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The plot is compact, the battles are passionate, the protagonist's IQ is online, the characters are delicately portrayed, and the story is not templated so people can't guess the ending. Please do your best, the author. It was good before the 100th chapter, but after the 100th chapter it became a template. The plot was far-fetched and sensational, and it made people unable to move because there was no foreshadowing. The gods could see that Feng Lie, who could kill gods with the essence, could not see the hundreds of demons in his body, and the setting conflict was too strong.

This book is quite good, but the world view has not been opened yet, and there are few updates. The character of the protagonist is also good, especially if she is not a sister. I like it. You can learn from me, the tomato-eating boss. If you don't know how to write the emotional line, don't write it. Just weaken the emotional line and be single-minded. Especially for this kind of fantasy, too much love and love will not be good.

The plot is reasonable and there are no messy women, but the added violence is too deliberate. The front is okay, but the back is just tsk tsk tsk. Drive high and go low.

This book is very good. The protagonist has a younger brother and a happy family. The setting is new and mysterious, especially the ancient martial arts, demon martial arts, and magical martial arts. The supporting characters are not brainless, and are logical and reasonable. The feudal sect looks pretty awesome. Author, when will you update? I rely on phony corpses

The turning point around the hundredth chapter changes from an all-exploding cool novel to a traditional fantasy. The master was the one who could crush the god with one punch, and the protagonist faked his death and escaped, hiding his name. Goldfinger was also directly downgraded, everyone knew it, and at the same time, there were three brothers who cheated on it. I can already imagine that the protagonist will wander all the way, struggle hard, and finally fight to the death with three desperate opponents [laughing and crying]

It's a good novel, the characters are flesh and blood, logical, IQ is on the line, God rewards hard work, author, come on, I'll take good care of you.

Very good subject matter. The one star missing is because there are no ten updates a day [smile]

The quality of Tomato is getting better and better, with top-notch narrative methods and rhythm control. However, it is better to downplay the three views and shaping at certain times. For example, the two chapters 49 and 50 are either/or too extreme. The world is not very beautiful, but it is not that bad either. Don't stay at home all day and have persecution paranoia. For example, the role of the younger brother makes people feel that he is someone who invites trouble, and is very capable of causing trouble, but not very capable of doing things in peace. No other issues.

The writing is very good and realistic. The author has experience and does not perfunctory readers. Judging from the more than 70 chapters so far, the poisonous points are very small and very few. The writing style is average, but the level of detail is far higher than other novels. The author read it after writing it. As for some minor flaws in it, he is a new author after all. Don't put pressure on people by always pushing for updates. Good novels need to be deleted, edited and reviewed repeatedly, and this is not necessarily the author's main business, so everyone should be more tolerant and patient with the author, otherwise you will only see repetitive and brainless shit with highly rated content.

Top cool article. Although I still took the path of planes and infinity in the later period, it didn't make me feel watery, and the transition was quite natural. The disadvantage is that 500 chapters are too few. I feel that this book could have at least 800 chapters. I don't like reading books, so I came across this.

It's quite a novel career setting, and it's not mindless with a little recklessness. It's really the first time I've seen a Yakuza-style novel that adds a little bit of flow and a lot of intelligence. It's the opposite of this. Get away from that guy. He just put all the strength in from the beginning. His body is so strong that it's not a human deformity or perversion. He only increases his physique when he can't stand it. Haha😊 This book is pretty good. He's made him taller and taller, and he's still a handsome guy [laughing]

Not bad, you can also have the taste of the final priesthood

Although the male protagonist is relatively old. But the subject matter and world view are relatively new, and the content is also very interesting. There is also a very exciting anti-routine section, and there are no blocking points. It is quite interesting and worth watching. Highly recommended

Readable, a hundred times better than novels to pass the time At least I didn't have any negative reactions to the protagonist's character and the way he handles things. It's interesting to add dots to the urban background panel and the martial arts gods and demons system. The good news is that it's all sewn together. The protagonist's combat power is indeed improving too fast, and he kills monsters beyond the two major levels. Fury should be weakened next season. The master once again burst out with incomprehensible combat power and killed him instantly. He was a little worried that the combat power system would collapse later.

