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This is a good book that starts in the first person. Except it's a little awkward. Everything else was well written, and the story gave me the feeling of reading novels in the past, unlike today's fast-food novels such as "Long Aotian" and "System". This is a book that I want to read more and more. Give the author some suggestions. Write the first person or other people's names. If the author doesn't want to write it, you can ask someone else to add it for you. This will make the reading smoother and the current idea will be ok with some scientific logic added to the plot. But the worldview can be expanded and innovated so that the writing can become wider and wider. It's also my first time to write a review. I don't know if it's well written or not, but I really like this book.

The writing is okay, but the characters are not clearly expressed. Needs to be strengthened. Yes, it's the same as Xiaobai wrote.

It's obviously boring, but it's very interesting [thinking] [laughing]

This writing style has the feel of a Japanese light novel

It looks okay, come on

A good book, not a novice

It's well written, I recommend reading it