Beng Er?