In terms of body training, this book is the best one I have read. It contains all kinds of weird bodies and forces, but the pace is not particularly fast. It is like a traditional fantasy, giving the protagonist an occasional refreshment. It seems that there is no female protagonist at the moment, but I really hope to have one. After all, I am a solid supporter of single female protagonists, but the female protagonist must have a certain level of strength, and the most annoying wife is the most annoying. However, relationships are more difficult to write, and the risks are too great. Judging from the author's level of this book, it may be better to have no female protagonist. The only drawback is the author's update speed, sometimes one chapter a week. Finally, I wish the author good health and a successful career, so that he can write more words [laughing]

The logic is okay. It cannot be said that there are no poisonous points, it can only be said that they are not obvious. Look at this golden finger, it's not that good but it's not bad either. The current plot is a bit tight, giving people the feeling that the protagonist is being squeezed (but the plot is tight, so the cheating is not obvious); it looks a bit depressing... This is just my objective evaluation from a God's perspective, and it is still worth reading.

Update｡ﾟ(ﾟ´ω`ﾟ)ﾟ｡ When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

This book is very enjoyable to read. Most of the characters are not stupid. Except for the cliché of someone getting in trouble as soon as they get promoted, there are some other flaws but they are definitely not poisonous. The character of the protagonist is becoming more and more exciting now. He has the prototype of the protagonist in the book, especially Coach Feng, who is too domineering. Finally resurrected, good luck to the author

It's very interesting to read, but there are still some shortcomings in reading the full text. For example, the protagonist's strength has been growing, but he is still in the period of strength. There are too many points for the protagonist to improve his strength, such as training, practicing, and adding points. I really can't imagine how high the protagonist's combat power will be when he reaches the realm. Don't lose his combat power. Besides, it wouldn't hurt to improve your realm appropriately, right? One hundred pictures per realm can still be written as seven hundred, right? Come on, it looks good, I hope it gets better and better Another point that comes to mind is that the protagonist needs to know his own strength in time [Sending Hearts]

It's a pretty good book, but the early stage is a bit messy, and the end was hastily finished due to insufficient data. Regarding realm, although the author has explained that realm is not bound to strength, it is still easy to get confused. Then there is the chapter on Fengyun. Since I haven't read it at all, I basically jumped over it quickly. After unfolding multiple worlds, many people in the past gradually faded away, such as Gong Jiu and Feng Lie, who didn't mention it much. But the personal feelings about the cool points are pretty good. So in summary, it is a work that does not hide its flaws.

This book is really good, one of the rare Tomato books, and it has the smell of getting out of here. If the current sense of rhythm can be maintained, this book will definitely become a god.

Very pretty. The theme of professional proficiency is also very good, it does not suppress the protagonist's strength and growth, and the plot is not cliched. It's a bit burning, and it's very refreshing to watch. But why did the protagonist get G? I didn't expect it at all. Looking forward to the next chapters [laughing]

It feels really good. I'm still following up on updates. It's good if the author is more relaxed. There are some minor flaws. However, in Tomato, the flaws are not hidden. The author makes more updates. The mobile phone code is indeed a bit slow. If there are more updates, many flaws will be ignored.

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I have seen that the latest chapter is too little written and not enough to read. This is a very good martial arts novel. The author understands readers very well and has abandoned the poisonous points of water characters in previous novels. I support it with five stars.

It can be regarded as a relatively conventional article for brushing proficiency and upgrading. The writing style is pretty good. Generally speaking, people with this kind of proficiency level usually don't have any blocking points. Because they need to describe daily life, which can satisfy their quality and quantity, so they won't write specifically about blocking points or word count. As for me saying it's regular, it's because I've seen a lot of it. For newcomers, it's pretty amazing.

The writing is okay, but not exciting enough, but I, a twenty-year-old bookworm, can persist in reading it. At least there are no obvious language problems, illiterate mistakes such as inappropriate word choice, no self-reflection that is full of diaosi, and there are some climaxes. The author's level is considered to be qualified, which has surpassed 90% of Tomato authors. It's a pity that the author failed to finish the work due to poor grades.

I just saw Chapter 34 and I feel that it is very well written now. Just don't rush and be steady. One learns a chef, a cook and an ancient martial arts and then a doctor. It's perfect. The matching ancient martial arts cannot be more perfect. It's up to you to overdo it.

I've read Chapter 450, and it's okay so far. It's just that the middle part is a bit complicated. Many worlds are strung together, which is not friendly to those who follow it. Because the style of painting suddenly changes, it's hard to immerse yourself in. Overall, it's okay. If you're not so picky, you can continue reading.

The book is good, but the content is actually just a little bit new. However, this book is the first time I have seen someone become a true biography. It really meets the treatment of a true biography. The protagonists in other books do not teach anything except Kung Fu masters. This book has a person who prepares medicine and a person who protects his family. He only needs to practice the Kung Fu. It is so rare to have a normal IQ [Adored]