Star Iron, I Point at the Star God with the Sword That Governs the Universe.

This book feels like top-quality ingredients with only salt added. It's delicious, but it feels like something is missing.

The author is very nice, but the protagonist can be a little more approachable and more decisive towards the enemy @izaizi. Please beg the author [crying]

I haven't read much, and the ideas are very interesting, but the writing style is still lacking, and the writing is a bit "running account". After careful analysis, it is lack of more detailed description: there is no exaggeration of the atmosphere and plot, the transition between events is not processed, which makes it not smooth enough, and the following events do not leave enough buffer space for the reader, causing the reader's brain to be tired of receiving information, so that the climax plot does not hit the reader's heart (due to raising the threshold). It will be an excellent novel if it is refined. Finally, anyone with an idea can do it, but it takes great courage and excellent execution to dare to write. It is worth encouraging in any case. At the same time, I also believe that the author will write better and better, so come on. The follow-up situation is much more proficient than before, or maybe I am used to the author's writing style? If you find it unsatisfactory, you might want to try eating it next to the Xianzhou plot.

When reading this book, don't use your brain, trust me

The author is actually quite good overall, but the character's personality and way of speaking are not in line with the original work and are not distinct. They are like talking robots. I suggest the author read the original work again to understand the character's personality and way of speaking. In that case, I think this book will be very good. Four stars. I hope the author can continue to work hard.

The knife was too hasty. I think it is better to think long term and hide the hint of the knife at the same time, making us unprepared. In the end, Jing Yuan explained it and we all understood it. It would be better to paint the sad picture after being relieved instantly.

If it is a new book by the author, my evaluation is that the author has great potential, and this book is very well written. The writing is a bit green. Looking forward to more excellent works

The author's writing style needs to be improved (≥O≤)ﾉ✏️ The author of Kafka's Love has become a husband

The imagination is quite rich. If the writing style can be strengthened, it should be a good fan novel.

Come on, author, I will always support you @Come on [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss] [air kiss]

Although the writing style of this book is not very good, if it is the first time the author writes it, it is already very good. The later combat power system is a bit broken. It was originally said to be a super commander, but now it turns out that it can't even beat the commander level, which is a bit outrageous.

Reading without thinking [full]٩( 'ω' )و

It looks good, but can you please tell us the name of your next book, author? It's better than choking to death in your intestines, okay?

I personally think this combat power is a bit wrong. It's just a little too awesome. Very nice.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, I don't care if you understand or not, it's over if it looks good🫵

Before he could write 500,000 words, he followed the Internet cable to steal the author's toilet seat, even if he was squatting in a pit.

Waibibabu, ah Rourou~~

It looks good. If you like it, come and see more.

Come on, I'm optimistic about you

I actually found Bengtiejia Minecraft

I hope that the main characters can be portrayed in more detail. Many people write them in a simplified way.

This content is a bit boring for us, but overall it is still very good, so I think it is right to give it full marks. You can read dozens of chapters every day to arouse your desire, which will make you more motivated.

It's so beautifully written [Like], I'm very satisfied [Blow a kiss], don't stop updating. Come on, the author, finish it [Learned] [Like] [Learned] I think you should wait for him to update before updating, and stop updating for a while. I really don't want this book to end like this. There are not many good-looking books like this [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [blowing kiss]

You can bring Wither Sla and the Execution Dragon out for a spin [Thinking]

Pretty good, but definitely no brainer.

I don't care if there are a few pictures in the front for review, why are the last two being reviewed?

Very interesting book

This book is okay, just um, don't let your brain stop reading it

There's nothing else to say, it looks good to me anyway, keep it up and keep moving forward

You, the author, are already very good, but you still need to work harder and give me five stars for encouragement.